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== The "prophet Muhammad" (lowercase 'p') ==
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[[User:UrielAcosta|UrielAcosta]] seems to be on a mission, systematically searching through Wikipedia to find "[p]rophet Muhammad" and remove the word "prophet" (even if it's in lowercase), with the edit summary: {{tq|Removed religious bias per [[MOS:PBUH]] because [[WP:NPOV|he's not Wikipedia's prophet]].}}
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I and other editors have queried these edits on [[User talk:UrielAcosta|UrielAcosta's talk page]], but UrielAcosta disagreed and soon after, s/he deleted the talk page entries, and continued to make these mass edits.
== Funeral articles, "Reaction" sections ==


My mild objection, as a non-Muslim, is that "prophet" (lowercase 'p') is descriptive and informative, and is in accordance with MOS, so when the word "prophet" has been removed, I've instead re-added it as "[[Islamic]] prophet [[Muhammad]]" (for greater clarity). To me, this is no different than referring to "the novelist [[Doris Lessing]]", or "the British politician [[Rishi Sunak]]".
WP is not a memorial site. That applies to regular folk, as described at [[WP:NOTMEMORIAL]]. But it also applies to the famous and powerful. [[WP:NPOV]] is a core policy, and it requires including all significant points of view. There are a number of "funeral" articles which look fine to me:
*[[Death and state funeral of Ronald Reagan]]
*[[Michael Jackson memorial service]]
*[[Funeral of Diana, Princess of Wales]]
*[[State funeral of John F. Kennedy]]
However there is also a set which include "Reaction" sections:
*[[Death and funeral of Corazon Aquino#Reaction]]
*[[Death and funeral of Otto von Habsburg#Reaction]]
These sections comprise excerpts from condolences and eulogistic comments sent by world dignitaries. I think they're a bad idea. One cannot expect honest assessments of a person in remarks of this kind, so these sections are really just collections of nice quotations about the deceased. We wouldn't allow material like this in a biography. Perhaps they should be moved to Wikiquote and summarized collectively, something like "The subject was praised in comments sent by leaders from around the world, including..." Maybe quote one or two, briefly. Thoughts? &nbsp; <b>[[User:Will Beback|<font color="#595454">Will Beback</font>]]&nbsp; [[User talk:Will Beback|<font color="#C0C0C0">talk</font>]]&nbsp; </b> 10:38, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
:The Habsburg one seems to meet notability standards on its own - the Aquino one is more problematic. In neither case, however, does NPOV seem to be an issue, however. Try AfD on the Aquino one and see how it fares, I suppose. Cheers. [[User:Collect|Collect]] ([[User talk:Collect|talk]]) 11:31, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
::I wasn't suggesting deleting the articles, only minimizing the "Reaction" sections because they violation NPOV, hence this noticeboard. The sections are basically eulogies for the subjects, and that doesn't seem NPOV. I don't object to articles about the events surrounding the funerals, just these sections. &nbsp; <b>[[User:Will Beback|<font color="#595454">Will Beback</font>]]&nbsp; [[User talk:Will Beback|<font color="#C0C0C0">talk</font>]]&nbsp; </b> 12:04, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
:::I completely agree with you. The sections are ver the top and unencyclopedic. When a head of state or former head of state dies, other heads of state send messages. The most that is needed is a brief "Among those sending condolences were...". Very few funerals need a separate article, only if there is something remarkable about the death or funeral that leads to substantial coverage. Diana, of course, Michael Jackson, of course. The US presidents. Elvis? Churchill? Those sorts of cases, not others. [[User:Itsmejudith|Itsmejudith]] ([[User talk:Itsmejudith|talk]]) 13:18, 12 July 2011 (UTC)


[[MOS:MUHAMMAD]] actually says this: {{tq|recommended action is to simplify and NPOV to just "Muhammad" except when it is the first reference in an article, or the first reference in the lead, in which case it may be rendered as "the Islamic prophet Muhammad" if necessary.}}
I fail to see what's wrong with reporting widely publicized reactions from heads of state and similar, which also seems to be a long standing practice. Also, reaction sections don't have to be merely positive, but that, of course, depends on the reactions. In some cases, many negative reactions can be found as well. As pointed out, this kind of articles are reserved for a very limited number of cases, where there is something special about the death/funeral that leads to substantial coverage (e.g., hundreds or thousands of media reports on the funeral, closing down central Vienna, half of Europe's royals attending etc.). Essentially, it's the same kind of article as [[Wedding of Albert II, Prince of Monaco, and Charlene Wittstock]] in many ways, i.e. an article based on a major (media) event. As long as all significant views reported by reliable sources are included, there is no NPOV problem in my opinion. [[User:Mocctur|Mocctur]] ([[User talk:Mocctur|talk]]) 10:19, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
::The wedding article you cite does not include a similar "reactions" section, which is part we're talking about. If it did include comments from well-wishers then it might have a similar problem. I don't see how this represents a 'long standing practice, since only two articles that I've seen have this kind of eulogy section, and one of them is brand new. Further, many of these comments do not appear to be "widely publicized" at all, and are cited to the websites of the well-wishers, rather than to secondary sources. This complain is not about full coverage of the funeral, just the lengthy list of positive comments. We can wait until the funeral is over, but then I think we need to summarize the comments much more briefly. &nbsp; <b>[[User:Will Beback|<font color="#595454">Will Beback</font>]]&nbsp; [[User talk:Will Beback|<font color="#C0C0C0">talk</font>]]&nbsp; </b> 23:06, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
:::I agree. The reaction to a funeral is almost sure to run afoul of [[WP:NPOV]]. I think the expressed sentiments are almost obligatory and they tend to be gushy and flowery as opposed to concise. While reliably sourced I don't think most of the expressions make for notable quotations, therefore I think an editorial decision should be made to curtail the inclusion of them. [[User:Bus stop|Bus stop]] ([[User talk:Bus stop|talk]]) 23:42, 14 July 2011 (UTC)


I'd appreciate the input of other editors here, please. Thanks. <b>[[User:Esowteric|<span style="color: green;">Esowteric</span>]]<small> + [[User talk:Esowteric|<span style="color: blue;">Talk</span>]] + [[Special:Contributions/Esowteric|<span style="color: red;">Breadcrumbs</span>]]</small></b> 09:20, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
"Only two articles"? On the contrary, it's a long standing practice: Even separate articles ''only'' containing reactions exist:
*Pertinent discussions held on this subject with UrielAcosta] are[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:UrielAcosta&oldid=1219071758#%22the_prophet%22 here] and [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:UrielAcosta&oldid=1219071758#Disambiguating_Muhammad here]. I addressed the rationale "because he's not Wikipedia's prophet" by observing {{tq|Pablo Escobar is not Wikipedia's drug lord, but it wouldn't be wrong to write of somebody, "It was on his trip to Panama that he became acquainted with drug lord Pablo Escobar."}}. Their bizarre response: {{tq|... you are 100% incorrect: Pablo Escobar IS Wikipedia's drug lord, because "drug lord" has a specific definition in English and Escobar qualifies under that definition.}} I mean, huh? (Have you ever heard Escobar described as "Wikipedia's drug lord"?) Then I pointed out that [[WP:PBUH]] explicitly provides for the usage that they've been obliterating, distinguishing ''honoring'' someone from merely ''identifying'' them in context on first mention, and it fell on deaf ears. When I saw that UrielAcosta had taken this campaign up again with vigor after having been reproved by at least three people, I was ready to report them to [[WP:ANI]] or somewhere, so I thank [[User:Esowteric]] for raising it here. [[User:Largoplazo|Largoplazo]] ([[User talk:Largoplazo|talk]]) 11:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*[[Reaction to the death of Robert Byrd]] (only positive reactions)
* Relevant discussion: [[Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Islam-related articles#NPOV usage of "the prophet Muhammad" or "the prophet"]] [[User:Some1|Some1]] ([[User talk:Some1|talk]]) 11:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*[[Reactions to the death of Osama bin Laden]] (mostly containing negative reactions from people opposed to the subject; "crowds gathered spontaneously to celebrate", "this momentous achievement marks a victory for America, for people who seek peace around the world, and for all those who lost loved ones on September 11, 2001" etc. etc. etc.)
*{{tq|I've instead re-added it as "Islamic prophet Muhammad" (for greater clarity).}} Did UrielAcosta revert these edits (by removing "Islamic prophet")? If they did, then that would be against what [[MOS:PBUH]] recommends (i.e. adding "the Islamic prophet" if necessary for clarity purposes). If they didn't revert, then they're just following what [[MOS:PBUH]] recommends. [[User:Some1|Some1]] ([[User talk:Some1|talk]]) 12:14, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*[[Reaction to the assassination of John F. Kennedy]] ("Men and women wept openly")
*:No, they changed "prophet Muhammed" to "Muhammed", but left alone my later changes to "Islamic prophet Muhammed". However, they did this to the first (or only) mention of the name Muhammed in the two articles that were on my watchlist that were affected. <b>[[User:Esowteric|<span style="color: green;">Esowteric</span>]]<small> + [[User talk:Esowteric|<span style="color: blue;">Talk</span>]] + [[Special:Contributions/Esowteric|<span style="color: red;">Breadcrumbs</span>]]</small></b> 12:19, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*[[International reaction to the assassination of Benazir Bhutto]] (only positive reactions (i.e., not critical of her) as far as I can tell)
*:The only reason I bring this up is that these are mass edits, so a whole lot of people may either not notice the changes or choose to change the entries to "the prophet Muhammad", when they could either be left alone or the passionate editor could make the changes themselves and avoid work for others. <b>[[User:Esowteric|<span style="color: green;">Esowteric</span>]]<small> + [[User talk:Esowteric|<span style="color: blue;">Talk</span>]] + [[Special:Contributions/Esowteric|<span style="color: red;">Breadcrumbs</span>]]</small></b> 12:22, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*[[International_reaction_to_the_assassination_of_Anna_Politkovskaya#Official_statements_by_governments]]
*I don’t agree with the removal of “prophet” for the first usage of Muhammad in an article because the MOS clearly allows for the usage in that case. That being said, I don’t think it’s necessary to go back and add it to articles where it was removed. I don’t agree that “[[Muhammad]]” (with the wikilink) would cause confusion to the reader. [[User:Mokadoshi|Mokadoshi]] ([[User talk:Mokadoshi|talk]]) 12:16, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*:Thanks, but how many Wikipedia articles would simply name [[Rishi Sunak]] because users could easily click on the link to find out who he is or what he is, when it is far simpler and more informative to refer to them in the first instance as (say) British Prime Minister Rishi Sunak? <b>[[User:Esowteric|<span style="color: green;">Esowteric</span>]]<small> + [[User talk:Esowteric|<span style="color: blue;">Talk</span>]] + [[Special:Contributions/Esowteric|<span style="color: red;">Breadcrumbs</span>]]</small></b> 12:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*::I don’t think specifying “British Prime Minister” is necessary every time. In some cases it is helpful, like the usage of “Senator Obama” verses “President Obama” can clarify the period of his career when an event occurred. I don’t think it’s an appropriate comparison to this case. Probably a better comparison would be “author [[J.K. Rowling]]” verses just “[[J.K. Rowling]]” and the former seems to be rare. [[User:Mokadoshi|Mokadoshi]] ([[User talk:Mokadoshi|talk]]) 13:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*I've been asked to give my two pennies worth on this matter as I was made aware of Uriel Costa's editing on [[Bust of Abd al-Rahman III, Cadrete]], a page I had created. I did not know, but I was barely surprised, that Uriel Costa then went on to make the same edit on a variety of other pages. This is my view on the matter:{{pb}}The page I saw related to a Muslim monarch. Monarchs are known by their given name. Removing "prophet" before Muhammad could be confusing as many monarchs, including in Islamic Spain where I was writing about, were also called Muhammad.{{pb}}I just put "prophet" as a disambiguator. I think it's quite clear in the context we were not talking about a prophet of the Mormons. Uriel Costa removed this completely, he did not even negotiate by saying "Islamic prophet".{{pb}}You could say that the majority of the world does not see Muhammad as a prophet, nor has any human been peer-reviewed to be a prophet. But at the same time, we have the page at [[Guru Nanak]] when the majority of the world has probably not even heard of him, and no independent study has proven that he had more spiritual wisdom than anyone else in the world. The term Pope comes from "father" and the majority of the world does not see him that way, but we still title the page [[Pope Francis]].{{pb}}My previous edit was not endorsing Islam, a religion I do not follow, and instead of making it more specific, getting rid of "prophet" completely made it less specific. [[User:Unknown Temptation|Unknown Temptation]] ([[User talk:Unknown Temptation|talk]]) 16:14, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*:"Pope" clearly means that he has a particular role in the Catholic church. Similarly for other examples given. Simply "prophet" is an assertion in the voice of Wikipedia which a majority of people would disagree with. "Islamic prophet" implicitly says that Islam considers him to have that status/role/capability. Sincerely, <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> ([[User talk:North8000#top|talk]]) 16:30, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*The problem we are having here is that in those cases when it is necessary or even simply better to clarify (this often depends on context and background knowledge of subject matter), UrielAcosta is still systematically removing it based on a literal reading of [[MOS:PBUH]], to the point of edit warring over it, without engaging in substantial discussion.{{pb}}An example of where mentioning "prophet" was ''better'' because of subject matter context is [[Talk:Ghulat#Use_of_"the_prophet_Muhhamad"_and_scare_quotes_for_"exaggerated"|here]], an example of where it was ''necessary'' to disambiguate from other Muhammads named in the article [[Talk:Al-Mufaddal_ibn_Umar_al-Ju'fi#Disambiguating_Muhammad|here]] (cf. [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Al-Mufaddal_ibn_Umar_al-Ju%27fi&diff=prev&oldid=1218735637]).{{pb}}In my mind, because the problem is an overly literal reading, the solution to this is to update [[MOS:PBUH]] and have it explicitly allow "the prophet Muhammad" in cases where it is needed for disambiguation or clarification. My [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Manual_of_Style/Islam-related_articles&oldid=1194874051#NPOV_usage_of_%22the_prophet_Muhammad%22_or_%22the_prophet%22 own proposal] to simply always allow it (because all relevant RS are in fact using it constantly and casually) was perhaps too ambitious, but simply instating {{u|Some1}}'s counterproposal [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Manual_of_Style/Islam-related_articles&diff=prev&oldid=1176735432 here] would already solve a lot of the issues (Some1's proposal, but adjusted to lowercase 'prophet'):{{pb}}{{tqb|'''(The) Holy Prophet''' in place of, or preceding, "[[Muhammad]]" — '''''recommended action is to use just "Muhammad"''''' except when it is the first reference in an article, or the first reference in the lead, in which case it may be rendered as "the [[Islamic]] prophet [[Muhammad]]" if necessary. In cases where ambiguity or confusion exists, the "prophet Muhammad" or "the prophet" may be used as a variation on "Muhammad".}}{{pb}}Regards, <span style="text-shadow:#000 0em 0em 1em">☿&nbsp;[[User:Apaugasma|<span style="color:#6a0dad">Apaugasma</span>]] ([[User talk:Apaugasma|<span style="color:#000">talk</span>]]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Apaugasma|☉]])</span> 16:32, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*:Re "overly literal reading"{{emdash}}except for the part about continuing to ignore {{tq|except when it is the first reference in an article, or the first reference in the lead, in which case it may be rendered as "the Islamic prophet Muhammad" if necessary}} even when it's pointed out to them point-blank. The reason Muhammad gets his own provision in the first place is because of a matter very specific to him: the practice of some people of writing "PBUH" after every use of his name, and referring to him as "the Prophet Muhammad" or even just "the Prophet" on ''every'' occasion. There's nothing about the provision that suggests that Muhammad is ''less'' deserving than anyone else in history of being introduced in a text in the way that people are very commonly introduced, by the use of context. If anyone's being non-neutral, it's UrielAcosta, for deeming Muhammad not to deserve to be identified in such a manner. [[User:Largoplazo|Largoplazo]] ([[User talk:Largoplazo|talk]]) 16:46, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*::I agree that they are deliberately ignoring the part of the MOS that they don't seem to agree with. Their {{tq|[[WP:NPOV|he's not Wikipedia's prophet]]|q=yes}} breaks the very policy that they are citing as an excuse to expunge the word from every article. [[User:M.Bitton|M.Bitton]] ([[User talk:M.Bitton|talk]]) 16:53, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*The changes en masse by UrielAcosta are unhelpful at best as they needlessly create a lot of work for others. [[User:M.Bitton|M.Bitton]] ([[User talk:M.Bitton|talk]]) 16:37, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
*:I'm in agreement with the responses expressed by @[[User:M.Bitton|M.Bitton]], @[[User:Largoplazo|Largoplazo]], and @[[User:Apaugasma|Apaugasma]]. It's evident that there's an issue of overzealous editing on the part of UrielAcosta. As others have noted, even in cases where, for purely practical reasons as MOS allows, it was better to leave a term rather than removing it. I would encourage @[[User:UrielAcosta|UrielAcosta]] to take a breather and once again go through [[WP:5P5]], if it might provide a newfound sense of direction and clarity. [[User:StarkReport|StarkReport]] ([[User talk:StarkReport|talk]]) 16:54, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
*We had this one at [[Regency of Algiers]] also. I am not certain if UrielAcosta realizes just how many people can be named Mohammed in an article that covers 400 years of North African history, but this was righteously reverted by the article's primary author. I urge UrielAcosta to get a grip and find another mission. [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 05:57, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
:::This is the place where we refer to the Islamic prophet Mohammed. I believe that before Uriel Acosta came along it possibly said the Prophet Mohammed, This may be slightly better but seems like a really silly thing to spend time on, like arguing about whether Joan of Arc's visions were real. The thing to do is report the claim without endorsing, it, yes? [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Regency_of_Algiers#Tribal_aristocracy] {{tq|The sharifs were a religious nobility who claimed descent from the Islamic prophet Muhammad, and often members of the Naqib al-ashraf institution of the Ottoman Empire.[405]}} I spent a LOT of time on this section and made zero claims about Mohammed in wikivoice. I am not real upset about this either way but I consider myself an interested party and I oppose a mandatory naked Mohammed. Please ping me if this escalates. Going on a rampage about the word prophet is bigotry to my mind, just like it would be to insist on a disclaimer in an article about the visions of Joan of Arc or the incarnations of Vishnu.
:::This is merely what some people believe or believed at some point, period, end of story, and I submit that it is neither possible nor desirable to explain a religious dynasty whose power stemmed from its claim of descent from the prophet Mohammed without mentioning the prophet Mohammed. If some people feel that we need to specify that he was an Islamic prophet rather than a Hindu or an Buddhist or a Catholic prophet, ok fine, whatever.
:::Btw, ctl-f finds 21 instances of "Mohammed" in that article, a few of whom are mentioned more than once, and at least one of whom is the author of a reference. I think a serious count would give use ten or eleven men named Mohammed plus some honorific. [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 10:23, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
:I fail to see why uses of the word ''prophet [Name]'' should be considered improper or require editing out when talking about a figure (notwithstanding their historicity) identified by a sufficiently significant amount of people as a prophet of their religion, creed, or belief system — especially, if it serves purposes of disambiguation. And I disagree with @[[User:North8000|North8000]]′s assessment of a distinct treatment of the epithets ''pope'' and ''prophet'', since both are similar religious positions, claiming to form a bridge between the divine and humankind. The position of pope is as limited and debated among Christian creeds as the question of “Who is the real, final, ultimate prophet?” is in various branches of Islam. [[User:Konanen|Konanen]] ([[User talk:Konanen|talk]]) 15:03, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
::Shooks, I did not intend this to be a reply to @[[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]], sorry. [[User:Konanen|Konanen]] ([[User talk:Konanen|talk]]) 15:03, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
::Respectfully, IMO your argument against my point has flaws. The widespread meaning of "Pope" is a particular position in the catholic church. Saying "Pope" in the voice of Wikipedia means that they hold that role in the Catholic church. The claim in the voice of Wikipedia does not go any further than that. An atheist can take it to mean only that. An unattributed statement in the voice of Wikipeda that someone is a prophet is a statement in the voice of Wikipedia goes far beyond just saying that they have a particular role in a a particular religion. Simple attribution of the statement to Islam solves all of that. Sincerely, <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> ([[User talk:North8000#top|talk]]) 23:35, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
:::For statements like "[[Joshua]] was a prophet who [...]" or "when the prophet [[Muhammad]] came to Mecca [...]", if the implication of the statement is 'hey, this ''is'' the prophet of God, so better listen to him', then it's obviously religiously non-neutral and problematic. If the implication of the statement is 'this figure is ''considered'' a prophet in the religion(s) we are talking about in this context', then it's perfectly fine. Not only perfectly fine, but also often ''necessary'', because the status of these figures as prophets is often an important part of the encyclopedic information we are trying to convey. The current restrictions in [[MOS:MUHAMMAD]] often make this difficult or impossible. Readers are intelligent enough to pick out the intended implication, they don't need the current censorship to get that we are ''not'' declaring these figures to be actual prophets in wiki-voice, nor are the relevant RS who are ''all of them'' (the challenge [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Manual_of_Style/Islam-related_articles&oldid=1222054166#Evidence_of_usage_in_RS made here] to find an exception still stands) routinely referring to Muhammad as "the prophet" or "the prophet Muhammad". <span style="text-shadow:#000 0em 0em 1em">☿&nbsp;[[User:Apaugasma|<span style="color:#6a0dad">Apaugasma</span>]] ([[User talk:Apaugasma|<span style="color:#000">talk</span>]]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Apaugasma|☉]])</span> 12:32, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
::::{{Ping|Apaugasma}}You made a good point there which I think is that these are often obviously (just) statements by Islam rather than statements by / in the voice of Wikipedia. <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> ([[User talk:North8000#top|talk]]) 16:17, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Removing "The Prophet" in this way appears to be agenda driven. I am not a Muslim and I see no issue with the phrase being "The Prophet Muhammed" being used when it is referencing the founder of Islam [[User:Elmmapleoakpine|Elmmapleoakpine]] ([[User talk:Elmmapleoakpine|talk]]) 15:23, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
:As noted above, I'm in agreement with inclusion of the word but, used in this way, "prophet" is a common noun and shouldn't be capitalized. [[User:Largoplazo|Largoplazo]] ([[User talk:Largoplazo|talk]]) 19:27, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
::I agree. "The prophet Mohammed" is ok but "The Prophet Mohammed" runs afoul of [[MOS:MUHAMMAD]] specifically and more broadly [[MOS:HONORIFIC]]. In fact it would be better to say '''"the Islamic prophet Mohammed"''' and that is what the guidance says: {{tq|except when it is the first reference in an article, or the first reference in the lead, in which case it may be rendered as "the Islamic prophet Muhammad" if necessary.}} If this were equivalent to "The Pope" it would be phrased just as "The Prophet" when obviously Mohammed doesn't occupy the proper noun of "The Prophet" in English. [[User:DIYeditor|—DIYeditor]] ([[User talk:DIYeditor|talk]]) 00:38, 30 May 2024 (UTC)


== [[Rent control in the United States]] and [[Rent regulation]] pages ==
Reaction sections are ''also'' common in biographical articles where no separate article on the death exist:
*[[Tim Russert]] ("had a love of public service")
*[[Levy_Mwanawasa#International_reactions]]
*[[Salmaan_Taseer#Reactions]]


There is a long-standing dispute over pages [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rent_control_in_the_United_States] and [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rent_regulation].
And of course, other reaction sections in death/funeral articles exist:
*[[Death_and_state_funeral_of_Néstor_Kirchner#Reactions]]


The dispute concerns the following statement: ‘There is a consensus among economists that rent control reduces the quality and quantity of rental housing units’.
I'm sure many, many more can be found. When the average person dies, there are no reactions from a long list of heads of state and the Pope. Documenting these reactions in the few exceptional cases where the death is a major issue (especially those deaths/funerals worthy of their own articles) is of historical and encyclopedic relevance, and something the readers will find interesting. Removing reactions would require the removal of lots of material in many articles and the deletion of several articles including the Osama bin Laden one with negative reactions and the Benazir Bhutto with positive ones (if neutrality really was an issue (I don't think it is), the Osama bin Laden reactions article would be the really problematic one). Numerous editors have probably spent hundreds of hours writing these articles/sections, based on this being common and accepted practice. ("reaction(s)" seems to be an extremely common heading in articles, so this way of organising articles is very widespread).


