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The result was '''delete'''. copyvios are bad and if the article is irredemably bad then deleting and starting again is a well established process. So delete this but specifically encourge the creation of a properly sourced article at this location [[User:Spartaz|Spartaz]] <sup>''[[User talk:Spartaz|Humbug!]]''</sup> 10:20, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
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*<small class="delsort-notice">'''Note''': This debate has been included in the [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Deletion sorting/Environment|list of Environment-related deletion discussions]]. <!--Template:Deletion sorting--></small> <small>-- [[User:Gene93k|• Gene93k]] ([[User talk:Gene93k|talk]]) 17:04, 17 November 2010 (UTC)</small>
*<small class="delsort-notice">'''Note''': This debate has been included in the [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Deletion sorting/Environment|list of Environment-related deletion discussions]]. <!--Template:Deletion sorting--></small> <small>-- [[User:Gene93k|• Gene93k]] ([[User talk:Gene93k|talk]]) 17:04, 17 November 2010 (UTC)</small>
*'''Delete''' (even though I am a [[greenie]]!) per all the above comments. There may be, however, room for a [[Sustainability in the food service industry]] article at some point in the future. -- [[User:Alan Liefting|Alan Liefting]] ([[User_talk:Alan_Liefting|talk]]) - 18:59, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''Delete''' (even though I am a [[greenie]]!) per all the above comments. There may be, however, room for a [[Sustainability in the food service industry]] article at some point in the future. -- [[User:Alan Liefting|Alan Liefting]] ([[User_talk:Alan_Liefting|talk]]) - 18:59, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''Delete''' - This article is mostly a collection of copyright violations. Each citation in the article points to the website from which the content was copied or paraphrased. However, despite copyright violations, the article is about a non-notable intersection of [[Environmentalism]] and [[Restaurant]]. [[User:Snottywong|<span style="font:13px 'Copperplate Gothic Light';border:#AAAACC 1px inset;background-color:#F2F9FA;color=#DD0000">Snotty<font color="#648113">Wong</font></span>]]&nbsp;<sup><small>[[User talk:Snottywong|babble]]</small></sup> 20:17, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''Delete''' - This article is mostly a collection of copyright violations. Each citation in the article points to the website from which the content was copied or paraphrased. However, despite copyright violations, the article is about a non-notable intersection of [[Environmentalism]] and [[Restaurant]]. [[User:Snottywong|<span style="font:13px 'Copperplate Gothic Light';border:#AAAACC 1px inset;background-color:#F2F9FA;color=#DD0000">Snotty<span style="color: #648113;">Wong</span></span>]]&nbsp;<sup><small>[[User talk:Snottywong|babble]]</small></sup> 20:17, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''Keep''' The green restaurant concept is quite notable and I have cited a couple of encyclopedia to demonstrate this. The article title would be better as ''Green restaurant'' per [[WP:SINGULAR]]. Any objections if I move it, as part of the process of clean up and improvement? [[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 12:50, 21 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''Keep''' Before trying to decide if something is notable or not, its best to spend a brief moment clicking on the Google news search at the top of the AFD. Notice that many news sources have covered this concept, they thus notable enough for a Wikipedia article about them. 265 results. Just read through the titles and the summaries and some stand out right away. Like the one from the [[Houston Chronicle]] titled [http://www.chron.com/disp/story.mpl/life/main/6679306.html The Haven of green restaurants]. [[User:Dream Focus | '''<span style="color:blue">D</span><span style="color:green">r</span><span style="color:red">e</span><span style="color:orange">a</span><span style="color:purple">m</span> <span style="color:blue">Focus</span>''']] 17:10, 21 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''Delete:''' <s>[[WP:HOWTO]]</s> [[WP:NOTHOWTO]] guide. <span style="font-family:Antiqua, serif;">''[[User:Hrafn|Hrafn]]<sup>[[User talk:Hrafn|Talk]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Hrafn|Stalk]]</sub>''<sup>('''[[M:Precisionism|P]]''')</sup></span> 18:09, 21 November 2010 (UTC) [link to ''policy'' fixed.... <span style="font-family:Antiqua, serif;">''[[User:Hrafn|Hrafn]]<sup>[[User talk:Hrafn|Talk]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Hrafn|Stalk]]</sub>''<sup>('''[[M:Precisionism|P]]''')</sup></span> 03:24, 22 November 2010 (UTC) ]
:* We expect reasoned and policy-based argument here, please, not [[WP:VAGUEWAVE|vague waves]] to non-policies. [[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 18:48, 21 November 2010 (UTC)
:::[... and tendentious, snarky, [[WP:AGF]]-violative comment laughed at: ''ROFLMAO'', I would have thought it would be perfectly obvious that I did not mean [[:Category:Wikipedia how-to]]. <span style="font-family:Antiqua, serif;">''[[User:Hrafn|Hrafn]]<sup>[[User talk:Hrafn|Talk]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Hrafn|Stalk]]</sub>''<sup>('''[[M:Precisionism|P]]''')</sup></span> 03:24, 22 November 2010 (UTC)]
::::* No, it is not obvious what your hand-waving means. NOTHOWTO is a stylistic point. The same section also says that we shouldn't use academic language or style but we would not delete on that account because it is possible to rewrite to improve the style. In this case, the instructional style seems fairly minor and fixing this is just a matter of copy editing so that the article states the plain facts. There is nothing about the topic which makes it impossible to present in an encyclopedic style and I have cited two encyclopedia to demonstrate this. [[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 06:57, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