The statement was added by Snooganssnoogans on 24 December 2020 at 14:54, without prior discussion on the talk page.[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Rent_control_in_the_United_States&diff=996099803&oldid=993693646]
The Habsburg article you mention does not only contain completely positive reactions. It also contains reactions from a party (the ruling one) which was extremely critical of the subject for decades (the relationship between the state and the (exiled) subject of the article had even provoked a political crisis in the 60s[http://www.parlament.gv.at/ZUSD/PDF/Die_Habsburg-Krise.pdf][http://www.guardian.co.uk/world/2011/jul/04/otto-von-habsburg-obituary]). The article as such also contains criticism of the extensive state involvement in ceremonies. The reaction by the chancellor only emphasises that the subject's life reflects "the great turning points of the Austrian and European history". These somewhat more reconciling, but not overwhelmingly positive, reactions by the Austrian government, are historically significant, which has also been the subject of media commentary. [[User:Mocctur|Mocctur]] ([[User talk:Mocctur|talk]]) 11:57, 15 July 2011 (UTC)


Several editors have shown opposition and/or raised concerns about the veracity and/or neutrality of such statement and/or the sources provided, as can be seen in the talk pages [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Rent_control_in_the_United_States] and [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Rent_regulation], evidencing that there is no consensus among editors on the content of the page.
::Thanks for finding those additional examples. I am very concerned about the "Reaction" articles. Wikipedia is not a quote farm, so any article or long section that's mostly composed of quotations is inappropriate. If properly sources, those quotations should be moved to Wikiquote. &nbsp; <b>[[User:Will Beback|<font color="#595454">Will Beback</font>]]&nbsp; [[User talk:Will Beback|<font color="#C0C0C0">talk</font>]]&nbsp; </b> 04:41, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
::::Nope = Wikiquote is made up of quotes by author, ''not quotes by event''. Putting these sections over there is a classic case of "round peg into square hole". Cheers. [[User:Collect|Collect]] ([[User talk:Collect|talk]]) 15:02, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::The articles I've seen there include quotes both by and about individuals. These quotes we're talking about aren't about the funerals, they're about the deceased. &nbsp; <b>[[User:Will Beback|<font color="#595454">Will Beback</font>]]&nbsp; [[User talk:Will Beback|<font color="#C0C0C0">talk</font>]]&nbsp; </b> 20:25, 16 July 2011 (UTC)


Several users act as custodians of this page, systematically deleting references to indexed scientific articles, or reverting edits by users contrary to their views (e.g. this scientific reference [https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0166046223000510], was deleted here [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Rent_regulation&diff=prev&oldid=1208728927]).
:::While the reactions only articles mostly consist of quotes, they also include descriptive text. In the death/funeral articles, the quotes do not make up the majority of the text. The material fits in naturally in these articles, and I don't think moving it to Wikiquote, taken out of its original context, would be ideal, neither for the material itself nor for Wikiquote. I also don't think the larger issue of reactions articles, sections and materials is really a matter of neutrality. [[User:Mocctur|Mocctur]] ([[User talk:Mocctur|talk]]) 14:12, 16 July 2011 (UTC) 
::::The descriptive text isn't the problem, it's the quotes. &nbsp; <b>[[User:Will Beback|<font color="#595454">Will Beback</font>]]&nbsp; [[User talk:Will Beback|<font color="#C0C0C0">talk</font>]]&nbsp; </b> 20:25, 16 July 2011 (UTC)


Several users have been targeted and banned by editors who oversee the site, accused of vandalism by those who uphold an statement that was unexpectedly added to the article without previous discussion in the talk page.
== One sided opinion of Admin and user Sitush and Matthews on the page [[Kurmi]] ==


It appears that the sentence lacks the required consensus and does not seem to adhere to a neutral point of view.
Admins are not ready to accept any POV and reliable sources other than what is state by the above two users.


[[Special:Contributions/139.47.66.252|139.47.66.252]] ([[User talk:139.47.66.252|talk]]) 22:06, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
One of the admins already accepted that he doesn't know anything about the claim that being OBC means Kurmis are Shurda or not. But still he believes that any edit done by the above users is valid. While so many reliable sources have been cited to show that Kurmis are not Shudra. Still none of the admin believe these sources. Every admin especially


:Courtesy links:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Qwyrxian
:* {{la|Rent regulation}}
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Boing!_said_Zebedee
:* {{la|Rent control in the United States}}
and
:* 2021 NPOVN discussion with formal closure about both articles at {{slink|Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view/Noticeboard/Archive_89#Rent_control:_"on_consensus_among_economists"}}
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SpacemanSpiff
:* 2019 RfC at {{slink|Talk:Rent_regulation/Archive_1#RfC_about_describing_extent_of_disagreement}}
:* After that RfC, most discussion about "Rent regulation" is on its talk page proper.
:* "Rent control in the United States" discussions begin at {{slink|Talk:Rent_control_in_the_United_States/Archive_1#A_Philosophical_Reminder}}.
:* The discussion on Talk:Rent control in the United States itself is from 2022 with the exception of one comment.
:[[User:Rotideypoc41352|Rotideypoc41352]] ([[User talk:Rotideypoc41352|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contribs/Rotideypoc41352|contribs]]) 04:22, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
::The 2021 NPOVN closure does not appear to reflect any consensus. It explicitly states that the statement in question should be replaced or rephrased, and no such correction has been made or allowed since. [[Special:Contributions/139.47.66.252|139.47.66.252]] ([[User talk:139.47.66.252|talk]]) 11:57, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
:This is not so much 'a long-standing dispute' as a single IP-hopping editor who periodically shows up to attempt to blank parts of the article and make repetitive arguments and/or personal attacks on the talk pages. [[Talk:Rent regulation]] had to be semi protected because of this a few months ago. They have gotten many, many responses on the relevant talk pages, but the [[WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT]] continues nonetheless. [[User:MrOllie|MrOllie]] ([[User talk:MrOllie|talk]]) 12:16, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
::PS: This IP is almost certainly {{user|Pedrote112}} evading their block again. [[User:MrOllie|MrOllie]] ([[User talk:MrOllie|talk]]) 12:54, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
:::Is this yet another attack by this user on anyone who does not think like him/her in order to prevent the article from being reviewed? [[Special:Contributions/139.47.66.252|139.47.66.252]] ([[User talk:139.47.66.252|talk]]) 15:17, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
:I don't see problems here. [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Rent_regulation&diff=prev&oldid=1208728927#Economists'_views This removal] seems justified, if it's an individual study it should be added to the body of the article and not to the lede, unless it's super-transformational and has overturned the scientific consensus, which I doubt. [[User:Alaexis|Alaexis]]<sub>[[User_talk:Alaexis|¿question?]]</sub> 20:54, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
:::What scientific consensus? There is neither scientific consensus nor consensus among editors. Why do you consider it legitimate to withdraw this scientific article and other articles that have been cited on the talk page?[[Special:Contributions/88.12.251.41|88.12.251.41]] ([[User talk:88.12.251.41|talk]]) 15:01, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
::::The consensus documented in the cited sources. Pretending that those sources don't exist isn't going to work. Nor will you be able to undermine them by citing minority viewpoints or individual data points. [[User:MrOllie|MrOllie]] ([[User talk:MrOllie|talk]]) 01:45, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
:The statement as presented is implicit OR. It implies that the purpose of rent control was to increase the quality and quantity of rental units, and therefore the policy was a failure.
:To provide an example, the average cost of a one bedroom apartment in Toronto, where new buildings are not subject to rent control, is CAD2,513. But many tenants are paying half that or less because of rent control for the same or greater square footage. Not many of them are moving to new units that offer newer stoves and refrigerators. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 02:17, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
:[[User:Snooganssnoogans|Snooganssnoogans]], I wonder if you could comment on this. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 02:30, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
::The statement is yours, you added it without prior discussion in the talk page. You are the one that has to gain a consensus that doesn't exist. [[Special:Contributions/2A02:9130:9435:1805:DDDA:5696:E2AD:B4F7|2A02:9130:9435:1805:DDDA:5696:E2AD:B4F7]] ([[User talk:2A02:9130:9435:1805:DDDA:5696:E2AD:B4F7|talk]]) 12:07, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::The statement was added by [[User:Snooganssnoogans|Snooganssnoogans]] without any previous discussion in the talk page. [[Special:Contributions/88.12.251.41|88.12.251.41]] ([[User talk:88.12.251.41|talk]]) 15:34, 1 June 2024 (UTC)


== [[Weaponization of antisemitism]] ==
seem to concur with http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sitush and User:MatthewVanitas


Could someone review this article and this discussion ([[Talk:Weaponization of antisemitism#Adding POV and POV LEDE tags]]) for whether or not NPOV violations exist or if the POV tag belongs on the article. Thank you, [[User:IOHANNVSVERVS|IOHANNVSVERVS]] ([[User talk:IOHANNVSVERVS|talk]]) 18:57, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Sitush#Please_dont_take_ownership_of_articles
{{unsigned|174.139.114.107}} {{spa|174.139.114.107}}


:It's a terrible article, so would really benefit from the engagement of non-involved editors. [[User:Bobfrombrockley|BobFromBrockley]] ([[User talk:Bobfrombrockley|talk]]) 15:17, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
:Huh, and I treated you so nicely on Talk:Kurmi. But anyone accusing Sitush of ownership is clearly on the wrong end of the NPOV forum. Suggesting archiving of a 45 section long talk page isn't ownership. In fact, suggesting it not be archived is borderline disruptive--navigating that page is painful at best, and impossible at worst. Archiving doesn't erase anything, it just moves old discussions out of the way so that we can stay current on new discussions. Finally...have you ever edited under an account name before? This behavior of giving unwarranted warnings and reverting against consensus sure seems familiar to me...Qwyrxian (talk) 06:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
::Just finished an RM on the title, no consensus. Not that terrible imo but I suppose mileage may vary. This has been here since 4 May and it was at the OR noticeboard as well without much reaction so while there is always something to fix, maybe not so much. [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 15:33, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
:I agree with @[[User:Bobfrombrockley|Bobfrombrockley]], the articles sourcing issue combined with the plethora of other problems discussed on the talk page combined with the RM problems are not inspiring my confidence that this article will (or maybe even can) be modified to resemble a NPOV. [[User:FortunateSons|FortunateSons]] ([[User talk:FortunateSons|talk]]) 20:08, 21 May 2024 (UTC)


== Need some patient people at [[Jordan Peterson]] ==
Please stop this unsubstantiated claim. By nicely you meant you accepted your wrong POV. Where have I reverted? I am putting some material for an organization. If that's what you mean. We must keep wiki as neutral as possible. Why do you think that I committed a grave insult by placing a warning here? Is this WP:NPOV


I have just spent a couple of hours I will never get back at this page explaining:
This admin is openly haressing this user.
*What is a revert
*What is a one-revert restriction on a page
*What it means to have a personal one-revert restriction
*What is another editor's talk page comment
*What is Wikivoice and why we do not use it to say "politically correct"
*Why we don't randomly name drop politicians in an article about a YouTube misogynist
*Why this is even more so when the politician in question is the once and likely future premier of Alberta, who is female.
*Why it really doesn't matter how we as Wikipedia editors think she should feel about the mention
*Why the alleged billions of times the misogynist Youtuber's videos have been played matters not at all
*Why his alleged ranking at some download site doesn't matter either
*What is precedent in a common law legal system


The following remain to be addressed:
Please conduct an investigation on the conduct of the admins mentioned above, along with the users mentioned above.
*use of student newspaper in an evaluation of his research
*Article variously says he resigned, was no longer on the faculty, was asked to resign or put teaching on hold temporarily due to other project.
*What is ONUS and who has it
*Whatever this is: {{tq|Peterson's work has generated billions of views from all over the world. Meanwhile, Rachel Notley is some minor politician in Canada. How many people outside of Canada knows about her or cares about her? Remove her from the article if you want. Obscure people shouldn't be allowed to parasite on the success of famous people. Trakking (talk) 10:28, 16 May 2024}}
*whatever this is also: {{tq|Some people are trying hard to make this encyclopedic article be much more sensational and provocative than it ought to be. Trakking (talk) 22:33, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
and much more.}}
I am sure I am forgetting stuff. Did I mention that a lot of the sources seem to fail verification? I have not yet run Wikiblame though. Please send whisky and psychiatrists. The editor mentioned a above is swedish and rather new. The other is {{ping|Springee}}. [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 12:23, 16 May 2024 (UTC)


:{{ping|Trakking}} [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 12:24, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
{{unsigned|174.139.114.107|09:09, 13 July 2011}} {{spa|174.139.114.107}}
::Yeah the comment about Notley had me entirely confused. I'm already there but more hands make light work. [[User:Simonm223|Simonm223]] ([[User talk:Simonm223|talk]]) 12:46, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
:Okay, first, a clarification: the above information is partially copied from [[User Talk:Sitush#Please dont take ownership of articles]]. My comments listed above were not posted here, they were posted on Sitush's page. Second, those comments were made after the above user (posting under a different IP address) gave a warning a templated warning to Sitush for "ownership" of articles. In a certain sense, this is not a new "problem" for Sitush, basically because Sitush is fighting a fairly lonely battle on a number of different Indian caste pages to try to keep them neutral in the face of numerous users (some of whom have accused Sitush and other users off-wiki of receiving payments of $12,000 a month to slant WP articles) who want to "prove" that their caste is, in fact, descended from royalty, despite what all reliable sources might say. Sitush does an amazing job at this; I haven't worked with him as much, but MattewVanitas seems to be in a similar position. Basically, the above complaint is baseless, the talk pages of these articles are littered with sockpuppets, [[WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT]], and "I know it's true because my grandfather's grandfather said so." Of course, other uninvolved editors are more than welcome to come to [[Talk:Kurmi]] (or [[Talk:Nair]], or [[Talk: Kshatriya]], or [[Talk:Rajput clans]], or any of a dozen others that I'm sure Sitush and MatthewVanitas could list) to provide input; maybe we're just totally wrong and the sockfarms are right. Also, if anyone (uninvolved) believes that my comment constitutes harassment, please tell me and I will withdraw or strike those parts which are unacceptable.
:Re "an article about a YouTube misogynist" -- in fact it's an article about Jordan Peterson. Re Rachel Notley: the mention has existed in the article since at least [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jordan_Peterson&diff=prev&oldid=779665267 May 2017], but I didn't interpret the talk page comments as firmly opposing removal. I won't post there since I know that people can be tbanned for doing so. [[User:Peter Gulutzan|Peter Gulutzan]] ([[User talk:Peter Gulutzan|talk]]) 14:26, 16 May 2024
:Just to be fair, I did make a mistake which the IP mentions at the very beginning, although xe got the actual mistake wrong (basically, I thought the article said, "The Indian gov't thinks X and Y.+ref1+ref2"; actually, what the article said was, "The Indian gov't thinks X; others also think Y.+ref1+ref2") But upon having that pointed out, I apologized and moved forward. Final disclaimer: I am not an admin. [[User:Qwyrxian|Qwyrxian]] ([[User talk:Qwyrxian|talk]]) 13:37, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
::Yes. that is the YouTube misogynist in question. [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 19:46, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
:Followup: Perhaps the user who posted here isn't the same as the one who originally posted on Sitush's page; in fact, that user actually later said to me "Our POV is based on how we interpret the facts. You are one of the nicest persons I have met today, both offline and online. So anything you say I will accept it without any issues. To me, above two posts look like an attempt of ownership". I don't know if this is one person, two people, good cop-bad cop...[[User:Qwyrxian|Qwyrxian]] ([[User talk:Qwyrxian|talk]]) 13:48, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
:Not sure we should be sending additional psychological professionals, seeing what carnage has been wrought by just one of them. {{emojus|thinking}} <b style="font-family: monospace; color:#E35BD8">[[User:JPxG|<b style="color:#029D74">jp</b>]]×[[Special:Contributions/JPxG|<b style="color: #029D74">g</b>]][[User talk:JPxG|🗯️]]</b> 08:39, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
::I mean the College of Psychologists of Ontario are deeply embarrassed by him. [[User:Simonm223|Simonm223]] ([[User talk:Simonm223|talk]]) 12:24, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
:::'''update:'''Various shiny objects have distracted me from this. Possibly the one-revert question has been addressed; I at least have had an answer that satisfied *my* questions about this for now. I do not know if the other editors on the talk page agree. I remain preoccupied and busy RL. Some of those editors have said that they don't see why mentioning Notley is a PoV problem, but on the other hand they do not object to the mention being removed. Removing it would resolve that matter in my eyes. If that has not happened I may do that sometime soon. As far as I know the rest of this remains unaddressed. [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 10:33, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
::::{{ping|Elinruby}} You really ought keep your (potentially defamatory) personal opinions about BLPs to yourself. "Misogyny" and "misogynist" appear only twice in the article currently and not in a way that would lend to them being listed in the lead along with {{tq|"psychologist, author, and media commentator"}}. I daresay maybe you ought not edit articles you have such strong opinions on if you feel compelled to use the slurs when discussing the person. This is no reflection on my personal opinion of Jordan Peterson. I don't like misogyny or misogynists, and I don't know much about Peterson other than that it is definitely not someone I would take advice from. I just think you are pushing the limits of [[WP:BLP]] and might be edging into having your comments refactored:
::::*{{tq|Do not label people with contentious labels, loaded language, or terms that lack precision, unless a person is commonly described that way in reliable sources. Instead use clear, direct language and let facts alone do the talking.}}
::::*{{tq|Remove immediately any contentious material about a living person that: 2. is an original interpretation or analysis of a source, or a synthesis of sources}}
::::*[[WP:LIBEL]]
::::[[User:DIYeditor|—DIYeditor]] ([[User talk:DIYeditor|talk]]) 00:54, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::{{ping|DIYeditor}} can you restate that please? I think I must be misunderstanding you. [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 04:04, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::At the least it looks biased to me to be bad-mouthing a living person beyond what the article describes the person as being. Maybe it's true (or not), but to me "misogynist" is a strong and potentially defamatory label to use, and it doesn't seem to be widely applied to him from what his article says. Is it necessary, useful and appropriate to express distaste for the subjects of articles? [[User:DIYeditor|—DIYeditor]] ([[User talk:DIYeditor|talk]]) 08:28, 30 May 2024 (UTC)


:I think the issue here is that you have posted a legal threat and a personal attack {{tq|from what his article says}}. You do understand that I posted here because I was questioning the article's neutrality? It does indeed say, based on the subject's YouTube posts and some hagiography in student newspapers, that he is essentially the second coming of Carl Jung, to the point of including the Carl Jung navbar in the article. I thought the above was a decent start on the article's problems, but we can discuss misogyny if people want. I would have thought that this was obvious from the use of the word on RS, the description of women in his own voice as "witches" and forces of chaos, and his contention that they are responsible for murders by incels, a situation to be remedied by what he calls "mandatory monogamy." I will be happy to provide sources for these statements, and yes, I agree, actually, that they are not in the article. Or weren't the last time I looked.[[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 01:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
::Although I haven't followed this in any detail, there is clearly a problem on this set of articles involving and I agree that Sitush and MatthewVanitas (and you of course) are doing a difficult job to the best of your ability. Whether this can be solved here or will need Admin action I'm not sure. [[User:Dougweller|Dougweller]] ([[User talk:Dougweller|talk]]) 14:03, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
::Actually, here, let me by all means introduce some sources into this conversation. Sources include but are not limited to:
::*{{cite web|title=Why Are So Many Young Men Drawn to Jordan Peterson’s Intellectual Misogyny? |author=Grant Maxwell|date=
February 20, 2018 |publisher=American Philosophical Association |url=https://blog.apaonline.org/2018/02/20/why-are-so-many-young-men-drawn-to-jordan-petersons-intellectual-misogyny/ }}
::*{{cite web|title=Jordan Peterson, Custodian of the Patriarchy: He says there’s a crisis in masculinity. Why won’t women — all these wives and witches — just behave? |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2018/05/18/style/jordan-peterson-12-rules-for-life.html|publisher= New York Times |author=Nellie Bowles |date=May 18, 2018 |quote=“He was angry at God because women were rejecting him,” Mr. Peterson says of the Toronto killer. “The cure for that is enforced monogamy. That’s actually why monogamy emerges. Mr. Peterson does not pause when he says this. Enforced monogamy is, to him, simply a rational solution. Otherwise women will all only go for the most high-status men, he explains, and that couldn’t make either gender happy in the end.}}
::*{{cite book|quote=His willingness to say misogynistic and transphobic things, and support patriarchal institutions is damning |url=https://books.google.ca/books?hl=en&lr=&id=NoDWDwAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PT11 |title=Myth and Mayhem: A Leftist Critique of Jordan Peterson |last1=Burgis |first1=Ben |first2=Conrad |last2=Bongard Hamilton |first3=Matthew |last3=McManus |first4=Marion |last4=Trejo |publisher=John Hunt Publishing |year=2020 |isbn=1789045541}}
::*{{cite journal|title=Constructing narratives of masculinity: Online followers of Jordan B. Peterson |last1=Nesbitt-Larking |first1= Paul |journal=Psychology of Men & Masculinities |date=July 2022|volume=23 |issue=3 |pages=309-320}}
::*{{cite web|title=Jordan Peterson may be a ‘public intellectual’, but his latest theory isn’t very clever: The academic believes violent men can be cured by the love of a good woman through enforced monogamy. And he can’t understand why people are laughing at him? |url=https://www.theguardian.com/fashion/2018/may/23/jordan-peterson-public-intellectual-isnt-clever-violent-men-monogamy |author=Hadley Freeman |date=23 May 2018 |publisher=The Guardian |quote=Peterson felt compelled to blog about it, explaining in his usual “Look, you may not like it, but I’m just stating the scientific truth, guys” tone, that he wasn’t advocating the “arbitrary dealing out of damsels to incels”, just that scientific facts show that “socially enforced monogamous conventions decrease male violence”. How any of this explains his theory that feminine is chaos and masculine is order was left unexplored}}
::*{{cite web|url=https://theconversation.com/from-andrew-tate-to-jordan-peterson-a-phoney-zero-sum-game-argument-sits-at-the-heart-of-anti-feminist-backlash-194665 |title=From Andrew Tate to Jordan Peterson, a phoney zero-sum-game argument sits at the heart of anti-feminist backlash |author=Bethan Iley |publisher=The Conversattion UK |quote=Take Peterson’s conceptualisation of order and chaos as reflecting masculinity and femininity...to raise these issues as an argument against more freedom for women is to feed the false idea that men and women are battling for power}}
::*{{cite web|quote=No matter what she would have asked, a woman daring to question his expertise was bound to have ramifications. Especially in 2018.|url=https://www.independent.co.uk/voices/cathy-newman-abuse-channel-4-jordan-peterson-metoo-backlash-latest-a8170031.html |title=Misogynistic abuse against Cathy Newman is a symbol of the backlash against the MeToo movement: When white men feel they are losing power, any level of nastiness is possible – and much power has been ceded of late |first1=Rachael |last1=Revesz |date=21 January 2018 |publisher=The Independent}}
::*{{cite news |title=SORT YOURSELF OUT, BUCKO |last1= SANNEH | first1=KELEFA |publisher=New Yorker |issn=0028792X |date=March 5, 2018 |volume= 94 |issue=3 |quote=When he does battle as a culture warrior, especially on television, Peterson sometimes assumes the role of a strident anti-feminist, intent on ending the oppression of males by destroying the myth of male oppression. (He once referred to his critics as "rabid harpies.")}}
::*{{cite book|url=https://www.manchesterhive.com/display/9781526152558/9781526152558.00027.xml |title=The free speech wars |editor=Charlotte Lydia Riley |isbn=9781526152558 |chapter=Jordan Peterson, the alt-right and neo-fascism |doi=10.7765/9781526152558.00027 |date= 20 November 2020 |quote=women of colour calling out racism are routinely ‘shut down’ for ‘incivility’. A guide to free speech politics in the age of Peterson, this chapter shows how inescapably raced, classed and gendered the exclusionary practice of ‘free speech’ really is, and what this tells us about liberalism’s inadequacy in responding to neo-fascism.}}
::*{{cite web|quote=What he’s telling you is that certain people—most of them women and minorities—are trying to destroy not only our freedom to spite nonbinary university students for kicks, but all of Western civilization and the idea of objective truth itself. He’s telling you that when someone tells you racism is still a problem and that something should be done about it, they are, at best, a dupe and, at worst, part of a Marxist conspiracy to destroy your way of life. Peterson says he only thinks of it as a “non-violent war.” But when you insist the stakes are that high, the opposition that pernicious, who’s to say where the chips will fall? |title=Is Jordan Peterson the stupid man’s smart person? Tabatha Southey delves into University of Toronto professor Jordan Peterson’s work and finds his secret sauce—and what makes his work unnerving |first1=Tabatha |last1=Southey |date=November 17, 2017 |url=https://www.macleans.ca/opinion/is-jordan-peterson-the-stupid-mans-smart-person/ |publisher=Maclean's}}
::*{{cite book|page=67 |quote=The known stands for order, form, and culture, symbolically linked to the masculine. The unknown is chaos, substance, and nature, symbolically associated with the feminine. Chaos is origin, source, mother, matter, and order must restrain and shape that chaos. |chapter=Power, Sex, and Myth: Beauvoir, Paglia, and Peterson |title=Purple Brains: Feminisms at the Limits of Philosophy |editor1=
Annabelle Dufourcq |editor2=Annemie Halsema |editor3=Katrine Smiet |editor4=Karen Vintges |publisher=Radboud University Press |isbn=978 94 9329 639 8 |year=2024 |doi=10.54195/HSOV8373}}
::*{{cite journal|quote= they can be watched for hours espousing conservative doctrine to their predominantly male, adolescent audience in hopes of maintaining the status quo, and eschewing activism (Weiss & Winter, 2018). There are quite a number of figures in this group; however, this paper will be focusing primarily on the two most notable members: Jordan Peterson and Ben Shapiro.|title=General Insights From: "The Intellectual Dark-Web": A Case Study of Jordan Peterson and Ben Shapiro |journal=Intersect: The Stanford Journal of Science, Technology, and Society |first1=Francesco |last1= Mannella |url=https://ojs.stanford.edu/ojs/index.php/intersect/article/view/1942 |publisher=Stanford University |volume=14 |number=3 |year=2020}} [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 01:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
:::Not sure where {{tq|I think the issue here is that you have posted a legal threat and a personal attack}} came from but what you've listed looks like good groundwork for inclusion in the article. [[User:DIYeditor|—DIYeditor]] ([[User talk:DIYeditor|talk]]) 05:02, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
::::I am not particularly interested in pursuing the matter, but "maybe you ought not edit articles you have such strong opinions on if you feel compelled to use the slurs" does assume I said this with no basis, and you did say I was committing libel. But fine; apparently you now think otherwise. Glad to hear it, and glad we got that cleared up. I am still preoccupied with a different problem, but my primary concern, above and beyond all this background, is that the article devoted a great deal of real estate to quoting his very fringe statements about [https://www.loc.gov/item/global-legal-monitor/2017-09-11/canada-senate-passes-landmark-transgender-rights-bill/ Bill C-16] and most likely still does [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 07:59, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::[[WP:LABEL]] is quite clear that “misogynist” is a value-laden label to be avoided {{tq|unless widely used by reliable sources}}. If the source evidence is insufficient to state it in wikivoice in a BLP, then it should be avoided on Talk too, per [[WP:BLPTALK]]. A personal attack against the subject of the article, even if you think it is justified, is [[WP:BATTLEGROUND]] noise that doesn’t help make content decisions. [[User:Barnards.tar.gz|Barnards.tar.gz]] ([[User talk:Barnards.tar.gz|talk]]) 08:33, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Ok, apparently you have not noticed the dozen sources above. The article still extensively quotes the subject making extremely hyperbolic statements, in addition to his advocacy of involuntary sexual servitude for women. But by all means, let's debate whether it is polite to include some secondary sources in the article that say so. [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 09:09, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
::::::::Do those reliable sources widely state, in their own voice, that the subject is a misogynist? [[User:Barnards.tar.gz|Barnards.tar.gz]] ([[User talk:Barnards.tar.gz|talk]]) 09:11, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::feel free to click handily provided links. I would start with the New York Times. They are also afaict all extremely RS, certainly better in any event that the student newspapers currently in the article. More sources exist to say that the subject's claims about Canadian constitutional law are to put it politely only tenously related to fact, which is actually the primary concern. The stuff about women is opinion, no matter how alarming it is that somebody with his reach has been saying this stuff. [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 09:24, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::I checked a couple, and have now checked the NYT source too. It doesn’t call him a misogynist. [[User:Barnards.tar.gz|Barnards.tar.gz]] ([[User talk:Barnards.tar.gz|talk]]) 09:31, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::Only three of those sources explicitly mention the term misogyny—one is some random blog, another is a polemic book called ”A leftist critique,” and the third does not even apply the term to Jordan Peterson specifically; it just simply states that ”well, there’s misogyny on the internet.” This post is a clear example of [[WP:OR]] and [[WP:BATTLEGROUND]]. [[User:Trakking|Trakking]] ([[User talk:Trakking|talk]]) 09:30, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::::(ec) I see this escalated while I was typing. That "random blog" has an editorial policy and a submissions process and is published by a professional organization. And yeah, the NYT times only quotes him saying that the solution to a guy running over random pedestrians is "mandatory monogamy" for women with men who might do such things. Speaking of polemic. The book is a published source that beats a student newspaper any day, and the source you are dismissing as "there's misogyny on the internet" has his name in the title, so.... not so much. But I am always happy to hear from an editor who thinks that a former provincial premier is somehow "parasiting" the subject by being mentioned in his Wikipedia article. Have you removed that mention yet, Trakking? Surely if I want it gone and you think it's parasitic, a meeting of the minds is possible somewhere? But Macleans, the Guardian and the other sources all talk about hateful statements about women and pretty much everyone who is not an incel white male, so... OR is a pretty ridiculous dismissal, given that all of these sources are better than 90% of what's in the article now, ie mostly YouTube and student newspapers. But without getting into the article's current content, if it's reliably sourced, it ain't OR. As opposed for example to quoting the subject on what his expertise is, even though he doesn't seem to be the lead author of many of those articles at all. So how about we talk about what he says about the law, hmm? [[User:Elinruby|Elinruby]] ([[User talk:Elinruby|talk]]) 10:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::::::Trying to log in but keep kicking to other places [[Special:Contributions/2600:100A:B03C:8E18:0:34:799D:E901|2600:100A:B03C:8E18:0:34:799D:E901]] ([[User talk:2600:100A:B03C:8E18:0:34:799D:E901|talk]]) 11:38, 3 June 2024 (UTC)


== Misandry neutrality ==
* I really don't think I (or the others) have anything to defend against here - I have sought input from other admins and have so far had pretty much unqualified support for my admin approach to this sorry mess. I'll just leave interested parties to look over the relevant caste article Talk pages and see the near-infinite patience with which Sitush and MatthewVanitas have tried to explain Wikipedia's policies of sourcing and consensus to the legions of caste warriors and their socks, and have painstakingly investigated a large number of sources and explained what they see as reliable and unreliable amongst them - and see the almost non-stop abuse and accusations they have been receiving in return. And if anyone wants to try a sockpuppet investigation on [[User:174.139.114.107]], I'd be surprised if it came up empty -- [[User:Boing! said Zebedee|Boing! said Zebedee]] ([[User talk:Boing! said Zebedee|talk]]) 14:20, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
A debate about the [[Misandry]] article is ongoing at [[Wikipedia:No original research/Noticeboard]]. I welcome as many people as possible to chime in about how the article should be phrased as possible. Thank you. [[User:ImmersiveOne|ImmersiveOne]] ([[User talk:ImmersiveOne|talk]]) 20:41, 16 May 2024 (UTC)


== [[Sabra (character)]] ==
:*There is an element of swarming going on, some of which has been proven to be socking and others that look distinctly like they may be down to offwiki canvassing. There is also some on-wiki canvassing, mainly due to one user sprawling his discussions across umpteen talk pages. Basically, the issue is very simple with regard to the caste status: we have plenty of sources that say, with absolute clarity, that the caste was/is in ritual rank A; and we have been presented with a fair few sources which document attempts by certain members of the caste to claim a higher rank. Both sides are shown in the article. The problem is that the likes of {{u|Thisthat2011}} want to inflate a claim into a fact but are unable to provide sources to match the clarity of the statements which say otherwise. Since neither myself nor MV are from India or of Indian origin, and since these other contributors have often acknowledged that they are of the Kurmi caste, the issue is perhaps really one of COI. - [[User:Sitush|Sitush]] ([[User talk:Sitush|talk]]) 14:28, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


This may count as vandalism, but this IP user has been adding things like [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sabra_(character)&curid=1755550&diff=1224206594&oldid=1224206370 this] onto this article. [[User:BOZ|BOZ]] ([[User talk:BOZ|talk]]) 22:07, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
::*It seems possible that the originator of this particular thread is a sock of {{u|Prashantv79}}, regarding whom an SPI has recently closed at [[Wikipedia:Sockpuppet_investigations/Ajneesh_Katiyar]]. This is based on some [[WP:Beans|beans]] evidence. - [[User:Sitush|Sitush]] ([[User talk:Sitush|talk]]) 15:32, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
:::* There have been some emails sent to the unblock mailing list too, the content & style of which suggest at the very least meat puppetry. --'''[[user:ErrantX|Errant]]''' <sup>([[User_talk:ErrantX|chat!]])</sup> 15:34, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


== [[Irgun]] ==
:::Now that my name is called, let me present viewpoint from my side. There are many contradictions on this matter.
:::In India, the word Shudra is not used anymore in official discourse, it is like a taboo - this understanding is not present on page like [[Kurmi]] though the word Shudra is prominent at many places. In fact there are legal cautions but I am not sure how it weighs on Wikipedia, I have been told that it does not, however derogatory a word may be.
:::Jati, Varna, Caste, etc. form a maze of combinations. Jatis have been mobile over time across Varna & caste, and official depends on poverty levels also other than these, along with political equations, vote-bank-numbers and reservation policy, etc. Moreover a Jati may be recognized as different Varna across different regions. The recognition of Jati/Varna/Caste is rather dynamic more than static. Moreover, the Caste/Jati/Varna combinations could be regarded as general social characteristic of people, not just Hindus.
:::As per my comments on talk page(not main page, I have edited page once after the matter came up), there are some sources that recognize, as per my understanding, explicit 'Kshatriya' status Socially and Officially. The sources I have presented and are ignored giving unsubstantiated comments like 'swaying' authorities to get Kshatriya recognition etc. which I have objected and requested substance to demonstrate the comment that I am yet to get. As it stands, many editors have given views. The discussion as per me is ongoing.<font color="#FF9933"> ..असक्तः सततं कार्य कर्म समाचर &#124; असक्तः हि आचरन् कर्म..[[User_talk:thisthat2011 | <font color="#FF9933"> Humour Thisthat2011</font>]]</font> 15:45, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
::::The legal situation has been explained to Thisthat2011, as s/he acknowledges, & so I have no idea why s/he says "I am not sure how it weighs on Wikipedia".
::::The sources presented by Thisthat2011 were not ignored at all. They were examined and found to be wanting.
::::I repeat: the article does discuss claims to the status which Thisthat2011 refers to, and they are reliably cited. This is exactly how NPOV should work.
::::The continued bleating and cross-posting by Thisthat2011 is tendentious, and it looks like now we are going to see it here as well. S/he has been warned about adopting this stance by several people, not all of whom are the subject of this complaint. - [[User:Sitush|Sitush]] ([[User talk:Sitush|talk]]) 16:42, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


See [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ze%27ev_Jabotinsky&curid=276326&diff=1224648323&oldid=1222506609]. I reverted a similar edit a few days ago. The issue I see is do we describe the Irgun in articles the way their article does or does Wikipedia call then terrorists. [[User:Doug Weller|<span style="color:#070">Doug Weller</span>]] [[User talk:Doug Weller|talk]] 17:20, 19 May 2024 (UTC)


:See [[King David Hotel bombing]] which is what the Irgun is notorious for, obviously terrorism, and the attack is described in the lead as a "terrorist attack". In the section Terrorism, it says "The bombing has been discussed in literature about the practice and history of terrorism. It has been called one of the most lethal terrorist attacks of the 20th century." When a preponderance of sources are all unequivocal about calling it terrorism, it's terrorism.
:::::We have fully agreed with you that caste issues as variable over time/location. The difference is that Sitush and I go through sources attempting to balance out "sometimes called X, sometimes called Y", whereas you find a handful of sources vaguely leaning to X and then demand we strike all mention of Y from the article. And as noted by your "not a legal threat, but I'm just sayin'" comments above (and on my talk page), it's pretty clear that your goal isn't NPOV, but adding Kshatriya and removing Shudra by any means necessary. You have backed blatantly poor references as "I don't see what's wrong with this", and you have consistently attempted to spin things like "one governor declared that Kurmi's weren't a depressed class and should be allowed to join the police force" into "See! Official Indian Government recognition of Kshatriya status."
:I see an editor objected on the grounds that we don't do that for Hamas but there is no unanimity of sourcing for that (the BBC being one notable example of a refusal to call them that). [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 17:41, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
:The way [[Irgun]] describes them is, imo, fine. This was (to my knowledge) way before proscription was a thing, so it's probably the best we're going to get if we're never going to be able to say "described by A, B, and C as a terrorist org". Extending that, however, to [[Ze'ev Jabotinsky]] is a bit weird to me. Although [[al-Qaeda]]'s designation is mentioned on [[Osama Bin Laden]]. [[User:Yr Enw|Yr Enw]] ([[User talk:Yr Enw|talk]]) 18:26, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
:The same editor who adds mentions of terrorism to Irgun-related articles also removes mentions of terrorism related to Palestinian factions [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Second_Intifada&diff=1224475437&oldid=1224474588]. However, when reverted, they label the revert as "vandalism" [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Second_Intifada&diff=1224559619&oldid=1224476953]. This could indicate a possible conduct issue. [[User:ABHammad|ABHammad]] ([[User talk:ABHammad|talk]]) 07:55, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
:I have a similar view to Yr Enw in cases like this. Also, I'm a fan of aligning contentious labels to the labeling used in main articles about the thing being given a contentious label in another article. And if you are going to avoid the use of Wiki-voice via words like "proscribed", it seems better to say who is doing the proscribing. I'm not a big fan of the fuzzy wording "unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject" in [[WP:TERRORIST]] as a decision procedure because, in practice, editors can't/don't do enough sampling. Not using contentious labels in wiki-voice or without some kind of attribution is a simple solution. [[User:Sean.hoyland|Sean.hoyland]] ([[User talk:Sean.hoyland|talk]]) 08:29, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
::“''not using contentious labels in wikivoice or without some kind of attribution is a simple solution''”. This is my preferred interpretation of [[MOS:TERRORIST]], and imo the only possibly impartial way of dealing with terrorist designations. But the guidance is, as you note, quite reliant on editors making editorial judgements. It’s unlikely to get resolved anytime soon either, as when I tried to get consensus on the VP for a more explicit guideline that would align with this, it wasn’t very forthcoming. [[User:Yr Enw|Yr Enw]] ([[User talk:Yr Enw|talk]]) 10:34, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
:::In practice, in Wikipedia, for understandable reasons, editorial judgement can be difficult to distinguish from convenience sampling. [[User:Sean.hoyland|Sean.hoyland]] ([[User talk:Sean.hoyland|talk]]) 12:53, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
::::Perhaps but the rule as it stands (I don't agree with it either but there it is) says that if there is a preponderance of sourcing, we go by that. If there is alleged insufficient sampling, editors will have to work out a consensus on that, same as anything else. [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 12:58, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::This is true. I think we have made some progress towards neutrality though. When people in my family would tell stories about their time in Palestine in 1947-48, any mention of Irgun might be accompanied by slightly confusing statements like 'scum of the Balkans'. Of course, this was back in the days when making sweeping and/or offensive and/or inaccurate statements about 'foreigners' was fine. [[User:Sean.hoyland|Sean.hoyland]] ([[User talk:Sean.hoyland|talk]]) 14:59, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::Wasn't Irgun self-described as terrorists? They were formed as "restraint breakers" specifically to carry out unprovoked violent attacks against Palestinians and British as part of a campaign of political violence. They promoted terrorism, were self-described terrorists. They publicly celebrated their terrorist identity. They had a goal and their chosen path was the path of violent unconstrained terrorism, and they were proud advocates of this. [[User:Fanccr|Fanccr]] ([[User talk:Fanccr|talk]]) 03:46, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Fanccr, your comment is inconsistent with the [[WP:ARBECR]] rule. A quick look at your contributions suggests that you might need to (re)read that and the [[User_talk:Fanccr#Introduction_to_contentious_topics|information on your talk page]]. If you have sourcing that supports the "self-described terrorists" statement, you can submit it with an edit request at the Irgun article's talk page using [[WP:EDITXY]] as a guide. Even if true, I would still favor attributing the label to them rather than using wiki-voice. [[User:Sean.hoyland|Sean.hoyland]] ([[User talk:Sean.hoyland|talk]]) 04:46, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::Yes, same. The problem with their suggestion is that it assumes readers will understand what the Irgun itself meant by the term, which I don’t think they will. [[User:Yr Enw|Yr Enw]] ([[User talk:Yr Enw|talk]]) 07:56, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
::I agree with @[[User:Yr Enw|Yr Enw]] here. In an article about a different topic, appending a contentious qualifier like terrorist can be done only if that's what RS do. The onus is on the editor who adds this. [[User:Alaexis|Alaexis]]<sub>[[User_talk:Alaexis|¿question?]]</sub> 06:47, 31 May 2024 (UTC)


== Including death parameters in the infobox for BLPs ==
:::::You also just won't drop the bone on this "sway" thing. When I attempted to summarise, ''on the Talk page'' (not in the article) what one source was actually saying, you immediately leapt to sound the alarm and run hither and yon accusing me of WP:SYNTH. This is ridiculous "pot calling the kettle black" and an attempt to smear your opponents as being exactly equal to you in POV.


I tried removing the "death date" and "death place" parameters from the infoboxes on BLPs (e.g. [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jeff_Bridges&diff=1224865267&oldid=1224858031], [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Judi_Dench&diff=1224864473&oldid=1224860560], [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Teri_Garr&diff=1224864500&oldid=1224860415], [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Veronica_Cartwright&diff=1224864942&oldid=1224860015], [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Julie_Andrews&diff=1224865397&oldid=1224857657], [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Keith_Carradine&diff=1224867112&oldid=1224855206], [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=John_Cleese&diff=1224865313&oldid=1224857984], [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Gene_Hackman&diff=1224867027&oldid=1224856471]), but the removals have been reverted. The vast majority of BLPs do not include such parameters. The infobox for the Joe Biden article, to cite a high-profile example, does not include parameters for death. Neither does the Taylor Swift article, to cite another high-profile example. Why should some BLPs include death parameters and others not? Seems morbid and downright prejudicial. [[User:Ieonine|Ieonine]] ([[User talk:Ieonine|talk]]) 23:34, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::Sitush and I, and others, are confronting a massive array of caste articles that, to be frank, almost nobody cares about but members of those castes, so they have run roughshod adding every bit of self-glorification humanly possible while ignoring all kinds of very real and intriuging descriptions of caste politics, differing legendary origins, etc. By your actions you are standing in the way of this process of bringing long-overdue NPOV to a notoriously biased portion of Wikipedia. [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 17:04, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


:The unused parameters aren't seen by the reader..... we consider this a cosmetic edit pls review [[WP:COSMETICBOT]]. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">[[User:Moxy|Moxy]]</span>🍁 23:41, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
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::But they ''are'' seen by the editors, and the implication is shady. [[User:Ieonine|Ieonine]] ([[User talk:Ieonine|talk]]) 23:50, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
Just noticed TT2011 is also adding content in [[Kurmi]] despite the exact refs he's using being rebutted on Talk, so basically disregarding entirely the Talk page to just add changes that have been discounted as compltely inaccurate. For example, he added [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kurmi&action=historysubmit&diff=438992202&oldid=438966587 here]: "During colonial times, in 1896, official government recognition was given to Kurmis as Kshtriya." I have told him, multiple times, exactly what the source says, and how it says nothing of the sort, but he has plugged his ears, and attempted to accuse me of WP:SYNTH when I attempt to explain the situation using small words. Anyone curious, check this page and Ctrl-F "1896". That date is mentioned twice, and in neither case says anything ''resembling'' the text it is cited to: [http://publishing.cdlib.org/ucpressebooks/view?docId=ft22900465&chunk.id=s1.3.14&toc.depth=1&toc.id=0&brand=ucpress&query=Kurmi]. TT2011 added several other contentious items that he has not run by the Talk page despite this being a clearly controversial article, including taking "several scholars think they found the Kurmis in the Skandas" to mean "Kurmis are mentioned in Skanda Puranas of Hinduism." This is his usual pattern, to find the most tangential relationship between two things and assign it as fact.
:Every subject of a BLP will die someday. I would argue that there is no good reason to remove empty death parameters from articles that have them or to add empty death parameters to articles that don't. &ndash;&nbsp;[[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 23:43, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
::Then why isn't there an across-the-board policy addressing this? To cite some more high-profile examples, look at the infoboxes for Donald Trump, Kim Kardashian, Kanye West, Madonna. Nowhere does it list "death date" or "death place". So why should some BLP infoboxes include death parameters and others not include death parameters? There's no equality in that. [[User:Ieonine|Ieonine]] ([[User talk:Ieonine|talk]]) 23:47, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
:::What matters is that for all of these BLPs, the death fields are empty and don't show in the page. &ndash;&nbsp;[[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 23:55, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
::::Again, this is prejudicial. Who decides which BLPs should have death fields and which shouldn't? [[User:Ieonine|Ieonine]] ([[User talk:Ieonine|talk]]) 23:59, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::They are irrelevant if they are not seen. I suggest you find something productive to do. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">[[User:Moxy|Moxy]]</span>🍁 00:02, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::In what way are they “prejudicial”? Who exactly is harmed by the fact that some BLP infoboxes have this (empty and hidden) parameter while others do not? And what is that harm? [[User:Blueboar|Blueboar]] ([[User talk:Blueboar|talk]]) 00:38, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::It's not really hidden. Anyone who clicks the edit button can see it. If there was a BLP page about me that had a "death date" field I'd take offense. The harm is implication of imminent death. To insist certain BLPs must contain this stigmatic mark while other BLPs get off scot-free, is unbalanced, unfair, and prejudicial; a double standard. Does this answer your question? Because none of you have answered mine: Why are some BLPs exempt from containing this awful text and others aren't? [[User:Ieonine|Ieonine]] ([[User talk:Ieonine|talk]]) 05:20, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Meh… having a field for date of death that is empty does not imply an imminent death… just an ''eventual'' one. We will all die at some point (hopefully a long time from now). No need to change. [[User:Blueboar|Blueboar]] ([[User talk:Blueboar|talk]]) 13:30, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
:[[Wikipedia:If it ain't broke, don't fix it|If it ain't broke, don't fix it]] [[User:Cambalachero|Cambalachero]] ([[User talk:Cambalachero|talk]]) 01:54, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
:These unused parameters are appropriate and will be useful for reference when the person does die. The infoboxes are not only for living persons AFAIK, but a variety that might be used for living or dead people. [[User:DIYeditor|—DIYeditor]] ([[User talk:DIYeditor|talk]]) 00:58, 30 May 2024 (UTC)


== Article title should be renamed Hokkaido Colonization Commission ==
Setting aside his POV inclinations, the larger problem is that he simply refuses to listen to anyone else. He repeatedly referred to cited claims in the article as "unsubstantiated" (it's that what a footnote does?), and when ''repeatedly'' told "at the top of the Talk page is a list of Shudra references" he ignored it several times, including asking "Where are the sources say that Kurmis are 'Shudras'". The TOC clearly lists [[Talk:Kurmi#Reliable_sources_supporting_Kurmi_as_Shudra]], and if at [[Talk:Kurmi]] you Ctrl-F for "top " (with space after), you'll see the multiple times I told him exactly "at the top of the page is a list of extra sources". Forgive me if I'm a bit vexed at the moment, but this is literally like talking to a child. He simply plugs his ears when there's anything he doesn't want to hear, and ventures boldly forth to make changes based on cites we have again and again and again told him are either unreliable or taken quite out of context, or cited to prove points they simply don't say. This editor has filled up a goodly chunk of [[Talk:Kurmi]] with incredibly circular and repetitive posts while ignoring all replies, and then went ahead and added a bunch of improper text anyway, which Sitush and I are now obliged to debunk and remove individually. What more can I say about this editor? [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 17:30, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
:Protected Kurmi for a week, have to go watch tv now. [[User:Dougweller|Dougweller]] ([[User talk:Dougweller|talk]]) 20:03, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


The title of [[Hokkaidō Development Commission]] should be renamed to Hokkaido Colonization Commission.
::As can be seen clearly above, [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] has been pointing out why social/official recognitions as Kshatriyas to Kurmis should not be considered in the article, though the secondary sources themselves do not indulge in judging/considering/not-considering, etc. The reasons/excuses to not consider Social/Official status are given by the admin, which I think is not something for Wikipedia admins to decide. What I mentioned are facts as were viewed by me, and such things mentioned in reliable sources can not be excluded because 'some admins on Wikipedia give reasons/excuses'. It is not admins/editors job to give reasons/excuses for not including content on Wikipedia for reasons perceived to the admins as 'swaying' authorities, propaganda, etc.<font color="#FF9933"> ..असक्तः सततं कार्य कर्म समाचर &#124; असक्तः हि आचरन् कर्म..[[User_talk:thisthat2011 | <font color="#FF9933"> Humour Thisthat2011</font>]]</font> 14:51, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
The National Archives of Japan [https://www.jacar.archives.go.jp/aj/meta/result?DEF_XSL=default&IS_KIND=summary_normal&IS_STYLE=eng&DB_ID=G0000101EXTERNAL&GRP_ID=G0000101&IS_SORT_FLD=sort.seq%2Csort.refc&DIS_SORT_FLD=sort.seq&IS_SORT_KND=asc&IS_START=1&IS_TAG_S51=iFi&IS_CND_S51=ALL&IS_KEY_S51=F2018032612505102101&IS_NUMBER=20&ON_LYD=on&IS_EXTSCH=F9999999999999900000%2BF2018032612505102101&IS_DATA_TYPE=&IS_THUMBNAIL=off&IS_ORG_ID=F2018032612505102101] officially refers to it as the "Colonization Commission," so that should be the title instead of "Hokkaidō Development Commission." While some sources may use the latter, giving more weight to the National Archives' designation aligns better with Wikipedia's rules, avoiding [[WP:UNDUE]] emphasis on other sources. the lede sentence "The Hokkaidō Development Commission (開拓使, Kaitakushi), sometimes referred to as Hokkaidō Colonization Office or simply Kaitakushi, was a government agency in early Meiji Japan." would also need to be rewritten because it is incorrect to say that the commission is sometimes referred to as Hokkaido Colonization Office when it was the official name.
talk page: [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Hokkaid%C5%8D_Development_Commission#Article_title_should_be_renamed_Hokkaido_Colonization_Commission]


*Actually, our rules DON’T favor “official names” over the names used in sources. See: [[WP:COMMONNAME]]. [[User:Blueboar|Blueboar]] ([[User talk:Blueboar|talk]]) 13:40, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
:::TT2011, I have told you this numerous times and yet you ignore me: ''the source you cite does not indicate social or official recognition of Kurmi as Kshatryia''. You are unfairly claiming that the source says XYZ and yet somehow I don't want it going into the article. That is incorrect: we don't want it in the article because you are, yet again, selectively misquoting, reading massive assumptions between the lines, and extrapolating incredibly anecdotal cases to be universal truths. Each time you keep bringing up the same allegations, I bring up the same response, and yet you persist. This is why you've been called "tendentious", and I am coming to agree in a very short period of time. [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 14:59, 14 July 2011 (UTC)


:that's fair enough, but guidelines also state, "When there is no single, obvious name that is demonstrably the most frequently used for the topic by these sources, editors should reach a consensus as to which title is best by considering these criteria directly." there are also plenty of other sources that use Colonization Commission. consensus needs to be reached as to which title is best for the article.(see talk) [[User:LilAhok|LilAhok]] ([[User talk:LilAhok|talk]]) 20:13, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
== Neutrality in regard to IIS and its connection to malware ==


== [[Animal stereotypes of Palestinians in Israeli discourse]]/[[Animal stereotypes of Jews in Palestinian discourse]] ==
We have a situation developing [[Internet Information Services]] article.