:::::*This article is ''pervasively'' a how-to guide. Wikipedia is [[WP:NOT]] a repository for how-to guides. This means that ''this'' article should not be there. It is of course possible to ''write a completely new article in its place''. This however would be [[Bến Tre#Vietnam War|'destroying the village in order to save it']], not [[WP:ARS|'rescuing']] it. WP:NOTHOWTO is part of [[WP:NOT]] and thus ''P-O-L-I-C-Y!'' I know that many inclusionists like to pretend that the only part of WP:NOT that exists is WP:NOTPAPER, but it does contain other ''policy'' content. <span style="font-family:Antiqua, serif;">''[[User:Hrafn|Hrafn]]<sup>[[User talk:Hrafn|Talk]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Hrafn|Stalk]]</sub>''<sup>('''[[M:Precisionism|P]]''')</sup></span> 07:46, 22 November 2010 (UTC)

* '''Sources''' Here are a selection of sources for this topic:
:#{{citation |author=B. Lorenzini, B |year=1994 |title=The green restaurant |journal=Restaurant & Institutions |volume=104 |issue=11 |pages=119-36}}
:#{{citation |title=The Dynamics of Green Restaurant Patronage |author1=Hsin-Hui Hu |author2=H.G. Parsa |author3=John Self |journal=Cornell Hospitality Quarterly |date=August 2010 |volume=51 |number=3 |pages=344-362 |doi=10.1177/1938965510370564}}
:#{{citation |author=J. Carbonara |year=2007 |title=Foodservice goes green |journal=Foodservice Equipment and Supplies |volume=60 |issue=9 |pages=48-54}}
:#{{citation |author=E. Elan |title=Chains growing green efforts despite economy |journal=Nation’s Restaurant News |date= 18 February 2009}}
:#{{citation |author=B. Horovitz |date=19 May 2008 |title=Can restaurants go green? |journal=USA Today |url=http://www.usatoday.com/money/industries/environment/2008-05-15-green-restaurants-eco-friendly_N.htm}}
::[[User:Colonel Warden|Colonel Warden]] ([[User talk:Colonel Warden|talk]]) 18:48, 21 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''notable topic disguised by crap article''': Nomination should not be as to notability, because you can't just assume ''topic'' isn't notable. This nom is deja vu of [[Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Amish furniture]] in that respect, marketing copy ruining a topic that has been the subject of coverage. I propose stubbing this and merging [[Green Restaurant Certification]] into it. I would do it now but don't want to get everyone going crazy like happened in [[Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Aircraft design]]--'''[[User:Milowent|Milowent]]''' • <small><sup style="position:relative">[[User talk:Milowent|talk]]<span style="position:relative;bottom:-2.0ex;left:-3.2ex;*left:-5.5ex;">[[Wikipedia:Unreferenced BLP Rescue|blp-r]]</span></sup></small> 19:21, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
::I agree that deleting everything except the lead would improve this article immensely. Most everything below the lead is either a blatant copyvio or a very close paraphrase. [[User:Snottywong|<span style="font:13px 'Copperplate Gothic Light';border:#AAAACC 1px inset;background-color:#F2F9FA;color=#25900D">Snotty<span style="color: #225DC8;">Wong</span></span>]]&nbsp;<sup><small>[[User talk:Snottywong|speak]]</small></sup> 21:43, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''Keep''' as a notable topic, but eliminate a lot of duplicate information with a summary of, and section hatnote to [[Green building]]. It needs a major copyedit into an encyclopedic voice ("It's no secret that..." Really?), eliminate the external spam links found in the body text, summarize any information already in other articles that is not specific to restaurants, and we might have a useful article. '''[[User:JimMillerJr|<span style="color:green">Jim Miller</span>]]''' <sup> [[Special:Contributions/JimMillerJr|See me]] | [[User talk:JimMillerJr|Touch me]]</sup> 21:27, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
* '''Delete''' Sorry, but I just glanced through this article and it is horrendous. Without even considering the copyright problems, the writing is atrocious. Any individual sentence could probably be fixed, but the hours it would take to improve this article might well be better spent starting from scratch. "The more obvious way of illuminating you restaurant is the sun." Seriously?--<span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:15px;">[[User:Sphilbrick|<span style="background:#002868;color:#fff;padding:0 4px">SPhilbrick</span>]][[User talk:Sphilbrick|<span style="background:#ADD8E6;padding:0 4px;color:#fff;">T</span>]]</span> 23:41, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
*'''Delete'''. As was argued above, the topic in its own right might well be notable--there's even an association of green restaurants (dinegreen.com). But the article IS atrocious, no doubt about that--a combination of a manual and a bunch of synthesis. And how to improve this? A clean slate is best, though if someone walks by with a blunt ax and prunes it (and then keeps an eye on it) I would be happy as well. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 01:58, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
*Keep, out in California green restaurants have been making news for years. Chez Panisse is a god example of teaching communities to be more organic and self-sustainnig. The article need better writing though. <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Blldggr|Blldggr]] ([[User talk:Blldggr|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Blldggr|contribs]]) 03:19, 24 November 2010 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
*'''Comment''' The topic is obviously notable. The big problem is the copyvio/plagiarism issue. If that has been fixed, the article should be kept and improved. If it hasn't been fixed, then I could go either way on this; either keep and fix, or burn to the ground and rebuild. [[User:Cardamon|Cardamon]] ([[User talk:Cardamon|talk]]) 20:49, 24 November 2010 (UTC)
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