I recently came across these two newly created articles and they are both deeply problematic and subject to what look like intense back and forth editing. Do non-involved editors think NPOV versions could be made from either of them? [[User:Bobfrombrockley|BobFromBrockley]] ([[User talk:Bobfrombrockley|talk]]) 18:25, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
A user insists that according to Google, IIS is hosting twice the number of Malware than Apache server. Me and three other users have contested that this is not a neutral statement. I suggested an alternative version that says:


:Dismal articles, the pair of them. Might do something with them if merged into one article...maybe. [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 18:30, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
<blockquote>
::I think the "Animal" word should be dropped from both article titles, since apart from animals there's also "cavemen", "beasts", "morons", "vampires", "bacteria", "cancer", "germ".
The fact is that:
::I haven't checked sources much, but the sentence {{tq|At times, denigrators can allow that they are human: Yonathan Netanyahu considered them cavemen while the Likud MP Oren Hazan allows that Palestinians are human, but only in so far as they are morons.}} appears to fail [[WP:NPOV]], as the cited quotes (as provided in the footnotes) don't appear to say anything about allowing to be considered humans. [[User:NicolausPrime|NicolausPrime]] ([[User talk:NicolausPrime|talk]]) 18:54, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
#According to Google...
::Selfeditor, I'm afraid that just as in the real world conflict a two-articles solution is more realistic than a one-article solution... [[User:Vegan416|Vegan416]] ([[User talk:Vegan416|talk]]) 19:31, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
#...in the time of research...
:::Selfeditor? K, doesn't sound so bad. Anyway its not the solution that's the problem, its the occupation. [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 19:34, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
#...malware creators <s>preferred to</s> infect or host malware on IIS servers...
::::NOTFORUM. What I mean is that the number of arguments and back and forth editing would likely be much higher in one article than in two articles. [[User:Vegan416|Vegan416]] ([[User talk:Vegan416|talk]]) 19:39, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
#...because IIS computers that failed WGA test could not get updates.
:I think a theoretical NPOV version is possible, but I agree that a merger might be more promising. The primary issue will likely be due weight and FALSEBALANCE, and I don’t envy whoever will have to adress the inevitable discussions that will emerge. [[User:FortunateSons|FortunateSons]] ([[User talk:FortunateSons|talk]]) 19:42, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
</blockquote>
::Are animal stereotypes singularly notable in partisan discourse in the I/P debate, ''beyond'' the usual dehumanization inherent in similar debates? (Not like you have to go far to find someone calling someone similar in the US.) If the answer is no, the articles shouldn't exist at all, and having them around is just asking for COATRACK and battleground issues. [[User:David Fuchs|<span style="color: #ad3e00;">Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs</span>]] <sup><small>[[User talk:David Fuchs|<span style="color: #ad3e00;">talk</span>]]</small></sup> 19:48, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
:::That’s a good question. I’m honestly not sure, and also don’t know how we would measure that, particularly considering the linguistic and cultural complexity involved. Subjectively, I would say probably yes, but that’s worth very little. [[User:FortunateSons|FortunateSons]] ([[User talk:FortunateSons|talk]]) 19:53, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
::::[[User:David Fuchs|<span style="color: #ad3e00;">Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs</span>]] Animal stereotypes are very common, certainly with regard to caricatures of Palestinians, and are sufficiently impressive to have formed part of the evidence presented by South Africa (pp.59ff.) in its recent case against Israel at the International Court of Justice. The point is, at least for that article, they are all documented by core figures in the Israeli state, and not simply off-the-cuff remarks by the usual lunatic or fanatical fringe. I'll ignore the other article, which is unretrievably bad, and am surprised that the two, one written with stringent method, the other without any semblance of the same, could be viewed interchangeably as 'dismal'. 'Animal', lastly, refers to the 'animal kingdom', the realm of existing organic beings, as opposed to the plant kingdom. I thought everyone knew that, or has the kindergarten curriculm changed its views about this in the last half century?[[User:Nishidani|Nishidani]] ([[User talk:Nishidani|talk]]) 21:10, 21 May 2024 (UTC).
:::::I don't see the complaint as being a useful bellwether. It's not just about calling Palestinians animals, that specific part is a very small section of a very, very long complaint, and it's specifically about the language Israel's leadership is using in the context of whether they're calling for genocide. That doesn't equal "we need to have an article about all the bad things one side in a conflict is calling the other". If that were the benchmark, you could write that sort of article about literally any conflict on earth. [[User:David Fuchs|<span style="color: #ad3e00;">Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs</span>]] <sup><small>[[User talk:David Fuchs|<span style="color: #ad3e00;">talk</span>]]</small></sup> 21:20, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::Articles are dictated by many things. In my case, I wrote that when, over a decade, my personal file on such theriomorphic imagery (this is an important topic in scholarship) grew to such a length I wrote it up, for my own curiosity. On October 7th a veritable tsunami of zoomorphic vituperation hit the front pages, with many articles noting this upsurge in animal stereotypes. Some time after that an editor tried to write that article, and it was up for AfD, understandably so since it was poorly written. So I asked the deleters for a few days, and produced more or less the article we have, out of those old research files. For students of antisemitic history there is a substantial scholarly literature on the use of animal stereotypes for the Jews by their historic persecutors, most recently the erudite Jay Geller's,''Bestiarium Judaicum: Unnatural Histories of the Jews,'' to name but one. So, to my mind, the article's justification is that, despite frequently (as a student of these things) noting for well over a decade the frequency of zoomorphic dismissals of Palestinians, even those outraged by the attacks on Palestinians as 'animals' appear to have scant familiarity with the history of such terminological usage. If wikipedia, drawing on scholarship, can set some order, context and detail into this glossed over but well attested manner of speaking, it is doing its encyclopedic job. I couldn't care a fuck about the politics, except that most discourse in this area reflects a strong desire to control narratives, usually by excluding important things from the record. I do care about seeing that the vast literature on antisemitic stereotypes generated these last decades polemically against the Muslim world does not sweep from sight the substantial documentation, systematically ignored until recently, on Israeli stereotypes about Palestinians.[[User:Nishidani|Nishidani]] ([[User talk:Nishidani|talk]]) 21:40, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::The starting point is whether a subject is notable, hence why I asked my original question. I'm not seeing anything in either article at first blush that suggests they are anything more than cobbled-together coatracks with news articles and books saying "this person said bad thing about that group" with the obvious purpose of grinding axes. [[User:David Fuchs|<span style="color: #ad3e00;">Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs</span>]] <sup><small>[[User talk:David Fuchs|<span style="color: #ad3e00;">talk</span>]]</small></sup> 21:57, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::A subject is notable when secondary sources - scholarly books and articles in particular-cite the topic frequently or deal with it in more than en passant length, as do Bar-Tal and Teichman (2005), Bruneau and Kteily (2017), Chomsky (1883), Gerteiny (2007), Peteet (2005) and Pugliese (2020). Then we have a large number of articles that report instances of the phenomenon. The new topic of the programmatic raping of Israeli women putatively '''organized by Hamas''' on Oct 7 is 'cobbled together' from claims and anecdotes that emerged in those first few days. There is so far, no forensic study and overview of those claims available (the one attempt to do so in the NYTs was pulled to pieces almost immediately), unlike the case with these two articles. No one is questioning the notability of the latter as a topic - the only dispute is whether it is an allegation or a fact. 'Cobble together' is a wholly inappropriate term of dismissal, implying that a motif observed is a subjective construction, not present in the objective field described. The pattern, per secondary sources, zoomorphic denigration, is confirmed by the scholarly analyses of these discursive traits characteristic of both Israeli and Palestinian speech. In this sense, the articles are perfectly consonant with normative work on wikipedia. [[User:Nishidani|Nishidani]] ([[User talk:Nishidani|talk]]) 07:42, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::[[User:David Fuchs|Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs]], "If that were the benchmark, you could write that sort of article about literally any conflict on earth". Why not? By all means, anyone is invited to write a similar article about any international conflict on earth. Provided of course that they can find enough material about it in reliable sources. In the case of the two articles under discussion here, there seems to be a deluge of such sources. I'm not so sure if this is true about all other conflicts, but I didn't really check. But anyway if wikipedia has many articles about individual race horses and many articles about the diplomatic relations of each pair of countries in the world (such as [[Barbados–Suriname relations]]) than why not have many articles about the particular kinds of dehumanization that exist in each international conflict in the world? [[User:Vegan416|Vegan416]] ([[User talk:Vegan416|talk]]) 06:30, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::It's only my personal opinion but when I say "dismal", I am not referring to the quality of the articles but to the subject matter itself. [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 21:40, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::All history is dismal in that sense, as noted historians have said on numerous occasions. I have to grit my teeth every day just to force myself to maintain some contact with contemporary events by reading newspapers. One recompense for being dead is that, despite no longer having a cup of tea and a fag of a morning, the molecular combination that conjures up a sense of duty to keep oneself informed of the world, will have decomposed, extinguishing the material basis for that burdomsome faculty, and that thought gives me a sense of relief.[[User:Nishidani|Nishidani]] ([[User talk:Nishidani|talk]]) 21:46, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::Selfstudier (or Selfeditor), since when do we propose to censor articles just because their subject matter is dismal? See [[Wikipedia:UNCENSORED]] [[User:Vegan416|Vegan416]] ([[User talk:Vegan416|talk]]) 06:19, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::That's my opinion, whether other editors agree with it remains to be seen. If it were down to me, I would merge and simplify but there is at least one editor querying whether these articles even deserve to exist. [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 09:34, 22 May 2024 (UTC)


== (could-be-perceived-as) Racist content ==
However, the involved user ([[User:DE logics]] and IPs in range of 117.201.*.*) still does not relent, having even insulted us, calling us "Microsoft fanboys" and "Faithful dogs of Bill Gates".


This may be the wrong place to ask, but can someone please look at [[Biophilia hypothesis]] and more specifically [[Biophilia_hypothesis#Indigenous_Perspectives_on_the_Human-Nature_Connection|Indigenous Perspectives on the Human-Nature Connection]]? It is some weird [[noble savage]]-type (could-be-perceived-as) racism.
I previously requested an article protection, but the protection is by now worn off.


People did not live in balance with nature, balance was imposed upon them by nature. "Indigenous" people were and are human, with all the same flaws. They overhunted certain species into near-extinction and were just as familiar with the concept of greed as we are. Romanticizing them as noble savages is not just incorrect; it (could-be-perceived-as) racist.
I need to know what further action we should take. [[User:FleetCommand|Fleet Command]] ([[User talk:FleetCommand|talk]]) 12:52, 14 July 2011 (UTC)


The noble savage (''Do we not have an air quotes template?'') lives in peace only with those species that have never been vulnerable to mankind's population growth. [[User:Polygnotus|Polygnotus]] ([[User talk:Polygnotus|talk]]) 23:21, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
:That sounds like a rather long statement with excuses stuck into it. How about just straightforward sentences. Also you need to stick to verifiable things. Saying malware creators preferred one system to another is practically vacuous and certainly sounds unverifiable as a fact. If written somewhere Does it just mean they attacked one type rather than the other or does it mean one type of site succumbed more than another or does it mean they had actual preferences and somebody has done a survey of malware authors or is it just some blog spouting off attributing things to people who aren't going to say something themselves? Have you got a citation saying that WGA business is the major cause? As to long sentences I'd certainly think explanations should be in separate sentences.


:If the cited sources don't use the term "biophilia", then that section is probably [[WP:OR]]. I haven't managed to check this yet as most of the sources are paywalled.
:As to name calling you can complain at [[WP:WQA]] in the first instance. Attacking editors that way is against [[WP:CIVILITY]]. People should address the topic not other editors. [[User:Dmcq|Dmcq]] ([[User talk:Dmcq|talk]]) 13:14, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
:I would wait before calling it racist. I suspect that this section was just written to ''promote'' indigenous perspectives, not to romanticize them in the way the concept of noble savage did. [[User:NicolausPrime|NicolausPrime]] ([[User talk:NicolausPrime|talk]]) 00:30, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
::Good point, thank you! I will call it "could-be-perceived-as racist" instead. But it is entirely possible to do could-be-perceived-as racist stuff with great intentions. [[User:Polygnotus|Polygnotus]] ([[User talk:Polygnotus|talk]]) 00:35, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
:The overhunting of large animals in North America (which I'm assuming you're referencing) is actually disputed! There's growing evidence it was due to climate change instead. See: https://www.science.org/content/article/what-killed-great-beasts-north-america [[User:Sock-the-guy|Sock-the-guy]] ([[User talk:Sock-the-guy|talk]]) 19:07, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
::That, while interesting, was not what I was talking about. [[User:Polygnotus|Polygnotus]] ([[User talk:Polygnotus|talk]]) 19:22, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
:If there was a way to "promote" the beliefs of indigenous people, that section reads like that. It's sorta starting at the wrong place, and should likely introduce the reasons why such groups had to live in harmony with nature, and then move on to why their beliefs can center around that. [[User:Masem|M<span style="font-variant: small-caps">asem</span>]] ([[User Talk:Masem|t]]) 19:31, 22 May 2024 (UTC)


:The racism angle is a distraction: if something is racist it must be removed. Unless we are racists, we must agree with you.
::<p>Let me make it clear:</p><p>First, this statement has only one primary source: [http://googleonlinesecurity.blogspot.com/2007/06/web-server-software-and-malware.html a Google Blog post]. Other sources only quote, paraphrase and exaggerate this source.</p><p>Second, this source says exactly what I have written above; no less and no more. However User:DE logics prefers to write: "IIS hosts malware", although, under our protest, he has written</p><blockquote>"Google did a study of 80 million domains by examining the server's HTTP response headers and came to the conclusion that, even though (according to Google), usage of IIS servers is 23%, the {{sic|number of malware}} served by these servers is 49%, same as Apache whose usage is 66%. Google suggests the cause of this could be the use of pirated copies of Windows, for which patches against security {{sic|loopholes}} in Microsoft IIS might not be available from Microsoft."</blockquote><p>Third, unfortunately, the WGA being the cause has already failed verification: Microsoft supplies security updates to ''everyone''. The Google blog post points to a security update download page on Microsoft.com to supports its "WGA is to blame" assertion. However, that update is available to ''everyone''. The best we can assume is that this whole matter is a [[WP:DATED|dated]] matter.</p><p>Last, I never suggested to write ''exactly'' what I listed in the four clauses; it is merely my draft. I told you that I initially dismissed this whole "IIS serves malware" matter. However, I proposed this draft as an alternative resolution that both of us accept. But User:DE Logics doesn't even discuss it. [[User:FleetCommand|Fleet Command]] ([[User talk:FleetCommand|talk]]) 07:41, 16 July 2011 (UTC)</p>
:This article is about a theory and every claim in it should be presented that way. Furthermore, sources should always be about the theory. It's not our role to find sources to support or debunk the theory. If the proponents say noble savages are biophilic, the article should report that. If they don't, it shouldn't. If sources say the theory is racist, the article should report it. If they don't, it shouldn't.
:It shouldn't be difficult to summarize the literature, explain its degree of acceptance, and present opposition and its support, without getting into arguments about racism.
:[[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 03:51, 26 May 2024 (UTC)


== Mermaids-Section on [[Gender Identity Development Service|GIDS]] ==
:::Normally blogs are not allowed on Wikipedia, I think that one probably is okay as being verifiably by an expert in the subject. I notice they don't use the 'prefer' word I was objecting to which is good. I think the statements from Google should however be qualified with the year 2007. Putting your own analysis into the same statement as Google's is just plain wrong. In a separate statement you can then say that Microsoft does allow all security updates even for pirated copies of windows and put in the appropriate citation for that. Put in any much of your own analysis an it will amount to synthesis on your part. We're supposed to be saying what outside people say, if you can find outside sources saying what you want to say that is the way to do things. [[User:Dmcq|Dmcq]] ([[User talk:Dmcq|talk]]) 11:19, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
*{{pagelinks|Mermaids (charity)}}


Article: [[Mermaids (charity)]]
::::"Putting your own analysis into the same statement as Google's is just plain wrong." I don't remember having suggested such a thing. My four-clause draft does not contain any statement of my own. But as for the WGA verifiability issue, simply put: Google blog provided a source; per [[WP:V]] and [[WP:PRIMARY]], I checked that source. Result: Verification failed. Again, per WP:V, I double-checked with other sources, just in case. Result: Failed again, see these:
Putting this here possibly too early but I'd rather that then let this descend into squabbling. There's been some back-and-forth on this section and I'd like it to see a more broad audience, especially because I have little experience with wiki policy in general. I don't see how phrases like 'dealings with' and 'lobbying' are neutral especially when sourced from an opinion piece and book. The source I found also disputed what was written in the paragraph, so I'm unsure that stating these sentences as fact is even the right way to go about it. [[User:Sock-the-guy|Sock-the-guy]] ([[User talk:Sock-the-guy|talk]]) 16:32, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
::::* [http://windowsteamblog.com/windows/b/windowssecurity/archive/2009/04/27/who-gets-windows-security-updates.aspx Windows Team Blog]
::::* [http://content.usatoday.com/communities/technologylive/post/2010/02/windows-pirates-encouraged-to-install-security-updates/1 USA Today]
::::* [http://www.tomshardware.com/news/windows-pirate-bootleg-security-patches,7666.html Tom's Hardware]
::::I said all these to conclude what you just said: Regardless of whether Google's statement was correct in 2007 or not, we have NPOV problem: IIS servers may no longer be hosting 40% of the worlds' malware. These negotiation concerns aside, one of the editors maintains that without a complementary assessment, Google blog cannot be trusted at all as Google is a Microsoft competitor.


:The "book" is a glowingly-reviewed, award-winning publication by a well-respected investigative journalist specifically about what went wrong at GIDS. This is a high quality secondary source. The quote the text is:
::::But these are all minor concerns. The biggest problem is that our dear User:DE Logics does not hear of changing his statement in any way, not even your suggestion of qualifying it with 2007. [[User:FleetCommand|Fleet Command]] ([[User talk:FleetCommand|talk]]) 22:14, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
:{{quote frame | But demands for change grew more vociferous from the mid 2000s. Along with Mermaids, the Gender Identity Research and Education Society - GIRES - lobbied hard for GIDS to lower the age at which they'd consider treating children with puberty blockers. }}
:This is reflected accurately in the article. I think you were premature in bringing this barely-discussed content dispute to NPOV. [[User:Void if removed|Void if removed]] ([[User talk:Void if removed|talk]]) 11:28, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
::Unsure how being overly cautious in getting more eyes and input on a topic is a bad thing, or as you said on the talk page, not assuming good faith. I thought it would be helpful to get the opinions of people who don't almost entirely edit only British trans-related topics as they might be better at discussing what a neutral point of view is.
::Anyone can write a book, or be an 'investigative journalist.' From my understanding, that's not what makes a source reliable or unbiased. The author has a clear POV from her other writings and social media that should be considered. Using this book is just repeating the opinion of a person, not citing a reliable source. [[User:Sock-the-guy|Sock-the-guy]] ([[User talk:Sock-the-guy|talk]]) 16:56, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
:::The book is not an opinion piece. If we are not allowed to use the work of investigative journalists, we would not be allowed to use any news publication as a source. [[User:Sweet6970|Sweet6970]] ([[User talk:Sweet6970|talk]]) 11:48, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
::::We don't use the 'investigative journalism' from PragerU either [[User:Sock-the-guy|Sock-the-guy]] ([[User talk:Sock-the-guy|talk]]) 15:43, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
::::Investigative journalism is a primary source. It requires secondary sources to establish weight. If it is ignored, then the article should ignore it. If it is reported, then only what is reported has weight for inclusion. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 03:57, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::I don’t see how this makes sense. Reputable newspapers are treated as suitable sources for facts. We don’t need a secondary source to report on a newspaper report before we can use a newspaper report as a source. And the book itself is so significant that it has its own article: [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_to_Think_(book)] And the comparison with PragerU does not make sense. [[User:Sweet6970|Sweet6970]] ([[User talk:Sweet6970|talk]]) 16:37, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::The book is the definitive factual account of the collapse of GIDS. It is not opinion. It is not 'PragerU'. It is a meticulous, fair, balanced, significant, and very well regarded secondary source. Barnes' original Newsnight investigation prompted the NHS service review that resulted in its closure, so kind of the exact opposite of "ignored" .
:::::The source has been brought here because apparently it is not neutral. Here's what reviews say:
:::::[https://www.theguardian.com/books/2023/feb/19/time-to-think-by-hannah-barnes-review-what-went-wrong-at-gids The Guardian]:
:::::{{quote frame | A journalist at the BBC’s Newsnight, Barnes has based her account on more than 100 hours of interviews with Gids’ clinicians, former patients, and other experts, many of whom are quoted by name. It comes with 59 pages of notes, plentiful well-scrutinised statistics, and '''it is scrupulous and fair-minded'''. Several of her interviewees say they are happy either with the treatment they received at Gids, or with its practices – and she, in turn, is content to let them speak. Such a book cannot easily be dismissed. To do so, a person would not only have to be wilfully ignorant, they would also – to use the popular language of the day – need to be appallingly unkind. }}
:::::[https://www.the-tls.co.uk/articles/time-to-think-tavistock-clinic-hannah-barnes-book-review-cordelia-fine/ Times Literary Supplement]
:::::{{quote frame | Hannah Barnes’s scrupulous research is a painful, important reminder}}
:::::[https://www.ft.com/content/a45a9a0b-5d2f-4c4a-b2ef-6a8796ea5d10 Financial Times]
:::::{{quote frame | A book about the Tavistock could easily have been a howl of outrage. But Hannah Barnes has written a meticulously researched, sensitive and cautionary chronicle.}}
:::::[https://archive.is/IfIRE The Times (Book of the Week)]
:::::{{quote frame | Her account is sober, rhetoric-free and meticulously researched }} [[User:Void if removed|Void if removed]] ([[User talk:Void if removed|talk]]) 19:31, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::Ah yes the ''notoriously neutral and balanced UK press'' that never does anything transphobic thought the book was "scrupulous and fair minded." That's not the glowing set of endorsements you seem to think it is. [[User:Simonm223|Simonm223]] ([[User talk:Simonm223|talk]]) 12:26, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Making unevidenced allegations against the entire UK press is not a serious argument. The ''Guardian'', the ''Financial Times'', and the ''Times'' all have green ticks at [[WP:RSP]]. And these 3 newspapers have different political positions. [[User:Sweet6970|Sweet6970]] ([[User talk:Sweet6970|talk]]) 22:58, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
:There is some misunderstanding of our use of news sources above. A re-read of [[WP:Primary]] might enlighten some of you. Most 'news' articles on events that are current (to the writing) are primary sources, not because they are in newspapers, TV, etc, but because they deal with ongoing events at the time of writing, relying on re-published primary accounts with little rigourous analysis, interpretation or other marks of good secondary sourcing. Investigative journalism (when done properly), even when dealing with current/recent events, most often tips over into secondary sourcing [[WP:SECONDARY]] because they often contain ''analysis, evaluation, interpretation, or synthesis'' from primary sources. A book, written significantly after the event, written by an investigative journalist who collects, evaluates, interpretes from primary accounts. Interviews, primary source material etc, is almost always going to be a reliable secondary source as per the criteria our guidelines and polices describe. The only reason it would be unsuitable is if the author's reputation was unsound or they were unqualified. That doesnt appear to be the case here. "Investigative journalism is a primary source" is not only both wildly incorrect per our policies and guidelines, but also the almost exact opposite of the reality outside of tabloid journalism. [[User:Only in death|Only in death does duty end]] ([[User talk:Only in death|talk]]) 12:57, 29 May 2024 (UTC)


== Leftist politics in the U.S. ==
== Lacking Balance ==
* {{la|Michael Shellenberger}}


Several editors have engaged in tactics to modify the page of Michael Shellenberger in a biased direction with intent to diminish his accomplishments. My own work has not been to cheerlead. I have simply asked for the Times Environmentalist of the Year Award to be recognized as such. I have notified several editors because they have coordinated together on the talk page. M.boli has given too little weight to the award, stating that what the times articles writers liked about Michael Shellenberger and Nordhaus is more important than acknowledging it as an award. NewsAndEventsGuy, M.boli, and Dumuzid have repeatedly taken down my edits. Dumuzid further gives the award too little weight, insisting it was not an award, justifying such with a citation from the Times article trying to claim it was a special report and not an award. LuckyLouie cited a paragraph from Shellenbergers' wikipedia article to prove the article these editors are working on is not biased. The quote is irrelevent as it ignores all the slanted portions throughout the article. NewsAndEventsGuy and Valjean have accused me of edit warring for pointing out these biases.  Shellenberger won an award and however editors on wikipedia may feel about him, giving this matter due weight, staying neutral, and not missing the point are the correct things to do. [[Michael Shellenberger|Michael Shellenberger (Talk]]) [[User:Brahman12|Brahman12]] ([[User talk:Brahman12|talk]]) 17:56, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
{{la|American Left}}
: I haven't seen anything to indicate several editors have been coordinating to bias the article. But if you have evidence, it sounds like something you should report to [[WP:AN/I]].
<blockquote>LID and SDS split in 1965 when SDS voted to allow communists ([[Marxist Leninist]]s [[democratic centralism|organized conspiratorially]]) to vote; afterwords, SDS was taken over and destroyed by Marxist Leninists such as [[The Weatherman]] and the [[Progressive Labor Party (United States)|Progressive Labor Party]].</blockquote>
* Regarding the {{tq|Times Environmentalist of the Year Award}}. There is no such award. There is something called [https://content.time.com/time/specials/packages/article/0,28804,1841778_1841816,00.html "Heroes of the Environment 2008, A special report on the eco-pioneers fighting for a cleaner, greener future"]. It is not an award, it is a list of people Time Magazine has chosen to highlight for their role in environmental activism in a special report for that year. Here's [https://content.time.com/time/specials/packages/completelist/0,29569,1841778,00.html the full list for 2008].
* Far from being suppressed, Shellenberger's 2008 inclusion on the list '''is''' noted in the existing text of the article at this time: {{tq|[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Michael_Shellenberger#Break_Through:_From_the_Death_of_Environmentalism_to_the_Politics_of_Possibility In 2007, Shellenberger and Nordhaus published Break Through: From the Death of Environmentalism to the Politics of Possibility. The book is an argument for what its authors describe as a positive, "post-environmental" politics that abandons the environmentalist focus on nature protection for a new focus on technological innovation to create a new economy. '''They were among 32 of Time magazine's Heroes of the Environment (2008) after writing the book and received the 2008 Green Book Award from science journalist John Horgan.]'''<ref name="TimeHeroes2008">{{Cite magazine |last=Walsh |first=Bryan |date=2008-09-24 |title=Ted Nordhaus and Michael Shellenberger - Heroes of the Environment 2008 |url=http://content.time.com/time/specials/packages/article/0,28804,1841778_1841779_1841804,00.html |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20090729030254/http://www.time.com/time/specials/packages/article/0,28804,1841778_1841779_1841804,00.html |archive-date=29 July 2009 |access-date=2022-11-20 |magazine=Time Specials}}</ref>}}
:[[User:LuckyLouie|&#45; LuckyLouie]] ([[User talk:LuckyLouie|talk]]) 18:39, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
::LuckyLouie, you haven't addressed the points made by MysticMagpie on the talk page nor has any of the other editors addressed the points made. [[User:Brahman12|Brahman12]] ([[User talk:Brahman12|talk]]) 16:46, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
:::"Regarding the {{tq|Times Environmentalist of the Year Award}}. There is no such award." seems to be a direct refutation of part of the claim. [[User:Slatersteven|Slatersteven]] ([[User talk:Slatersteven|talk]]) 16:52, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
:::{{tq|you haven't addressed the points made by MysticMagpie nor has any of the other editors addressed the points made}}. They are addressed directly on the Talk page by another editor, Zenomonoz: "We don't use dictionary definitions to label things "award". That is [[WP:SYNTH]]. Time does not call it an award, so [[WP:STICKTOSOURCE]]". And I have to agree with him, your refusal to get the point is getting [[WP:TENDENTIOUS]]. See [[WP:DROPTHESTICK]]. [[User:LuckyLouie|&#45; LuckyLouie]] ([[User talk:LuckyLouie|talk]]) 17:12, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
::::The burden of proof is on you to demonstrate that it is not an award. You have not proven such. [[User:Brahman12|Brahman12]] ([[User talk:Brahman12|talk]]) 18:37, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::Brahman12, the burden of proof is on anyone who wants to add or restore material. See [[WP:BURDEN]], which is part of our Verifiability policy. In short, if you want to claim that Michael Shellenberger won a "Times Hero of the Environment Award", then you need to find a source that ''directly and explicitly'' says that. The [https://content.time.com/time/specials/packages/article/0,28804,1841778_1841779_1841804,00.html Time source] that [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Michael_Shellenberger&diff=1222917328&oldid=1222630452 you added here] does not do that. [[User:Woodroar|Woodroar]] ([[User talk:Woodroar|talk]]) 21:02, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::The section in Shellenbergers article that should have the times award is 'awards and recognition' and the editors on the talk page won't acknowledge the award he won there. You're using the rules on Wikipedia to enforce Orwellian doublespeak. [[User:Brahman12|Brahman12]] ([[User talk:Brahman12|talk]]) 02:16, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Hey, thanks for the notification. And accusing others of "Orwellian doublespeak" when your stated is position is "NO, you have to prove he DIDN'T win an award" is rather rich. [[User:Dumuzid|Dumuzid]] ([[User talk:Dumuzid|talk]]) 02:31, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Are you referring to [[Heroes of the Environment]]? <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">[[User:Moxy|Moxy]]</span>🍁 02:31, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
::::::::That is indeed what we're talking about, at least to my understanding. Cheers. [[User:Dumuzid|Dumuzid]] ([[User talk:Dumuzid|talk]]) 19:17, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
I have not been notified of this discussion, as required. -- [[User:Valjean|Valjean]] ([[User talk:Valjean|talk]]) ('''''[[Help:Notifications|<span style="color:#0bf">PING me</span>]]''''') 17:34, 26 May 2024 (UTC)


:To be clear, neither was I, if my sarcasm was not clear above. Cheers. [[User:Dumuzid|Dumuzid]] ([[User talk:Dumuzid|talk]]) 19:16, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
[Historical note: the Weather Underground, which later became a terrorist organization, emerged within the [[Students for a Democratic Society]] (SDS) and fought for control with the Progressive Labor Party <s>(founded 1876), which was never Leninist</s>.]


{{talk-ref}}
Is the phrasing of this text neutral? Another editor has inserted similar text, which in my opinion, compromises neutrality and re-orients the article to events in the 1960s. I would be appreciative if other editors could look at recent changes. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 18:42, 14 July 2011 (UTC)


== Adding back POV tag without ongoing discussion or attempts to fix the perceived problem with the article ==


An editor keeps adding the maintenance tag to [[European Court of Human Rights]] despite no consensus that he is right about the perceived issue or any attempt to fix it. Last time I checked the tag is supposed to be for ongoing improvement not a badge of shame. What is the appropriate response to incorrect use of the tag? (I tried reverting but don't want to get into an edit war) ([[User talk:Buidhe|t]] &#183; [[Special:Contributions/Buidhe|c]]) '''[[User:buidhe|<span style="color: black">buidhe</span>]]''' 17:34, 24 May 2024 (UTC)


:There is no requirement that someone needs to fix the issue that they're tagging. The only requirement according to [[WP:NPOVD]] is to start a discussion that clearly explains the issues that need fixing. They seem to have done so on the Talk page, so I don't think it's an incorrect use of the tag. Whether their argument has merit or not, or whether the editor is being disruptive or not, is a different matter. I hope people other than you two can weigh in on the content dispute on the Talk page. [[User:Mokadoshi|Mokadoshi]] ([[User talk:Mokadoshi|talk]]) 04:07, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
:[Historical note: Ignore the previous paragraph's falsehood about [[Progressive Labor Party (United States)]].]
::@[[User:Mokadoshi|Mokadoshi]], would it be possible for you to weigh in your inputs to next section related to the article Jinn, too. That would be helpful. [[User:Bookku|&#32;Bookku ]] ([[User talk:Bookku|talk]]) 06:08, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
:The (Maoist) Progressive Labor Movement split off (after 1948) from the [[Communist Party USA]]: The CPUSA and Maoist sects are Leninist, obviously. The Progressive Labor Movement renamed itself the Progressive Labor Party sometime in the mid 1960s.
:Gitlin describes Progressive Labor as Marxist Leninist on page 190. Obviously, T4D doesn't know the first thing about SDS, and apparently cannot be bothered to read Gitlin or the WP article on Progressive Labor. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 09:30, 15 July 2011 (UTC)


== POV tagging @ article Jinn, be retained or removed? ==
Is the phrasing of this text neutral? Another editor has inserted similar text, which in my opinion, compromises neutrality and re-orients the article to events in the 1960s. I would be appreciative if other editors could look at recent changes. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 18:42, 14 July 2011 (UTC)


* {{al|Jinn}}
:What is the actual language in the reliable sources? Is "taken over and destroyed" the precise language in the sources used? Is there a precise cite for the statement that some group "was never Leninist"? [[User:Collect|Collect]] ([[User talk:Collect|talk]]) 21:15, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
The pre-RfC stage was and is almost supposed to proceed for RfC formatting step, but an additional content issue came up about [[WP:DUE|DUE/UNDUE]] relevance and fringe-ness at [[Talk:Jinn#Comparative mythology, Due, Fringe or Undue?]].
::This particular section seems dubious. "Organised conspiratorially", linking to "democratic centralism" is an interpretation. Of course Marxist-Leninists are organised by democratic centralism - that is what should be said. I see some scholarly histories of the Left cited. Is there no good history of SDS? [[User:Itsmejudith|Itsmejudith]] ([[User talk:Itsmejudith|talk]]) 21:17, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
for discussion and initial inputs have been received.


Two side issues have cropped up is one user removed section [[Jinn#Comparative mythology]] and also tagged article for POV another user reverted the same.
Sources provided:
*Todd Gitlin. ''The Sixties: Years of Hope, Days of Rage'' (1987) ISBN 0-553-37212-2
*Miller, James. ''Democracy is in the Streets: From Port Huron to the Siege of Chicago''. Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard University Press, 1994 ISBN 978-0674197251.
*Todd Gitlin later acknowledged that LID Director Tom Kahn, "to his eternal credit", was correct in opposing that deletion, which helped Marxist Leninists to take over SDS: Todd Gitlin, p. 88, in discussion with Irving Howe: ''Politics and the Intellectual: Conversations with Irving Howe''. John Rodden, Ethan Goffman, eds. Purdue University Press 06/30/2010 series: Shofar Supplements in Jewish Studies ISBN 13:9781557535511


* [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jinn&diff=1224877669&oldid=1224877431 First instance] of POV tag and removal, [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jinn&diff=1225618495&oldid=1225618199 the second instance].
No page nos. are provided and therefore I do not know what the original text is. I do not have a source that the SLP was not Marxist Leninist, but have not seen sources that they were. Supposedly had then been Leninists they would have joined the CPUSA which Lenin directed his followers to join. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 21:50, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
*<small> @ [[User:VenusFeuerFalle|VenusFeuerFalle]] and @ [[User:TheEagle107|TheEagle107]] please state your concerns, Why you want POV tag or not, in max. 150-200 words, since DR is any way soon to proceed at RfC stage.</small>
:TFD mis-states my scholarship. I cited a page reference to Todd Gitlin's The Sixties, linked to Amazon where you can confirm it. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 21:59, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
::On the talk page you provide a reference to p. 387 of Gitlin's book[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AAmerican_Left&action=historysubmit&diff=439384304&oldid=439378141] and a link to his book on Amazon.[http://www.amazon.com/Sixties-Years-Hope-Days-Rage/dp/0553372122#reader_0553372122] But Amazon does not show p. 387 of the book. However, the entire book can be viewed at the Internet Archive. (Click at "PDF" under "View this book").[http://www.archive.org/details/TheSixties] While page 387 mentions violence by the Weather Underground, it says nothing about their relationship with SDS. The PLP is not even mentioned in the book. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 02:03, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
:Gitlin discusses "Progressive Labor" on 16 pages, as shown on Amazon. In particular, according to Amazon, he calls PL a Marxist Leninist group on page 190. He discusses PL and SDS on page 240. Gitlin discusses both Progressive Labor and the Weatherman Underground and the 1969 SDS convention on page 382.
:You wasted this noticeboard's time, by running here without discussing anything on the page. You further waste our time by failing to read. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 08:47, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
::I found the full text of Gitlin's book online. It is detailed and fascinating but above all it is an intensely personal account. I don't find this a waste of the noticeboard's time. How to do justice to Gitlin's account within a short and dispassionate Wikipedia article is something that requires careful consideration. [[User:Itsmejudith|Itsmejudith]] ([[User talk:Itsmejudith|talk]]) 09:18, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
:::It is a waste of time for T4D to have rushed to this noticeboard without indicating what was his POV/non-neutral concern at the article's talk page, especially after I asked him. (It is a waste of time, assuming that T4D or you know anything about SDS, the way it would waste the mathematics project's time to complain that I had written 1968+2=1970.) <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 09:24, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
::::TFD did take the question up on the talk page before coming here. If you will be patient, you should get some input here to help the page. I have some knowledge of the history of Leftist groups in Europe, less in relation to the USA, but enough background to look texts up and understand them. With luck you will get some further views from noticeboard regulars. The gloss "organized conspiratorially" for a link to [[democratic centralism]] contains an interpretation not conducive to NPOV. A better wording would be "following the [[democratic centralism|democratic centralist]] form of organization". But you need at least one good source for any epithet attached to any group. "Marxist-Leninist", for example, is a minefield in that period. [[User:Itsmejudith|Itsmejudith]] ([[User talk:Itsmejudith|talk]]) 10:09, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::No, he did not.
:::::He complained about POV/Nonneutrality and lack of references. I provided references and asked him what the problem was. Then he came here.
:::::"Conspiratorially" is a standard NPOV explanation for the totalitarian euphemism "democratic centralism". Sidney Hook was correct when he described the Communist Party USA as a conspiracy in his book, "Freedom yes, conspiracy no" (or similar title). Hook's book had some controversy, but nobody serious objected to his characterization of leadership cadre of the CPUSA as a conspiracy.
:::::Do you have similar problems with discussing right totalitarians as when discussing left totalitarians? ["Nazis committed genocide" "No, that's point of view. The Nazis said they were providing living space for their race, by reducing subhuman populations.... Your saying that Jews and Slavs and Gypsies are humans is POV."!] <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 10:34, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::OK it might be good here to get a little less confrontational with people who are trying to help. Regarding the "conspiratorial" issue if it is a "standard NPOV explanation for ... [[democratic centralism]]" then why don't I see it in the entry on that topic? It would seem from first glance to be ''one'' way to describe democratic centralism and perhaps not the most common, and it does sound less than NPOV. Either way though we don't need to describe democratic centralism at all in this other article, we just need to name it and link to it's entry. IMO the conspiratorial part should go.[[User:Griswaldo|Griswaldo]] ([[User talk:Griswaldo|talk]]) 11:20, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::To answer your question, the obvious truth is that that that article, like many on similar topics, is written by communists or anti-anticommunists. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 13:32, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::I'm sorry for being irritated, but T4D failed to discuss the issues at the page. I have improved the passage, and I'm not going to waste further time, when none of you have followed WP procedure and tried discussing things at the article talk page. This discussion is closed. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 13:30, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::Procedural note: Kiefer, you have a valid point in saying that there should have been discussion on the article talk page before bringing it here... but we don't close discussions on this page because one editor says so. Now that it ''is'' being discussed here, there is no harm in letting it continue here until resolved (is it?). [[User:Blueboar|Blueboar]] ([[User talk:Blueboar|talk]]) 13:43, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::As noted before, I have updated the draft on the talk page, which I had understood was Wikipedia's preferred way to improve content. I shan't participate further in a pointless discussion that has no relation to improving the article or the proposed section in question. You are all welcome to help improve the draft at the talk page of the article. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 13:59, 15 July 2011 (UTC)


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(out) Kiefer.Wolfowitz is using the 1993 version of the book while the on-line version (1987) uses different pagination. Nonetheless I cannot find the specific claims in the on-line version. Even if they were there, the phrasing used violates neutrality.
* Also A user has proposed updates for consideration at [[User:Louis P. Boog/sandbox/Jinn sandbox 4-20-2024|this sand box]] for the article [[Jinn]].


As a discussion facilitator fyi a [[WP:DUE]] discussion (some aspects may touch [[WP:Fringe]]) is at [[Talk:Jinn#Pre-RfC]] stage's [[WP:RSN#Hachette Livre]] and [[Wikipedia:No original research/Noticeboard#Notable scholar's own work acceptable or OR?|WP:ORN]] step. After RSN and WP:ORN step, RfC formatting is likely to be discussed at [[Talk:Jinn#Pre-RfC]] in a new sub section.
As anyone can see, there was extensive discussion on the talk page, and it was apparent that it was unproductive. K.F wants to focus the article on the 1960s and present the article from the point of view of the [[SDUSA|Social Democrats USA]], a political group that had several hundred members.
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* While article soon to go for RfC, <u>Input requesting questions at this stage are</u>:
[[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 14:11, 15 July 2011 (UTC)


::a) Whether POV tag should be retained or removed?
:TFD now is violating AGF and making a personal attack based on unsubstantiated speculations about my politics. As I have stated before, the history of my editing on this set of articles is easy to check, and certainly does not come because of adherence to SDUSA, but upon following a request of Carrite, who has stated his past membership in 3 organizations from the old SP. Similarly, I provided a discussion of Solidarity, not because I am a reader of "Against the Current" or a believer that militancy can solve all problems but because of a concern with presenting the most interesting political groups with integrity. I would urge TFD to emulate the intelligence and honesty that Carrite displays.
::b) Whether section [[Jinn#Comparative mythology]] be there or in removed state until RfC consensus is achieved?
:I have no idea what TFD is babbling about, with his claim that any phrasing violates neutrality. It is time for TFD to specify NPOV violations or be silent.
::C) Help in RfC formatting too welcome.
:Why does he object to a paragraph on the leading socialists' roles the Civil Rights movement and the War on Poverty or SDS? Michael Harrington and Gitlin and Sale seem never to have been members of SDUSA, btw. (A basic knowledge of history would prevent such charges.)
:Sincerely, <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 15:27, 15 July 2011 (UTC).
:<small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 15:27, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
:Sincerely, <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 15:27, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
::Calling one of the three history sections, "Max Shachtman, Civil Rights and the War on Poverty"[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=American_Left&action=historysubmit&diff=438711914&oldid=438710915] provides undue emphasis to certain groups, individuals, activities, etc. Your claim that they had more influence then (when they had a membership of approx. 1600) than in 1912, then they owned numerous newspapers, had elected officials and obtained 6% of the vote in a presidential election, is not supported. It also wrongly implies that the socialists were the driving force behind these movements. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 18:31, 15 July 2011 (UTC)


<small> Well I am myself playing a just discussion facilitator role up til now. [[User:Bookku|&#32;Bookku ]] ([[User talk:Bookku|talk]]) 17:00, 25 May 2024 (UTC) </small>
:::If so, your article originated the over-emphasis on a mythic figure called "Shachtman": I quote what you consider neutral language, which is a bastardized version of the pseudoscholarly history inflicted on the public by the PA chair of SPUSA. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 23:55, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
<blockquote>
#In 1972, the Socialist Party was renamed [[Social Democrats, USA]] (SDUSA) '''and now had only 1,600 members''' [Reverses chronology of Isserman, failing to note that the 1600 comes from the SP (while Harrington's UAW friend counted 1000, according to Isserman)].<ref>Isserman, p. 300-301.</ref> '''Dissidents''' left to form the [[Democratic Socialist Organizing Committee]] (DSOC) in 1973, led by [[Michael Harrington]].<ref>Isserman, p. 311.</ref> The same year another faction of the SPA, including [[David McReynolds]], formed the [[Socialist Party, USA]] which continues to run presidential candidates.<ref>Isserman, p. 422.</ref>


:To be honest, I do not think we should give the user that much credit. The User is constantly shifting the debate more and more into their direction. There has been no issue that so ever. Their original claim that "jinn are essential to islam" they claimed not to be part of the article ''is '' actually part of the article. Then the user claims to be ignored, which is a lie, in fact, they ignored all replies. Then they added a template, without the template even being appropriate. There is one issue raised after the other, and before one is even solved, the User rises another. At this point, I assume it is part of their strategy to push their own viewpoint, making so muhc trouble until people forget what it was about. Therefore, although you have my regards for your dedication to solve this issue, I do not plan to further invest time or energy to taht matter. We do not need to answer every absurd request, I always linked wiki guidlines to each action I did. Just because the user choose to ignore them and raising another dispute, does not mean I need to conform. [[User:VenusFeuerFalle|VenusFeuerFalle]] ([[User talk:VenusFeuerFalle|talk]]) 17:15, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
#In the 1960s there was a renewed interest in anarchism, and some anarchist and other left-wing groups developed out of the [[New Left]]. Anarchists began using [[direct action]], organizing through [[affinity group]]s during [[Anti-nuclear movement in the United States|anti-nuclear campaigns]] in the 1970s. In the 1990s, anarchists attempted to organize across North America around [[Love and Rage]], which drew several hundred activists. One successful anarchist movement was [[Food not Bombs]], that distributed free vegetarian meals. Anarchists received significant media coverage for their disruption of the 1999 [[WTO]] conference, called the [[World Trade Organization Ministerial Conference of 1999 protest activity|Battle in Seattle]], where the [[Direct Action Network]] was organized. Most organizations were short-lived and anarchism went into decline following a reaction by the authorities that was increased after the [[911 attacks]] in 2001. However by 1997 anarchist organizations had again begun to proliferate.<ref>Graeber</ref>
::The user insists on his opinion without any evidence and without showing a single source that proves his point of view, while I presented many sources on the talk page. The user is biased towards a certain point of view that is against the [[WP:MAINSTREAM|mainstream views]], plz see: [[Talk:Jinn#Cherrypicking?]].--[[User:TheEagle107|TheEagle107]] ([[User talk:TheEagle107|talk]]) 18:09, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
#:The article discusses anarchism but not civil rights, labor, or the war on poverty.
:::There are two other Muslim world related sections having live discussions / at least some participation. I wonder why still no inputs for this section? [[User:Bookku|&#32;Bookku ]] ([[User talk:Bookku|talk]]) 09:08, 29 May 2024 (UTC)


*{{Ping|Masem}}, {{Ping|Slatersteven}} You seem to be most editing and recently active on this notice board hence pinging you, also because, actually DR is mostly proceeding in ideal structured manner but users lately bit nervous. An early guidance / inputs shall be helpful I suppose hence requesting your inputs.[[User:Bookku|&#32;Bookku ]] ([[User talk:Bookku|talk]]) 17:55, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
:You are getting your sequences mixed. Harrington supported negotiations with the North Vietnamese, while the Shachtmanites wanted to pursue victory. That was a major cause of his break with that faction, and he later came to support unilateral withdrawal. I have provided two high quality reliable sources to back that up. While Shachtman died in 1972, the faction he led may still be called "Shachtmanites". Providing 1/3 of the history section to a group that had at most 1,600 members, is undue. And labor is mentioned in the article. And as sources state, the Old Left largely irrelevant to the civil rights movement in the 1960s and the "War on Poverty" was led by the Johnson administration. And yes, anarchism is mentioned because there are more anarchists today than members of the SDP. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 03:54, 17 July 2011 (UTC)


== Misinformation from Israeli officials ==


There is some NPOV controversy in [[Misinformation in the Israel–Hamas war]], particularly the [[Misinformation_in_the_Israel%E2%80%93Hamas_war#Reliability_of_Israeli_officials_as_sources|Reliability of Israeli officials as sources]] section. A [[Talk:Misinformation_in_the_Israel%E2%80%93Hamas_war#Remove_the_IDF_misinformation_section|discussion]] was (improperly?) started by non EC users, suggesting the extreme option of nuking the section. It would be good to get more input from non-involved and EC editors.


My (involved) opinion is that the section does have a serious [[WP:WEIGHT]] issue. Editors have continually been expanding the section without enough consideration of significance, relevance, proportionality, or redundancy. For example, the section currently includes four separate quotes (three in the intro + the Qatari PM) that express a general skepticism about Israel's truthfulness, without getting into specifics.
=== References ===
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There's also a lack of coverage about misinformation from the other side of the war, such as Hamas' [https://www.haaretz.com/opinion/2024-02-12/ty-article-opinion/.premium/how-hamas-betrays-islam/0000018d-9c72-d92c-a9ed-fffb305b0000 statement] that Oct 7 fighters "only targeted the occupation soldiers". So there may be [[WP:PROPORTION]] and [[WP:STRUCTURE]] issue, but this would be easy enough to address if the Israeli section wasn't so lengthy.
== Social democratic and socialist groups ==


I've trimmed some content from the Israeli section, and I'd be inclined to trim a lot more still, but it might not be appropriate without more input. What's the right balance here? — [[User:XDanielx|<span style="font-family: Arial; font-weight: bold; color: green;">xDanielx</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:XDanielx|T]]</sup>/<sub>[[Special:Contributions/XDanielx|C]]</sub>\<sup>[[Wikipedia:Editor review/xDanielx|R]]</sup> 18:17, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
#The main social democratic and socialist groups that emerged from the Socialist Party-Social Democratic Federation (SP-SDF) after 1972.
#:This is the long name, which was never used popularly. All the standard sources refer to it as simply the SP.
===Social Democrats USA (SDUSA)===
{{main|Social Democrats USA}}
#'''The Shachtmanites, called the Realignment Caucus, in the SP-SDF argued that since organized labor supported the Democratic Party, they should join the Democratic Party''' and transform it into a left-wing party, with the Republicans becoming a right-wing party. Further, they argued that they should s'''upport the [[War in Vietnam]] to stop Communist expansion. In 1972, they supported Senator [[Henry M. Jackson|Henry Jackson]] for the Democratic presidential nomination, and re-named the party [[Social Democrats USA]] (SDUSA),''' dropping the term "socialist". '''While they retained membership in the [[Socialist International]], they supported [[Jimmy Carter]] in the 1976 election and had moved sufficiently right by 1980, that many of their members served in the Reagan administration.'''<ref>Busky, pp. 163-165</ref>
#Compare this with what I have written, which has been edited in other articles by Carrite. They did not support the Vietnam War, as the NYT reports.
#:Busky's book is a pseudoscholarly book, not an academic book: it is not terrible, but it is dull and poorly referenced. Busky was a national officer in SPUSA, editing Hammer and Tong and the time of his death. Busky's book declares his COI, his having been a state chair of the SPUSA in PA since 1978.


:The section contains several pretty clear-cut examples of statements made by Israeli officials that turned out to be not true ([[Attacks on Palestinians evacuating Gaza City]] and the white phosphorus incident), so the section should be kept.
===Socialist Party USA (SPUSA)===
:Including information in a section called Misinformation is pretty much equivalent to stating it in wikivoice. We should not do it unless we have multiple RS calling something "misinformation" or at least explicitly contradicting the words of Israeli officials.
{{main|Socialist Party USA}}
:Much of the current content should be removed as it's not described as misinformation by RS, for example:
#Members of the Debs Caucus opposed supporting the Democrats and began working outside the Socialist Party with antiwar groups such as the [[Students for a Democratic Society (1960 organization)|Students for a Democratic Society]]. Many locals of the SD-SDF voted to disaffiliate. They re-organized as the [[Socialist Party USA]] (SPUSA) and kept control of the old Debs Caucus paper, the ''Socialist Tribune'', later re-named ''[[The Socialist (US newspaper)|The Socialist]]''. The SPUSA continued to run local and national candidates, although by 2000 they had only about 1,000 members. In 1972 they supported the presidential campaign of [[Benjamin Spock]] of the [[People's Party (United States, 1970s)|People's Party]]. Their 2000 candidate for president was [[David McReynolds]].<ref name="Busky, pp. 164-165">Busky, pp. 164-165</ref>
:# {{tquote|analysis by the BBC found that video released by the Israeli military following the Al-Shifa Hospital siege had been edited}} [https://www.theguardian.com/world/2023/nov/17/idf-evidence-so-far-falls-well-short-of-al-shifa-hospital-being-hamas-hq] - no mention of misinformation
:# {{tquote|In March 2024, the Israeli army said it had "fired precisely" at individuals who posed a threat to soldiers during the Flour massacre; however, a United Nations team investigating the massacre's aftermath stated there was evidence of heavy shooting of civilians by the IDF.}} [https://www.aljazeera.com/news/liveblog/2024/3/8/israels-war-on-gaza-live-60000-pregnant-women-face-malnutrition-in-gaza?update=2757853] - no mention of misinformation, "heavy shooting" and "precise fire" are not mutually exclusive
:etc. etc. [[User:Alaexis|Alaexis]]<sub>[[User_talk:Alaexis|¿question?]]</sub> 19:12, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
::I replied to your cross posting of this uh..., at the article talk page. [[User:Selfstudier|Selfstudier]] ([[User talk:Selfstudier|talk]]) 22:18, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
:xDanielx tried to confront me for creating a paragraph about an attack the IDF launched against a church in Gaza in December. This ultimately didn't end well for him, [[Talk:Misinformation in the Israel–Hamas war#Statement by Layla Moran?|as can be seen here]]. I'm saying this because it shows he's coming here for begrudging the mere existence of a section on Israeli misinformation, and not because he has serious objections to the quality of the contributions and the sources they use. His objections are all about preserving the side he sympathizes most in this conflict. [[User:Peleio Aquiles|Peleio Aquiles]] ([[User talk:Peleio Aquiles|talk]]) 22:12, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
::For context for others, [[User:Peleio Aquiles]] added some of the content in this section which I expressed accuracy concerns about, see also [[User_talk:Peleio_Aquiles#POV_content|here]]. I don't think we need to get into accuracy concerns here though; the overarching concern here is [[WP:WEIGHT]].
::They also removed my [[Template:Unbalanced]] section tag twice. I thought was an appropriate way to draw attention from some non-involved editors, no?
::There have also been [[WP:CIVIL]] and [[WP:FAITH]] issues, but this probably isn't the place for that. — [[User:XDanielx|<span style="font-family: Arial; font-weight: bold; color: green;">xDanielx</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:XDanielx|T]]</sup>/<sub>[[Special:Contributions/XDanielx|C]]</sub>\<sup>[[Wikipedia:Editor review/xDanielx|R]]</sup> 23:02, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
:::That first conversation we had also serves as proof of the astonishing capacity you have to selectively read sources and not see an argument that occupies prominent space in the text, when such blindness serves a certain purpose. Admittedly, not seeing that Channel 4 had consulted independent sources who refuted the Hamas fake phone call Israel presented was not as bad as not seeing that Layla Moran had given very extensive details in two separate links employed as sources in the entry of how the Israeli army had harassed, starved and killed Christians at the Holy Family church, a bizarre failure that you have not yet explained, but that you should in the name of encouraging good [[WP:FAITH]], since it doesn't seem possible for a patient and honest reader to have missed all this content.
:::I am amused by the suggestion you're holding back on the editors of that page by not addressing issues of accuracy right now. I have the impression that had you had any such serious complaints, you wouldn't have wasted your time with that quixotic performance against the paragraph on the Holy Family church siege.
:::Your attempt to impose the Unablanced tag over the Israeli misinformation section should be rejected for two reasons: first, because it clearly presupposes the view that Wikipedia needs to pretend that all sides in a given conflict are equally given to lying, a rule that is not observed in articles on similar topics, such as [[Disinformation in the Russian invasion of Ukraine|desinformation on the Ukrainian conflict]], where the section on Russian disinformation is much longer. And second, because it makes no sense to impose this tag on the section on Israeli disinformation, which thematically has no obligation to provide content on alleged disinformation on the part of Palestinian militias.
:::If you don't like how lengthy the Israeli disinformation section has become, you could follow the advice other editors have already given you and start a section on Hamas or PIJ disinformation, something that as far as I know you haven't been prevented from doing by anyone there. That you haven't done so yet is perhaps because you don't know of any examples of such misinformation, in which case imposing the Unbalanced tag the way you're doing amounts to punishing other editors for doing work that you can't do. [[User:Peleio Aquiles|Peleio Aquiles]] ([[User talk:Peleio Aquiles|talk]]) 10:38, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
::::Peleio Aquiles, in ARBPIA, your tone is like wearing a hat that says "topic ban me". All the personal stuff is unnecessary. You can save yourself some typing by leaving it out. [[User:Sean.hoyland|Sean.hoyland]] ([[User talk:Sean.hoyland|talk]]) 11:00, 28 May 2024 (UTC)


== Use of contentious labels in lead of an article ==
===Democratic Socialists of America (DSA)===
{{main|Democratic Socialists of America}}
Although [[Michael Harrington]], who came to lead the Coalition Caucus, agreed to work within the [[Democratic Party (United States)|Democratic Party]], he broke with the Shachtmanites over support of the [[War in Vietnam]], urging peace negotiations''', although not an immediate withdrawal'''. He led his caucus out of the SD-SDF to form the [[Democratic Socialist Organizing Committee]] (DSOC), which became a member of the [[Socialist International]]. '''Although this group never ran candidates for public office''', it became the largest of the three groups emerging from the SD-SDF, attaining a peak membership of as many as 10,000. In 1982, it joined with the [[New American Movement]] (NAM), an antiwar group that emerged from the [[New Left]] of the 1960s, to form the [[Democratic Socialists of America]] (DSA).<ref name="Busky, pp. 164-165"/>


There has been NPOV controversy on-going about the [[Reiki]] article on its [[Talk:Reiki#USE_OF_TECHNICAL_TERMS_AS_BUZZWORDS|Talk Page]], which is nothing new (I have read through all archives of the talk page to get a better picture, and it has been an on-going debate for nearly 20 years).
<references/>
</blockquote>


I specifically find the use of the word '''''quackery''''' in the lead objectionable, which seems unduly loaded and wilfully placed in such a prominent position, as well as further uses of [[WP:WTW]] throughout the article. Taken into consideration in its entirety, the article reads as though it had been written by someone with a personal vendetta against the topic.
===Marxist Leninism and SDS===
I added references to James Miller's ''Democracy is in the streets'', a history of SDS. Please note that Miller documents the obvious role in Marxist Leninists sects, like the Progressive Labor Party, in destroying SDS, contrary to the confident ignorance stated above. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 13:25, 19 July 2011 (UTC)


Input from other editors would be appreciated. Thank you! –[[User:Konanen|Konanen]] ([[User talk:Konanen|talk]]) 17:22, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
===Analysis===
Like many who have been active turning WP articles into propaganda for the SPUSA, TD4 is basing his articles on SPUSA literature. I prefer to use reliable sources, preferably written by honest people of intelligence and academic competence, like Drucker. One of the things that makes Solidarity and Against the Current interesting is that their writers are smart, honest, and hard working---and many of them are courageous in real life.


:Maybe it could be more specific as to labeled quackery by whom (scientists? journalists? quacks?) but I don't see the problem with it. If it is medical pseudoscience, it is quackery, isn't it? Anyway, we aren't saying it in Wikipedia's voice, we're pointing out that it has been characterized as such by presumably relevant persons to the topic. [[User:DIYeditor|—DIYeditor]] ([[User talk:DIYeditor|talk]]) 01:03, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
It is not a minor error to state that Harrington did not call for an immediate pull-out, it is willfull ignorance of the basic facts of the history, one acknowledged from the NYT to Harrington to Drucker. It is not hard to check the sources I gave, but TD4 so far has lacked the curiosity or courage to read others' ideas, swimming cozily "inside the whale"<!-- (fish) -->. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 23:55, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
::I have addressed the question of {{tq|labeled quackery by whom}} in the [[Talk:Reiki#USE_OF_TECHNICAL_TERMS_AS_BUZZWORDS|Talk page]], where I pointed out that one of the two references attached to ''quackery'' did not even use that term, and that the other reference was of questionable reliability: {{tqb|The [https://sciencebasedmedicine.org/no-editors-of-the-atlantic-reiki-does-not-work/ other reference] tagged to the word ''quackery'', however, does attribute said word to Reiki. Yet that source amounts to nothing more than a [[WP:QUESTIONABLE]] <s>rant</s> opinion piece whose inclusion in the lead definitely skews the balance of the article unduly.}}
::–[[User:Konanen|Konanen]] ([[User talk:Konanen|talk]]) 12:53, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
:::Makes sense. [[User:DIYeditor|—DIYeditor]] ([[User talk:DIYeditor|talk]]) 20:33, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
::::@DIYeditor; agree. --[[User:Dustfreeworld|<span style="color: navy">'''Dustfreeworld'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Dustfreeworld|talk]]) 16:32, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
::::: See below about "parity of sources". SBM is an excellent source for this subject -- [[User:Valjean|Valjean]] ([[User talk:Valjean|talk]]) ('''''[[Help:Notifications|<span style="color:#0bf">PING me</span>]]''''') 17:13, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
:I agree that "quackery" is falling a bit into slang even if it is commonly used. It's already labeled as pseudoscience, and to me, the context to be added is ''why'' it is called that. All that is there, and can be achieved with a rewrite as: {{green|Reiki is a pseudoscience. It is based on qi ("chi"), which practitioners say is a universal life force, although there is no empirical evidence that such a life force exists. Clinical research does not show reiki to be effective as a treatment for any medical condition, including cancer, diabetic neuropathy, anxiety or depression. There is no proof of the effectiveness of reiki therapy compared to placebo. Studies reporting positive effects have had methodological flaws. Reiki is used as an illustrative example of pseudoscience in scholarly texts and academic journal articles.}} [[User:Masem|M<span style="font-variant: small-caps">asem</span>]] ([[User Talk:Masem|t]]) 01:11, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
:I don't have a personal vendetta against the topic. Even had a friend that was into it years ago. However I consider it to be "quackery" as it is pseduoscience. However as mentioned probably best to use the term pseudoscient unless there is a [[WP:WEIGHT]] of [[WP:RS]] calling it "quackery" in which case it would not be a [[WP:NPOV]] probablem to do likewise in the article. ''[[User:TarnishedPath|<b style="color:#ff0000;">Tar</b><b style="color:#ff7070;">nis</b><b style="color:#ffa0a0;">hed</b><b style="color:#420000;">Path</b>]]''<sup>[[User talk:TarnishedPath|<b style="color:#bd4004;">talk</b>]]</sup> 02:13, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
:Seems easier to take it as a writing quality problem than a NPOV problem. "Reiki is a pseudoscience, and its practice has been characterized as quackery" is a pointless tautology. Also not sure why pseudoscience/pseudoscientific needs to appear 3 times in the lead in quick succession. [[User:Chipmunkdavis|CMD]] ([[User talk:Chipmunkdavis|talk]]) 02:19, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
:"Its practice has been characterized as quackery" must be cited to a source that says its practice has been characterized as quackery, not just sources that call it quackery. Otherwise if violates WEASEL and NOR. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 00:47, 31 May 2024 (UTC)


Nearly every definition of "quackery" includes things like deliberate misleading, deliberate pretending and fraud. IMO this should not be in the article much less in the lead. The lead should be a summary of the body of the article, and there is nothing about such aspects in the article. Sincerely, <b style="color: #0000cc;">''North8000''</b> ([[User talk:North8000#top|talk]]) 20:43, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
:Reliance is made on ''[http://books.google.com/books?id=3joQKjDtn4wC&lpg=PP1&pg=PP1#v=onepage&q&f=false Democratic socialism: a global survey]'' ([[Greenwood Publishing Group|Praeger Publishers]], 2000) by [http://www.greenwood.com/catalog/author/B/Donald_F._Busky.aspx Donald F. Busky], a professor of political science, for history in the late 20th century. Your comment "Busky's book is a pseudoscholarly book, not an academic book" is wrong. If you think the book is inaccurate, then you need to find sources that explain events differently. Notice that the authors used as sources for the article represent a broad range of views, and very few are socialists of any kind. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 15:35, 16 July 2011 (UTC)


:I can see a very strong consensus here. I agree with you all. Thanks so much for the helpful comments:

:@'''Konanen''', “quackery ... objectionable”
::Your paragraphs, quoted above, are based on Busky, apparently. Do you acknowledge that Busky was a SPUSA official and activist, and that you knew that when you used his book?
:@'''TarnishedPath''', “probably best to use the term pseudoscient unless there is a WP:WEIGHT of WP:RS calling it "quackery" in which case it would not be a WP:NPOV probablem”
::Busky's publisher states his rank as " Adjunct Professor of History and Political Science at Camden County College". I am sorry but being an adjunct professor at a community college is such a low academic rank that it raises more questions about his research competence than it credits him. In fact, his book is a joke, that gets basic facts wrong, and not randomly but always to indulge his prejudices as the Napolean of PA socialist puritanism. But I have pointed out his errors before, and you have failed to learn or reply to specific criticisms. Busky/you state that Harrington supported the war and the NYT states Harrington called for an immediate withdrawal. Only one of these can be correct, and you are wrong. It is time for you to grow up and admit your errors.
:@'''CMD''', “ "Reiki is a pseudoscience, and its practice has been characterized as quackery" is a pointless tautology. Also not sure why pseudoscience/pseudoscientific needs to appear 3 times in the lead in quick succession”
::About NPOV. You seem to think that SPUSA literature counts as a point of view and must be reported on WP. On the contrary, WP has no policy requiring that its article on [[Jesus Christ]] report the beliefs of any of the ''[[Three Christs of Ypsilanti]]''.
:@'''TFD''', “..”quackery" must be cited to a source that says its practice has been characterized as quackery, not just sources that call it quackery. Otherwise if violates WEASEL and NOR”
::The more important question is why you have allowed yourself to use such a bad source and continue to defend it even when persons have admitted its errors elsewhere on WP. Do you see that my edits to SPUSA and SPA and DSOC and SDUSA have not been reverted? Doesn't that tell you that I may know what I am talking about?
:@'''North8000''', “Nearly every definition of "quackery" includes things like deliberate misleading, deliberate pretending and fraud. IMO this should not be in the article much less in the lead.”
::You should be concerned that you may have naively trusted SPUSA's organizational literature and activists, almost as infallible.
::Sincerely, <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 16:16, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
:. --[[User:Dustfreeworld|<span style="color: navy">'''Dustfreeworld'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Dustfreeworld|talk]]) 16:50, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
::Add back ping...
:::TD4 has failed to retract and apologize for his violations of AGF and NPA, particularly his charging that I wanted to write history from the standpoint of SDUSA. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 16:26, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
::@[[User:Konanen|Konanen]], @[[User:TarnishedPath|TarnishedPath]], @[[User:Chipmunkdavis|Chipmunkdavis]], @[[User:The Four Deuces|The Four Deuces]], @[[User:North8000|North8000]] --[[User:Dustfreeworld|<span style="color: navy">'''Dustfreeworld'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Dustfreeworld|talk]]) 19:26, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
::::The discussion is about whether or not your edits are neutral. You re-wrote the history section so that half of it was devoted to the SDUSA, and wrote "[their leader] was an extraordinary public speaker and formidable in debate, and his intelligent analysis attracted young socialists... [his] youthful followers were able to bring new vigor into the Party...."[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=American_Left&oldid=439049856] You then refer (above) to other U.S, leftists as " (Marxist Leninists organized conspiratorially)" and "left totalitarians", then bring up Nazi Germany. At WQA and here you have accused myself and others of a pro-SPUSA bias. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 17:26, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::I have noted that another editor had plagiarized the SPUSA's "history" in another article. Several editors have noted their COI as officers (some national) of SPUSA and as long-term activists, one long-toothed (!) and ''esteemed'' editor noting participation in the Debs caucus at 1972, and I have noted concern that such sophisticated editors had failed to notice the plagiarism of an SPUSA brochure. In any event, these editors have not reverted my edits to this cluster of articles (mentioning SPUSA), nor have they asked for revision on the article talk pages (which would be well within their rights under WP's COI policy). Your article, perhaps because it had naively trusted Busky, had similar biases. You have not '''answer'''ed '''the question: Did you read Busky's statement that he was an officer of SPUSA ''or'' not?''' <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 17:52, 17 July 2011 (UTC)


:::::Thank you for your criticisms of the draft. I have edited the draft, and reduced the discussion of Shachtman's role in the Socialist Party. I had tried to explain why the SP had increased its contributions to American politics because of Shachtman, whose role you first highlighted. Would you please look at the latest version of the article, and see whether you still believe that it gives more than 50% of the history to SDUSA? I don't understand this charge. <small>I also don't understand its relevance, even if it were true: the majority of the SP (SDUSA) had 2/3 of the votes at the 1972 convention, and Harrington had the other 1/3. It would be useful to expand the DSOC material to mention Democratic Agenda and the Democratic Party midterm convention of 1978, which criticized Carter's policies, and also to mention DSOC's role in organizing against draft registration. Please expand the material on DSOC using reliable sources.</small>
::::::What is the problem with referring to the Progressive Labor Party as Marxist Leninist? (The Weatherman/national office faction of SDS adopted Marxist Leninist posturing and tactics also, when SDS became a mad-house, at least nationally and at many leading chapters: I do not cite Sale's discussion of "insanity" etc.)
::::::For clarity: ''On this page'', I referred to "left totalitarians", but not on the article page. I asked you why you had a problem describing left totalitarians, and asked whether you had a similar problem with right totalitarians. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 17:41, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
::::Re: Busky. The main criteria for rs is the publisher, which in this case is an academic publishing company that conducts fact-checking. Your reference to the ''NYT'' is an example - articles are considered rs because they are in the ''NYT'', we may not even know who the author is. BTW you can read about the convention in ''The other American'' by [[Maurice Isserman]], p. 290,[http://books.google.com/books?id=Ym-qm7i5WHYC&lpg=PP1&pg=PA290#v=onepage&q&f=false] which shows that Harrington supported the compromise resolution rather than the one for immediate withdrawal. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 18:18, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::You first mentioned Busky's being a professor of political science, to indicate why his book is not a joke. If you want to backpedal, you could at least acknowledge that you had referred to his qualifications before. It is hard to continue ascribing good faith to you, when you fail to acknowledge any errors or bad arguments, and just keep changing the arguments as your previous arguments are found to be faulty.
::::::Regarding your latest defense of Busky: Busky's publisher is one of the weaker academic presses, if it is even considered an academic press, of course. It is not the U of Chicago or Cambridge or Oxford or Harvard, which are leading publishers of history. Regardless, his book is a joke: We can discuss this with the projects on American history or journals, which have expertise in such matters, if you want to lose again. An honest academic can read one page of Busky and see that it's unprofessional and unreliable---although it is infinitely better than the SPUSA's literature, which has been plagiarized in other WP articles. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 17:41, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::Harrington supported other compromises at earlier conventions. He led call for an immediate withdrawal, according to the NYT in December 1972, the only one discussed in the article,because it was the name change convention after which Harrington resigned and founded DSOC and after which the small SPUSA was formed.
<small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 23:54, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::The reliability of Busky's book is a question better addressed on the Reliable Sources Noticeboard than here. It seems to be a normal scholarly book, and if it has a bias towards one political party then that could be addressed by adding material from other sources with a different bias. Anyway, does someone want to post on RSN for further views? [[User:Itsmejudith|Itsmejudith]] ([[User talk:Itsmejudith|talk]]) 18:27, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::::Judith, posting on another noticeboard would be an even greater waste of time because the book is a joke. Have you bothered reading any pages? You are quite wrong about its viewpoint balancing others. WP requires reliable high quality sources, not nonsense by political activists. Please read what T4D wrote above and compare it with the coverage in the present article to see how biased he has been (and apparently still is). <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 00:10, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::Now posted there. [[User:The Four Deuces|TFD]] ([[User talk:The Four Deuces|talk]]) 05:18, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

===1960s and SDS: Present version of the article===

====SDS====
<small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<font style="color:blue;background:yellow;">&nbsp;'''Kiefer'''</font>]].[[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|Wolfowitz]]</span></small> 18:52, 27 July 2011 (UTC) The article has the following paragraph on SDS:
<blockquote>Harrington, Kahn, and Horowitz were officers and staff-persons of the [[League for Industrial Democracy]] (LID), which helped to start the [[New Left]] [[Students for a Democratic Society]] (SDS).<ref>Miller, pp. 24–25, 37, 74-75: c.f., pp. 55, 66-70 : Miller, James. ''Democracy is in the Streets: From Port Huron to the Siege of Chicago''. Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard University Press, 1994 ISBN 978-0674197251.</ref> The three LID officers clashed with the less experienced activists of SDS, like [[Tom Hayden]], when the latter's [[Port Huron Statement]] criticized socialist and liberal opposition to communism and criticized the labor movement while promoting students as agents of social change.<ref>Kirkpatrick Sale, ''SDS'', pp. 22-25.</ref><ref>Miller, pp. 75-76, 112-116, 127-132; c.f. p. 107.</ref> <!-- Gitlin, I think, notes that such public strong criticisms did not help and might have hindered their efforts at realignment. -->LID and SDS split in 1965, when SDS voted to remove from its constitution the "''exclusion clause''" that prohibited membership by communists:<ref>Kirkpatrick Sale, ''SDS'', p. 105.</ref> The SDS exclusion clause had barred "advocates of or apologists for" "totalitarianism".<ref>Kirkpatrick Sale, ''SDS'', pp. 25–26</ref> The clause's removal effectively invited "disciplined cadre" to attempt to "take over or paralyze" SDS, as had occurred to mass organizations in the thirties.<ref>Gitlin, p. 191.<p>[[Todd Gitlin]]. ''[http://www.amazon.com/Sixties-Years-Hope-Days-Rage/dp/0553372122#reader_0553372122 The Sixties: Years of Hope, Days of Rage''] (1987) ISBN 0-553-37212-2.
</ref> Afterwords, [[Marxism Leninism]], particularly the [[Progressive Labor Party (United States)|Progressive Labor Party]], helped to write "the death sentence" for SDS,<ref>Sale, p. 287.<p>Sale described an "all‑out invasion of SDS by the Progressive Labor Party. PLers—concentrated chiefly in Boston, New York, and California, with some strength in Chicago and Michigan—were positively cyclotronic in their ability to split and splinter chapter organizations: if it wasn't their self‑righteous positiveness it was their caucus‑controlled rigidity, if not their deliberate disruptiveness it was their overt bids for control, if not their repetitious appeals for base‑building it was their unrelenting Marxism". Kirkpatrick Sale, ''SDS'', pp. 253.</ref><ref>"The student radicals had gamely resisted the resurrected Marxist-Leninist sects ..." (p. 258); "for more than a year, SDS had been the target of a takeover attempt by the Progressive Labor Party, a Marxist-Leninist cadre of Maoists", Miller, p. 284. Miller describes Marxist Leninists also on pages 228, 231, 240, and 254: c.f., p. 268.</ref><ref>Gitlin, p. 191.<p>[[Todd Gitlin]]. ''[http://www.amazon.com/Sixties-Years-Hope-Days-Rage/dp/0553372122#reader_0553372122 The Sixties: Years of Hope, Days of Rage'' (1987) p. 387] ISBN 0-553-37212-2.
</ref><ref>Sale wrote, "SDS papers and pamphlets talked of 'armed struggle,' 'disciplined cadre,' 'white fighting force,' and the need for "a communist party that can guide this movement to victory"; SDS leaders and publications quoted Mao and Lenin and Ho Chi Minh more regularly than Jenminh Jih Pao. and a few of them even sought to say a few good words for Stalin". p. 269.</ref> which nonetheless had over 100 thousand members at its peak.<references/></blockquote>

====DSOC/DSA====
18:52, 27 July 2011 (UTC): This is the present state of the description on [[American Left]], which uses reliable sources (rather than Busky, whose reliability has been contested here):
; Quoting article:

[[Michael Harrington]] resigned from Social Democrats, USA early in 1973. He rejected the SDUSA (majority Socialist Party) position on the Vietnam War, which demanded an end to bombings and a negotiated peace settlement. Harrington called rather for an immediate cease fire and immediate withdrawal of U.S. forces from Vietnam.<ref>{{harvtxt|Drucker|1994|pp=303–307}}:<p>{{cite book|title=Max Shachtman and his left: A socialist's odyssey through the "American Century"|first=Peter|last=Drucker|publisher=Humanities Press|year=1994|isbn=0-391-03816-8|ref=harv}}</ref> Even before the December 1972 convention, Michael Harrington had resigned as an Honorary Chairperson of the Socialist Party.<ref name="NYTimes"/> In the early spring of 1973, he resigned his membership in SDUSA. That same year, Harrington and his supporters formed the [[Democratic Socialist Organizing Committee]] (DSOC). At its start, DSOC had 840 members, of which 2 percent served on its national board; approximately 200 had been members of [[Social&nbsp;Democrats,&nbsp;USA]] or its predecessors<!-- (the [[Socialist Party of America#Max_Shachtman.2C_Civil_Rights.2C_and_the_War_on_Poverty|Socialist&nbsp;Party Social&nbsp;Democratic Federation]], "formerly the Socialist Party,&nbsp;USA"), --> whose membership was then 1,800, according to a 1973 profile of Harrington.<ref>{{harvtxt|O'Rourke|1993|pp=195–196}}: <p>{{cite book|last=O'Rourke|first=William|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=5iUJfPxlTCcC&pg=PA195|chapter=L: Michael Harrington|title=Signs of the literary times: Essays, reviews, profiles, 1970-1992'|pages=192–196|publisher=SUNY Press|series=The Margins of Literature (SUNY Series)|year=1993|isbn=9780791416815|ref=harv}}

Originally: {{cite journal|last=O'Rourke|first=William|title=Michael Harrington: Beyond Watergate, Sixties, and reform|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=5iUJfPxlTCcC&pg=PA197&dq=%22Socialist+Party%22+OR+%22Social+Democrats%22,+%22Michael+Harrington%22,+%22New+York+Times%22&source=gbs_toc_r&cad=4#v=onepage&q=Michael%20Harrington&f=false|pages=6–7|journal=SoHo Weekly News|volume=3|number=2|month=13 November|year=1973|ref=harv}}
</ref>

DSOC became a member of the [[Socialist International]]. DSOC supported progressive Democrats, including DSOC member Congressman [[Ron Dellums]], and worked to help network activists in the Democratic Party and in labor unions.<ref>Isserman, pp. 312–331: Isserman, Maurice (2001) ''The Other American: The Life of Michael Harrington.'' New York: Perseus Books.</ref> It had 10,000 members at its peak of membership,{{Dubious|date=July 2011}}{{Citation needed|date=July 2011}} making it the largest democratic-socialist or social-democratic organization in the United States.

In 1982 DSOC established the [[Democratic Socialists of America]] (DSA) upon merging with the [[New American Movement]], an organization of democratic socialists mostly from the New Left.<ref>[http://books.google.com/books?ei=e3MtTr68Hc7NswbvtLH3Dw&ct=result&id=O4h5AAAAIAAJ&dq=Isserman%2C+DSOC%2C+NAM+%22Michael+Harrington%22%2C+%22New+York+Times%22&q=DSOC%2C+NAM#search_anchor Isserman, p. 349]: Isserman, Maurice (2001) ''The Other American: The Life of Michael Harrington.'' New York: Perseus Books.</ref> Its high-profile members included Congressman [[Major Owens]] and [[William Winpisinger]], President of the [[International Association of Machinists]].
<references/>

====Closing this discussion?====

I trust that this notice can now be closed. (I repeat that the original notice was premature, and would urge TfD to allow talk-pages a reasonable time before coming here again.) 16:46, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

== War of the Pacific ==

*'''Article''': [[War of the Pacific]]
*'''Evidence of Talk Page Discussion''': [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:War_of_the_Pacific#Article_shows_the_extrem_nacionalistic_P-B_POV]
*'''Evidence of notifying other party of this discussion''': [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3AKeysanger&action=historysubmit&diff=439642505&oldid=437633012]
*'''Problem''': Disagreement on how the '''Peru-Bolivia Mutual Defense Treaty''' should be written in the article's introductory summary. In the following block quote (taken directly from the first paragraph in the article), the '''bold''' part is the text in question.

<blockquote>The War of the Pacific (Spanish: Guerra del Pacífico) took place in western South America from 1879 through 1883. The forces of Chile fought a '''defensive alliance''' of Bolivia and Peru. The conflict is also known as the "Saltpeter War", as disputes over mineral-rich territory were the war's prime cause. The conflict originated in a dispute between Chile and Bolivia over a 10 cent tax on the Antofagasta Nitrate & Railway Company, but Bolivia and Chile's controversy over ownership of Atacama preceded and laid foundations for the conflict. Peru entered the affair in 1879, initially attempting to mediate the dispute, but when Chile invaded the Bolivian port city of Antofagasta on February 14, 1879, Bolivia activated its mutual defense treaty with Peru.</blockquote>
==='''War of the Pacific; Discussion''':===
*My position is that the text in question is correct and should not be removed.
*The user seeking to remove it ([[User:Keysanger]]), calls it an "extreme nationalistic Peru-Bolivia POV". However, the text in question is neither "extreme" or "nationalistic".
*[[User:Keysanger]] thinks that "defensive alliance" is a term that shows a Peruvian-Bolivian point of view, hence why he calls it "nationalistic".
*''History'': The Peru-Bolivia alliance was created (also titled) as a '''mutual defense pact''', which would only be activated if either Peru or Bolivia were invaded by a foreign country. Bolivia called for its activation when Chile invaded Antofagasta in February 14, 1879. Peru activated the alliance the day after Chile declared war on both Bolivia and Peru.
*The historical record demonstrates that the Peru-Bolivia pact was a '''defensive alliance'''. Regardless of any POV, the plain historical facts speak for themselves.
*Even [[User:Keysanger]] admits to this by writing: "I think that every one can read there that the alliance '''was''' actually defensive". ([http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia%3AArbitration%2FRequests%2FCase&action=historysubmit&diff=439629223&oldid=439623506])
*Therefore, given the evidence and the other user's comment on the matter, I would like for the reviewer of this NPOV case to, basically, agree with me and put a quick end to this really silly matter.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 16:10, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
:I am not sure so please interpret this as me trying to understand the issue. I gather that the other editor's concern is that the wording gives a simplistic impression at the article's outset that Chile was the aggressor and Peru-Bolivia were innocent parties who were attacked. Reading the article, it is more complicated. Is it really important to say this was a defensive alliance in the opening? [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 12:03, 16 July 2011 (UTC)

::Thank you for the response. I'll respond in bullets since it's easier for me to present the points, and probably also easier for you to read them (if you don't like it, please tell me):
::*It seems that the other editor believes that only Peru/Bolivia saw their alliance as defensive. Since Chile viewed the alliance as offensive, he believes that anything disagreeing with it must be "extreme Peru/Bolivia nationalism".
::*My goal is to provide (following the summary method established in Wikipedia's Manual of Style) a straight-forward summary of the events, avoiding any long-winded argument on the subject. Regardless of what Peru, Bolivia, or Chile think/thought about the alliance, the historical record clearly has the Peru-Bolivia alliance as a ''defensive alliance''. Not only was the alliance titled, "Mutual Defense Pact", but it also only came into effect after Chile declared war on both Bolivia and Peru.
::*'''Assumptions''': I don't like assumptions, and I believe these should not be in the introductory summary. The assumptions are discussed, in detail, in the "Crisis" and "Background" sections of the article. Chile's POV ''assumes'' that since they were never mentioned in the secret treaty, and since they were never invited to join the mutual defense pact, that it must have been aimed at them. However, once again based on the historical record at that time: Peru was having border conflicts with Ecuador, and both Bolivia/Peru were having issues with Brazilian colonists in the Amazon region (particularly the area known as "Acre", which both Peru/Bolivia claimed).
::I'm not trying to make any of the sides look or sound like victims (I'm pretty sure both sides of the conflict had their interests at stake in some form or another). All I am trying to do is present the summary based on the historical record, not on POV ''assumptions''. Based on the historical record, the Peru-Bolivia alliance was, especifically, a defensive alliance. It is necessary to be exact in order to avoid vague statements which will end up confusing the reader. --[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 14:22, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
:::Well I think it is obvious that you are not promoting any kind of 'extreme nationalism'. But to be honest I actually find the sentence ''The forces of Chile fought a defensive alliance of Bolivia and Peru'' a bit awkward in any case. Isn't it simpler and just as accurate to say something like ''Chile fought against Bolivia and Peru'' or ''Chile went to war with Bolivia and Peru''? It seems if Chileans are going to be offended with the present wording, it's a neat way to just steer clear of the issue and still inform the reader just as well. Or maybe I am missing something? [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 15:20, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
::::I am not an expert on international law, but my understanding is that there does exist a difference between an offensive alliance (in which two or more countries unite to attack a common enemy), and a defensive alliance (in which two countries unite to defend their territory; i.e., mutual defense pacts). My only objective is to avoid vagueness by focusing on the historical record. I feel that if we give way to vagueness for the sake of not hurting anyone's feelings, then information in Wikipedia is going to lack veracity. For example, it would be like re-wording [[The Holocaust]] or [[Nanking Massacre]] article so that it doesn't offend Nazi supporters or the Japanese. Of course, I do not compare both of these issues as on the "same level" or kind as this case with the War of the Pacific; it's just an example. Please do tell me if you feel I'm just being stubborn, or if I may actually have some sort of point? Thank you.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 16:33, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::I am sure there is a difference between a defense pact and an aggressive alliance, just as there is a difference between a democracy and a dictatorship. North Korea is in reality one of the worst examples of a totalitarian dictatorship and yet the country's formal title is the 'Democratic People's Republic of Korea'. So it is possible - and I am not saying this is my view but just that it is hypothetically possible - that although Peru/Bolivia described their alliance as a 'defense pact' on paper, it was still in reality something other than a purely defensive alliance. Your sentence could be seen as being contrived to emphasise the words 'defensive alliance' and to have Wikipedia's voice state at the outset that this is a fact. I definitely would change the wording somehow, although I stop short of recommending that you remove 'defensive alliance' until I know more about the subject. Do you have reliable sources that we can look at to see how professional historians describe the conflict? Also I note that the other editor asserts that some professional historians disagree that it was a purely 'defensive alliance'. I guess he is referring to Chilean historians and that you would say these are revisionist histories? [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 06:44, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::Hi Alexh, yes, he has [[Talk:War of the Pacific/Archive 7#Mediation of defensive/offensive issue. here]] a list of sources that considered the pact sometimes as offensive or some times as defensive. But he takes only the one side. --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 11:17, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::Hi Keysanger, there are over 40,000 words on that page. Could you help me out by directing me to the exact location of the refs? [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 11:46, 17 July 2011 (UTC)

::::::::Hi Alex, thanks for your time. Of course I want to help in this question. I apologize in advance for my poor English, but, I think, it is enough for such a simple question.
::::::::At that time I added 9 sources about the issue defensive-ofensive. (the references are at the bottom of this page).
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::::::::{|class="wikitable" style="background: #efefef;"
|* There are 1 italian, 3 US-american and 5 Chilean reliable sources that confirm that the treaty '''can be and was interpreted''' as defensive and/or as offensive or as a menace for Chile:

: 1) Donald E. Worcester and Wendell G. Schaeffer, ''"The Growth and Culture of Latin America"'', New York, Oxford University Press, 1956, 963 pages. Page 706, Relevant Text<ref>Donald Worcester:
: ''In 1873, fearing the consecuences of taking action against Chile, Peru and Bolivia signed a defensive-offensive alliance''</ref>
::the treaty is called (only) defensive-offensive, the authors don't go into details.
: 2) Alfred Barnaby Thomas, Profesor of History, University of Alabama,''"Latin America, A History"'', The Macmillian Company, New York, 1956, 800 pages. Page 450, Relevant Text<ref>Alfred Barnaby Thomas:
: ''This rivaliry [of Chile-Peru], straining the relations of the two countries, led Pardo to sign and offensive and defensive alliance with Bolivia in 1873, the latter being also disturbed by Chiles aggresiveness''</ref>
::the treaty is called (only) defensive-offensive, the authors don't go into details.
: 3) Charles de Varigny, ''La Guerra del Pacifico'', page 18, [http://www.archive.org/details/laguerradelpacif00vari here] Relevant Text<ref>Charles de Varigny:
: ''…Chile vacilaría aún más si Bolivia, firmando un tratado de alianza ofensiva y defensiva con el Perú, podía poner sobre las armas los efectivos militares y las fuerzas navales de esta nación. Un tratado de esta naturaleza fué precisamente la condición que puso Boliyia para aceptar la aventura que el Perú le proponía. Se iniciaron negociaciones y quedó firmado el Tratado, que se convino en mantener secreto, con el fin de proporcionar al Perú la ocasión de ofrecer su mediación, no revelándolo sino en caso de que Chile rechazase esta mediación y declarase la guerra.''
: Translation: …Chile would hesitate more if Bolivia, by means of a ofensive and defensive treaty signed with Peru, could dispose of the military and naval forces of that country. Such a treaty was the condition imposed upon herself by Bolivia to accept the adventure proposed by Peru. They started the negotiations and the treaty was signed, to be kept in secret, in order to give Peru the chance of offering her mediation, (and) not to publish the treaty unless Chile refused the mediation and made a declaration of war'' (Translation by Keysanger)</ref>
::the treaty is called defensive-offensive and go into details, that is why is considered offensive.
: 4) Gonzalo Bulnes, ''"Chile and Peru, The causes of the War of 1879"'' page 57 and 58, Relevant Text<ref>Gonzalo Bulnes:
: ''The Treaty menaces Chile … Never was Chile in greater peril, nor has a more favourable moment been elected for reducing her to the mere leavings that interested none of the conspirators. The advantage to each of them was clear enough. Bolivia would expand three degrees on the coast; Argentina would take possession of all our eastern terrisories to whatever point she liked; Peru would make Bolivia pay her with the salitre region. The synthesis of the Secret Treaty was this: opportunity: the disarmed condition of Chile; the pretext to produce conflict: Bolivia: the profit of the business: Patagonia and the salitre.''</ref>
::the treaty is called defensive-offensive and go into details, that is why is considered offensive.
: 5) Diego Barros Arana, ''"Historia de la Guerra del Pacifico"'', parte 1, capitulo III pag. 31, Relevant Text<ref>Diego Barros Arana:
: ''Sea de ello lo que se quiera, el hecho es que el 6 de febrero de 1873 se firmaba en Lima un tratado secreto de alianza ofensiva i defensiva, por el cual ambas partes contratantes se comprometian a marchar unidas contra cualquier enemigo esterior que amenazase su independencia, su soberanía, o su integridad territorial.''
: Translation ''whatever, in fact on 6 February 1873 was signed in Lima a secret treaty of alliance defensive and offensive, as a result of that both signer obligated themself to march united against any extern foe that menaced their independence, souvereignity or territorial integrity.'' (Translation by Keysanger) </ref>
::the treaty is called defensive-offensive and go into details, that is why is considered offensive. (not in the cited passage)
: 6) Chilean Magazin ''"Que Pasa"'' [http://www.quepasa.cl/medio/articulo/0,0,38035857__147601895__1,00.html here] Relevant Text<ref>Que Pasa:
: ''A comienzos de 1870, Perú pasaba por un mal período económico, ya que el guano -fertilizante natural del cual procedían las principales ganancias fiscales- estaba agotado, mientras el salitre, producto que lo reemplazaba, estaba en manos de particulares. La única solución era eliminar a nuestro país como competidor en la extracción del salitre, para traspasar la propiedad de las salitreras al Estado y poseer el monopolio. Fue a raíz de esto que Perú y Bolivia firmaron un tratado secreto ofensivo y defensivo contra Chile, donde ambas naciones se apoyarían en caso de guerra.''

: Translation: ''“In early 1870, Peru was going through a bad economic period, as the guano-derived natural fertilizer which produced major tax revenues was exhausted, while nitrate -its substitute- was in private hands. The only solution was to remove Chile as a competitor in the extraction of saltpeter, and then transfer the ownership of the nitrate to the [Peruvian] state and hold a monopoly. It was after this that Peru and Bolivia signed a secret treaty offensive and defensive against Chile, where both nations would support each other in the event of war.”''</ref>
::the treaty is called defensive-offensive and go into details, that is why is considered offensive.

: 7) ''Manifest of the Chilean government to the representatives of friendly powers with reference to the declaration of war against Peru''. Alejandro Fierro, Chilean Ministry of Foreign affairs, Santiago April 12, 1879 [http://books.google.com/books?id=MC8WAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA173&dq=secret+treaty+peru+bolivia&lr=&ei=x7hfSuGSHZWOyATs44jNCg here] Relevant Text<ref>Chilean Manifest:

:(starts on page 170)

: ''…The secret treaty of the of Febreaury 6, 1873 needs to no lengthy examination to ascertain its object; and the reserve in which it has been maintained confirms in the least suspicious mind the conviction that it was entered into solely to aid the schemes of the government of Bolivia, a perpetual conspirator of the treaty of 1866. In 1873, neither Peru nor Bolivia was threatened by the remotest danger of territorial dismemberment; and much less could it be foreseen that Chile cherished such idea, seeing that it had granted to Bolivia whatever that republic demanded in the convention of 1866- applauded by the Bolivian people as a splendid manifestation of Chilean generosity………. ……….If the treaty meant a general guarantee against any advance of a foreign power, why was the cooperation of Chile not sought, which has given more than one example of being the first to contribute, with its men and its wealth, towards the maintenance of the sovereignty of nations of a common origin?.............. ...........The treaty of 1873 owed its origin –hidden as a shameful act – to the measures adopted by Peru at that epoch, to justify one of the most audacious and cruel spoliation witnessed by countries submitted to a regime of common respect toward the industry of all nations. Peru desired to monopolize and appropriate the nitrate works; and in order to sustain its daily diminishing credit…''</ref>
::the treaty is not called defensive or offensive but explain why it is considered a ''to justify one of the most audacious and cruel spoliation witnessed by countries submitted to a regime of common respect toward the industry of all nations'' and go into details.

: 8) ''The New York Times'' - Current History (1922) [http://books.google.com/books?id=4LYqAAAAYAAJ&pg=PP5&dq=The+New+York+times+-+Current+History+1922&ei=wchfSpfFBZjKzATf_eSVCw here] (page 450) Relevant Text<ref>New York Times:

: ''Notwithstanding the fact that in 1873 Peru had induced Bolivia to sign a pact of alliance tacitly directed against Chile, the Peruvian government offered its mediation in the Bolivian-Chilean conflict, the origin of which was nothing more than Peru’s monopolistic nitrate policy, which had instigated Bolivia to disposes Chilean industries. The mediation of Peru was accompanied by three suspicious circumstances: (1) The denial on the part of the mediating minister of the existence of the secret treaty of which Chile had lately become aware; (2) Previous Peruvian demands compatible only with the pretensions of Bolivia; (3) Hurried war preparations of Peru, the Peruvian government meanwhile showing a desire to gain time. These circumstances, with the fact that Bolivia did not manifest the slightest desire to facilitate an amicable adjustment, indicated to Chile that Peru was not working ‘bona fide’, but only with the intentin of strengthening the alliance.''</ref>
::the NYT call the treaty a ''pact of alliance tacitly directed against Chile''
: 9) Tommaso Caivano, ''"Storia de lla guerra d'America fra Chilì, il Perù e la Bolivia"'', [http://www.archive.org/stream/storiadellaguer00caivgoog/storiadellaguer00caivgoog_djvu.txt here] page 252, Relevant Text<ref>Tommaso Caivano:
: ''lo storico chileno Barros Arana dice nella sua cosidetta Historia de la Guerra del Pacifico, che era un Trattato di alleanza offensiva e difensiva. Questo può dare una idea del modo come si interpretano e riferiscono i fatti nel Chili.''
: '' (Translation) Chilean historian Barros Arana said in his book History of the Pacific War, a treaty of alliance offensive and defensive. This can give an idea of how they interpret and report the facts in Chile''</ref>
::Tommasso Caivano (9) doesn't call the treaty offensive, only reproduces Diego Barros Arana's view and states that a treaty is subject of interpretations. That is what I want to state.
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|I can provide 4 neutral sources stating that the alliance was merely defensive:
:#History of the Latin-American nations By William Spence Robertson: [http://books.google.com/books?id=ECctAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA344&lpg=PA344&dq=Treaty+of+defensive+alliance+between+Peru+and+Bolivia&source=bl&ots=0S9-c2NFHI&sig=DzCzN000NajoFe58Bo6DpE3ErRU&hl=en&ei=U7ZTStqGJIziNdbKreEI&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=3]
:#New York Times: "The defensive treaty of 1873 between Peru and Bolivia" (First column).[http://query.nytimes.com/mem/archive-free/pdf?_r=1&res=9E02EED81E3BE03ABC4053DFB4678383609EDE]
:#A history of Peru By Clements Robert Markham: "The Chileans used this purely defensive treaty, by which arbitration is provided for before there can be a casus foederis, as a pretext for war."[http://books.google.com/books?id=LPMUAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA375&lpg=PA375&dq=Treaty+of+defensive+alliance+between+Peru+and+Bolivia&source=bl&ots=0WJlaRQuOL&sig=6ItnGsSGprnzc82IbMHfvozzx0Q&hl=en&ei=CLlTSrLsA46wMPz6-e8I&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=8]
:#CHILE, PERU AND THE TREATY OF 1929: THE FINAL SETTLEMENT by Ronald Bruce St John: "Peru was honour bound under the terms of an 1873 treaty of defensive alliance to join the conflict on the side of Bolivia."[http://www.dur.ac.uk/resources/ibru/publications/full/bsb8-1_john.pdf]
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|:Well, it looks like you two are pretty close to an agreement. Maybe one final push and this can be resolved? [[User:Gigs|Gigs]] ([[User talk:Gigs|talk]]) 01:24, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

As you like it:
# The treaty was officially titled defensive.
# The treaty was viewed by Chile as a menace (offensive to it).
# Professional opinion is split on whether the alliance was solely defensive or whether it was offensive and defensive.

So, I think the issue is now cleared.

--[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|talk]]) 11:43, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

:Sounds good to me. Thank you Gigs.--[[User:MarshalN20|$%MarshalN20%$]] ([[User talk:MarshalN20|talk]]) 14:15, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
::Excellent, thank you all for working through this. [[User:Gigs|Gigs]] ([[User talk:Gigs|talk]]) 14:52, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Thank you Gigs, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|talk]]) 10:37, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
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::::::::As you can see, there are a lot of opinions about defensive v/s offensive and Wikipedia can't do any other thing that consider both, not only the view "the treaty was defensive", it doesn't matter how many sources had found MarshallN20 in the last time.
::::::::It is a little bit disappointing to discuss the same thing every year, but I accept MarshalN20 right to defend his ideas and error. I do it sometimes also. Best regards, [[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 18:48, 17 July 2011 (UTC)

Alexh, let me help you. Go to Keysanger's link, click (on the content box) on "Mediation of offensive/defensive issue". Go the section "Moving On". Finally, open up the "extended content" to read the sources provided by Keysanger. Nearly 2 years have passed after that discussion, and over the years I have gotten better at analyzing and gathering sources. These things I note now that back then I did not consider:
#The first three sources he mentions (from United States authors) only title (name) the treaty as "offensive-defensive", but do not provide any sort of actual historical analysis. In Varigny's (1829-1899) case, a contemporary to the conflict (primary source), his analysis is limited. The treaty's title/name (defensive) is not in question. Therefore, these 3 sources in no way validate the idea that Peru-Bolivia formed an offensive alliance.
#The following 5 sources are from Chilean authors. I do not contest the Chilean POV, and find it a view that deserves to be included in the article (It is included in the "Crisis" and the "Background" sections). However, upon careful examination of the sources: (1) Historians Diego Barros Arana and Gonzalo Bulnes are primary sources, and their opinion is skewed in favor of Chile (hence the Chilean POV). (2) Alejandro Fierro, Chile's minister, is also a primary source. (3) Chilean Magazine "Que Pasa"...who wrote the article? It's reliability is unknown. (4) New York Times magazine from 1922, primary source from Chilean correspondant F. Nieto del Rio (unknown profession or notability), is completely unreliable.
#The Italian source, from Thomas Caivanno, merely states that according to Barros Arana, in Chile the Peru-Bolivia alliance is viewed as offensive.
2 years ago I had very little knowledge on how to analyze sources, but now I am confident that all of the sources originally presented by Keysanger only serve little purpose other than to demonstrate a Chilean POV which is already present in the Wikipedia article. Whether Keysanger purposely tried to trick both me and the mediator at that point, I ultimately assume good faith from his part. Furthemore, this Chilean POV is a minority view in the sense that only Chileans seem to agree with it.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 16:43, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
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'''War of the Pacific; MarshalN20 (Non-Peruvian or Bolivian) Sources:'''
*Edwin Montefiore Borchard [http://encyclopedia2.thefreedictionary.com/Borchard,+Edwin+Montefiore], (Opinion on the controversy between Peru and Chile; Page 14 [http://books.google.com/books?id=0PxYAAAAMAAJ&pg=PA12&dq=Jose+Antonio+de+Lavalle+Peru+Chile&hl=en&ei=y9ohTpbVA4_TiAKkhOyiAw&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=6&ved=0CEIQ6AEwBQ#v=onepage&q&f=false]): "On the contrary, whatever inference against Peru may be drawn from the secrecy of the treaty, '''all the evidence indicates that neither the parties themselves nor those whose adherence was sought considered it anything but a defensive alliance for the maintenance of the status quo'''. Moreover, it is impossible to doubt the sincerity of Peru's effort to avoid and, if that proved unsuccessful, to terminate, the war between Chile and Bolivia. Int he matter of motive, it seems reasonable to conclude that Peru had nothing to gain from a war against Chile. They were not adjoining countries, had no boundary dispute, and whatever guano and nitrate Chile had obtained through the treaty of 1874 with Bolivia, Peru had so much more that it is not reasonable to suppose that she coveted Chile's. Indeed, so far as I can find, only Orrego Luco, one of the most zealous Chilean protagonists, has imputed such a motive to [Peru]. On the other hand, the same absence of motive cannot be ascribed to Chile, whose policy had since 1842 been directed toward acquiring greater contorl of the nitrate territory."
*William Spence Robertson [http://www.jstor.org/pss/2508668], (History of the Latin-American nations; Page 344-345 [http://books.google.com/books?id=ECctAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA344&lpg=PA344&dq=Treaty+of+defensive+alliance+between+Peru+and+Bolivia&source=bl&ots=0S9-c2NFHI&sig=DzCzN000NajoFe58Bo6DpE3ErRU&hl=en&ei=U7ZTStqGJIziNdbKreEI&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=3#v=onepage&q=Treaty%20of%20defensive%20alliance%20between%20Peru%20and%20Bolivia&f=false]): "Peru signed a secret treaty of defensive alliance with Bolivia. The Treaty of Lima provided that the contracting parties were mutually to guarantee their independence, sovereignty, and territorial integrity against all foreign aggression, whether of one or more states. In case of acts that tended to deprive a party to this treaty of a portion of her territory, or to induce a party to accept a protectorate, or to lessen the sovereignty of a party, or to alter the government of a party, the alliance was to become effective. Each party expressly retained the right to judge for herself whether or not an offense that might be comitted against her ally should be considered as casus foederis. [...] The allies promised to emply whenever feasible every possible conciliatory measure to prevent a rupture of relations or to end a war."
:We already know the Peru, Bolivia, and Chile POV's on the matter. Therefore, I find it appropiate to present the analysis of historians who are not from these countries. If you need any more sources, please do ask.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 17:20, 17 July 2011 (UTC)

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'''The nature of "offensive alliances" and "defensive alliances"'''

Example of a Defensive Alliance treaty ''aimed at'' specific countries (Spain and USA), but which does not constitute an ''offensive alliance'':
*Fredrick B. Pike, (The United States and the Andean republics: Peru, Bolivia, and Ecuador; Page 124 [http://books.google.com/books?id=QgULb58ac_kC&pg=PA124&dq=Peru+Bolivia+defensive+alliance&hl=en&ei=xRgjTp-uEKfiiAK05ZmxAw&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=10&ved=0CFIQ6AEwCTgK#v=onepage&q=Peru%20Bolivia%20defensive%20alliance&f=false]): "Delegates from Bolivia, Chile, Ecuador, New Granada, and Peru convened in 1847 and signed a treaty pledging a defensive alliance mong the five republics should an invasion or overt foreign intervention materialize. The treaty was directed not only against the Flores venture but also against the United States which had alarmed South American states by its war against Mexico."
As this source demonstrates, an alliance treaty ''aimed'' at a country does not constitute an "offensive alliance". Defensive alliances have a strict character, different from offensive alliances, as they are forced to only take effect upon the attack of a foreign country. The historical record of the War of the Pacific also demonstrates that neither Peru or Bolivia ever invaded Chile; the whole war was based on Chile invading both Bolivian and Peruvian territory, while both countries simply defended.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 17:47, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
:Okay thanks Keysanger & MarshalN20. Here is another take on the war: [http://www.mongabay.com/history/chile/chile-war_of_the_pacific,_1879-83.html]
:<blockquote>Despite cooperation among Chile, Peru, and Bolivia in the war against Spain, friction began to develop over the mineral-rich Bolivian province of Antofagasta and the Peruvian provinces of Tarapaca, Tacna, and Arica, whose wealth was exploited largely by Chilean enterprises. In 1875 Peru seized Chilean nitrate mines in Tarapaca, and in 1878 a new Bolivian government greatly increased taxes on Chilean business interests. To protect these interests and preempt their threatened expropriation, Chile dispatched a naval squadron headed by the ironclad Blanco Encalada and landed 200 troops at the Bolivian port of Antofagasta on February 14, 1879, provoking a declaration of war by Bolivia on March 1, an action reciprocated by Chile on April 5. Peru, which had concluded the secret Treaty of Mutual Defense with Bolivia in 1873, was now also drawn into the conflict (see The Liberal Era, 1861-91 , ch. 1). </blockquote>
:I am curious to know whether MarshalN20 & Keysanger feel the above text is both neutral and accurate. [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 06:46, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
::I like it, especially how it goes back to the Chincha Islands War from the "Background" section. How should we implement it into the introduction? One thing I disagree with: Bolivia didn't declare war on Chile on March 1. Chile didn't declare war on Bolivia either when they invaded Antofagasta. This is why Peru didn't activate the alliance (it could only come into effect if and only if one of the countries was officially declared war upon). The first country to declare war on anyone was Chile, which is what activated the Treaty of Mutual Defense. If Bolivia had declared war on Chile first, then Peru had the right (according to the treaty) to make the treaty void and remain neutral.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 10:32, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
:::The text isn't neutral because it presume that the secret pact was of defensive character. That is of course posible, but there are reliable sources that demostrate that the pact can be seen as offensive, for example the source 8) of the list in the mediation. The New York Times (Current History (1922), page 450) said about:
:::<blockquote>Notwithstanding the fact that in 1873 Peru had induced Bolivia to sign a pact of alliance tacitly directed against Chile, the Peruvian government offered its mediation in the Bolivian-Chilean conflict, the origin of which was nothing more than Peru’s monopolistic nitrate policy, which had instigated Bolivia to disposes Chilean industries. The mediation of Peru was accompanied by three suspicious circumstances: (1) The denial on the part of the mediating minister of the existence of the secret treaty of which Chile had lately become aware; (2) Previous Peruvian demands compatible only with the pretensions of Bolivia; (3) Hurried war preparations of Peru, the Peruvian government meanwhile showing a desire to gain time. These circumstances, with the fact that Bolivia did not manifest the slightest desire to facilitate an amicable adjustment, indicated to Chile that Peru was not working ‘bona fide’, but only with the intentin of strengthening the alliance.</blockquote>
:::There are at least two sights of the facts, both referenced. Wikipedia has to represent a well balanced version of the history and not a biased interpretations of the facts. Best regards, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 15:41, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
::::As I mentioned in my analysis above, the New York Times source is unreliable as it is not known who is the author, named as "F. Nieto del Rio". All that is known is that he is a Chilean correspondant, which once again demonstrates that your source only presents Chilean POV. You keep demonstrating a desire to impose Chilean POV above all else, and keep trying to trick friendly mediators into agreeing with you.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 16:46, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::Hi Keysanger, leaving aside the question of possible errors in the detail, I feel there is a subtle but important difference between the wording in our article and the wording by David Shelton that I linked above. In our wording, Wikipedia's voice states that the Peru/Bolivia alliance ''[[WP:TRUTH|was]]'' "defensive". Shelton doesn't say this. He simply notes that it was ''called'' the "Treaty of Mutual Defense" (through use of capitalisation the reader knows he is simply giving the treaty's formal name). He also alerts the reader to the fact that it was a secret treaty, and he provides more context, i.e. some of the acts of provocation which might have led Chile to declare war. His text here remains agnostic on whether or not the alliance was really defensive. So I disagree that it "presumes that the secret pact was of a defensive character". Are you sure you couldn't live with a compromise along these lines? [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 00:23, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::The problem is that Keysanger doesn't like any mention of the word "defensive" in association with Peru or Bolivia. In Chile, people get taught that Bolivia declared war upon them (despite this is historically inaccurate), and that "evil Peru" was jealous of Chile and wanted to take them out of the competition. In reality, Bolivia only sent a presidential decree in response to the Chilean invasion of Antofagasta (which in no way or form constitutes a declaration of war), and Peru monopolized ''all'' mining industries in Tarapaca/Tacna/Arica (they took over all Peruvian, European, and Chilean private companies) in a desperate attempt to stabilize the economy (not as provocation to Chile).--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 14:20, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::My view is that the present wording is subtly failing strict neutrality by saying in Wikipedia's voice in the opening that the treaty "was" defensive. That is problematic for two reasons (1) it seems Chileans and otherwise presumably reliable Chilean historians don't agree; and (2) an article lead should fairly summarise the rest of the article and elsewhere in the article it is clearer that there is some debate about the defensive/offensive nature of the treaty. On the other hand I don't myself agree that stating in the opening that Peru was drawn into the conflict after having signed the Treaty of Mutual Defense with Bolivia presumes anything about whether the treaty was really defensive or not, or is a problem for neutrality. [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 11:48, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::::I am open to rewording the part as you suggest, without excluding the Treaty of Mutual Defense. This is what I propose for the first 2 paragraphs of the introduction (using your suggestions). I think it's as neutral as it can get:
::::::::<blockquote>The '''War of the Pacific''' ({{lang-es|'''Guerra del Pacífico'''}}) took place in western [[South America]] from [[1879]] through [[1883]]. [[Chile]] fought against [[Bolivia]] and [[Peru]]. Despite cooperation among Chile, Peru, and Bolivia in the [[Chincha Islands War|war against Spain]], disputes soon arose over the mineral-rich Peruvian provinces of Tarapaca, Tacna, and Arica, and the Bolivian province of Antofagasta. Chilean enterprises, which largely exploited the area, saw their interests at stake when Peru nationalized all nitrate mines in Tarapaca, and Bolivia imposed a 10 cent tax on the Antofagasta Nitrate & Railway Company. The problem primarily focused on Bolivia and Chile due to their [[Atacama border dispute|controversy over ownership of Atacama]], which preceded and laid foundations for their conflict. Peru entered the affair in 1879, initially attempting to [[Mediation|mediate]] the dispute, but, when Chile invaded the Bolivian port city of [[Antofagasta]] on February 14, 1879, Bolivia sought the activation of its Treaty of Mutual Defense with Peru. Disputes further escalated until Chile declared war on both countries on April 5, 1879, and the following day Peru activated the alliance.

::::::::<blockquote>This "[[Potassium nitrate|Saltpeter]] War" took place over five years in a variety of terrain, including the [[Atacama Desert]] and Peru's deserts and mountainous regions. The war's first battle was the [[Battle of Topáter]]. For most of the first year the focus was on the [[Naval Campaign of the War of the Pacific|naval campaign]], as Chile struggled to establish a sea-based resupply corridor for its forces in the world's driest desert. The [[Peruvian Navy]] met initial success, but the [[Chilean Navy]] prevailed. Afterwards, Chile's [[Land Campaign of the War of the Pacific|land campaign]] bested the badly equipped [[Bolivian Army|Bolivian]] and [[Peruvian Army|Peruvian armies]], leading to Bolivia's complete defeat and withdrawal in the [[Battle of Tacna]] on May&nbsp;26,&nbsp;1880, and the defeat of the Peruvian army after the [[Battle of Arica]] on June 7. The land campaign climaxed in 1881, with the Chilean [[occupation of Lima]]. The conflict then became a [[guerrilla war]] engaging Peruvian army remnants and irregulars. This ''Campaign of the Breña'' was fairly successful as a [[resistance movement]], but did not change the war's outcome. After Peru's defeat in the [[Battle of Huamachuco]], Chile and Peru signed the [[Treaty of Ancón]] on October&nbsp;20,&nbsp;1883. Bolivia signed a [[truce]] with Chile in 1884.</blockquote>
::::::::What do you think?--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 15:33, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::I think it is a big improvement, and not to mention easier to read and more interesting. I probably would mention that the Peru/Bolivia treaty was a secret treaty. :) [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 16:28, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::::::It's great that you like it, but that doesn't resolve the issue as long as Keysanger makes little notion of agreement and promotes further Chile POV pushing ([http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:War_of_the_Pacific#Template:Undue_weight] and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:War_of_the_Pacific#Template_Disputed-section]). What do you suggest be done, or is there something you could do? Thanks.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 17:37, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::::::I'll see if I can help out there. I am Australian so hopefully no one will say I have a bias. :) [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 00:45, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
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SBM is an excellent RS for this type of topic. Per [[Wikipedia:Fringe theories#Parity of sources]], opinions and writings of mainstream authors have more due weight than the writings of promoters of fringe practices, and that includes all of [[alternative medicine]]. See also [[Wikipedia:Fringe theories#Due and undue weight]]. Beyond that, when in doubt, use attribution. More due weight means, among other things, the amount of content and the prominence of mention. Criticisms belong in the lead. -- [[User:Valjean|Valjean]] ([[User talk:Valjean|talk]]) ('''''[[Help:Notifications|<span style="color:#0bf">PING me</span>]]''''') 17:13, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi Alex, Hi MarshallN20,

I agree that, regarding the use of "defensive" in the paragraph, MarshalN20's proposal is a good proposal. MarshalN20, would you be so kind to change the wording of the other places that come into consideration? (Yesterday I counted 5 places in the article where the word "defensive" was used to portray the treaty). We also should add the word "secret" in the lede in order to inform the reader about the complicated situation at that time.

We can analyse some issues in the lede, like ''" Peru entered the affair in 1879 …"'' and others, at the proper time.

I am sure that a decision by consensus will endure and set the basis for a change for the better in the article. Best Regards, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 11:34, 22 July 2011 (UTC)

My agreement to this proposal is under the condition that in no case the reader can be mislead to the assumption that the treaty was a defensive one. If needed there must be said that the treaty was called "of defense" or "defensive", but that it is not the opinion of Wikipedia. --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 11:25, 25 July 2011 (UTC)

Of course my agreement to this proposal is under the condition that this difference between name and adjective must be replicated overall in the article where the treaty is mentioned. Also this agreement is valid and bindig for the page of the treaty [[ Treaty of defensive alliance between Peru and Bolivia of 1873]]. --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 11:29, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
===defense/defensive or similar adjectives can't be acepted===
Regarding your objections in my talk page, I repeat, the reader in no case should be lead to presume that the treaty was defensive. Your rationale about ''words are capitalised'' is not enough because the name is misleading. I propouse to add "so-called" before the name or to add in every case that the treaty has been characterized by historians as an offensive and as an defensive one. This agreement must be replicated to all places in the article where the treaty is mentioned. Also we have to accept the same conditions for the [[Treaty of defensive alliance between Peru and Bolivia of 1873]] article. Best Regards, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 13:50, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
::The funny thing is that you talk about "misleading" the reader, and yet you "propouse" weasel words. As Alex Harvey suggests, the name "Treaty of Mutual Defense" is a proper name, which to English readers is easily understood as the title of the treaty.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 14:22, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
::The offensive v defensive controversy should be discussed within the article. Right now it's simply included in the following way:
::<blockquote>On February 6, 1873, Peru and Bolivia signed a Treaty of Mutual Defense which guaranteed their independence, sovereignty and territorial integrity. An additional clause kept the treaty secret. Argentina had begun talks with Peru and Bolivia to join the alliance, and the Argentine Chamber of Deputies, in a secret session, approved the law, but the Senate postponed the matter to 1874. '''Chile was not directly mentioned in the treaty text and was not informed about its existence, which led Chilean historiography to conclude that the treaty was aimed against Chile.'''</blockquote>
::It seems good to me, but room for expansion does exist.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 14:34, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
:::Your proposal is the old version of the passage. It uses the official name "Defense" but doesn't warn the reader that the treaty is considered offensive by a lot of historians. Moreover it lacks the information that Chile was informed few days before the begin of the war and was for Chile one of the causes of the war.
:::We must include following items in a solution:
::::# It must be clear for the reader the difference between the official name of the treaty and a description of the treaty on the part of Wikipedia.
::::# The capital letters are not enough.
::::# There must be said that the treaty was secret
::::# The reader must be informed that Chile was informed few days before the begin of the war
::::# The reader must be informed that the treaty was considered by the Chilean government as one of the causes of the war
::::# The consensus decision replicated to all places where the treaty is mentioned
::::# Also to the article [[Treaty of defensive alliance between Peru and Bolivia of 1873]].
::::# The Chilean, Peruvian, Bolivian histography are not the issue.
:::They are the minimal requirements to comply with [[WP:NPOV]], [[WP:V]], and [[WP:NOR]]. We can't accept a flubbed article and edit wars for the next 100 years. Best Regrads, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 20:53, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::All I see is a person claiming the term "Treaty of Mutual Defense" is not good despite three users (Alex, Chiton, and me) have already explained that it is as neutral a term as it can get. What seems to be irritating for this person is that the term "defense" is being used. The proposed "solution" is to use [[WP:WEASEL]] terms (i.e., "so-called") wherever possible in all parts which this user deems as non-neutral. This is completely unacceptable.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 22:29, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::Regarding the "secret" part of the treaty, I have found a series of sources which argue against that point. These sources explain that Chile had known of the treaty for plenty of time prior to the conflict, but pretended to not know in order to manipulate Chilean public opinion in favor of war. However, as Alex suggests, it's best to discuss each point without diverting the attention to multiple points at once.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 22:29, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::@ Marshal, I just changed the lead to "secret" before I was aware of this discussion. I've already seen a considerable number of sources saying the treaty was secret so could be perhaps queue this issue until we have resolved the matter of "who declared war on whom and when"? I'll respond to Keysanger's points shortly. [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 08:51, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::Sure, going step-by-step is a good plan. The sources I have regarding the "secret" part of the treaty won't discard the fact that Bolivia and Peru signed it in secrecy, but it will challenge the concept of whether it was really "secret or not-secret" (similar to how Keysanger argued that, despite the treaty is named "defensive", there is considerable discussion of whether it was "offensive or defensive"). Hence, my point would be to remove the mention of "secret" from the lead (similar to how "offensive" and "defensive" are removed) and only leave the official title "Treaty of the Mutual Defense". The secrecy of the treaty then can be discussed either in the "Crisis" or "Background" sections. But, yes, it's best this is left for after this part of the discussion is over.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 13:11, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
::::::::@ Keysanger, I was going to respond but I really feel this thread belongs in the talk page and feel we should be trying to resolve one issue at a time. Also I made a few changes to the article so perhaps you'd like to see if they resolve at least some of your concerns. [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 13:44, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
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I made a proposal and hope that will find a good echo (sorry, I introduced a new issue, but it can be reverted). We can discuss here or in the talk page of the article, as you like it .--[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 16:59, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

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== [[Objections to evolution#Violation of the second law of thermodynamics]] ==

My problem is that evolutionists who posted the aledged objection to evolution on @nd law of thermodynamics completely altered the argument and when I made already two versions of modification [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Objections_to_evolution&diff=439001720&oldid=438997387] [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Objections_to_evolution&diff=439693071&oldid=439653110] they are erasing it within minute and do not allow even for NPOV discussion to be raised. I'm convinced that the objection is manipulated to something else than what it really is and thus it is misleading the Wikipedia reader.
It is very tricky case: group A, evolutionists, with opinion X, declares that their opponents, creationists, group B, holding opinion Y, cannot have their opinion Y presented because their own papers "are not good enough sources" of their own opinion and that's why twisted opinion Z had to be falsely atributed to them to misrepresent their own position. Even if we would accept that given source is not up to some standards of evolutionists, then it would be still ethical at least to decalre that the objection is presented from point of view how evolutionist understand it and that might widely differ from the real position of the proponents of this objection.--[[User:Stephfo|Stephfo]] ([[User talk:Stephfo|talk]]) 19:26, 18 July 2011 (UTC)

:Already being discussed [[Wikipedia:Fringe theories/Noticeboard#Creationist views on the Second Law of Thermodynamics|here]]. Please don't [[WP:Forum shopping|forum shop]]. --[[User:Saddhiyama|Saddhiyama]] ([[User talk:Saddhiyama|talk]]) 19:30, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
:OK, I will move it there then.--[[User:Stephfo|Stephfo]] ([[User talk:Stephfo|talk]]) 21:20, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
:I still have a Q though, that borad is evaluating the text from other than NPOV perspective. How does it work then if my primary objection against may opponents is that they do alter soemone's else opinion, thus potentially attacking someone's good reputation?--[[User:Stephfo|Stephfo]] ([[User talk:Stephfo|talk]]) 12:40, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

== Catholics for Choice ==

Apparently I'm one of those people who just has to do everything myself, since even though the [[WP:BURDEN|burden]] is on the editors adding this information, I'm the one posting here. Anyway, there are a couple of related issues at [[Catholics for Choice]], some of which could be addressed at other noticeboards individually but which together make up something best addressed at NPOVN. (And yes, before you say so, ''I'' think the answers to these questions are obvious, but clearly some of the other editors at this article do not.)

*Is an [http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m1571/is_28_18/ai_90307297/?tag=mantle_skin;content anti-CFC rant] published in ''[[Insight on the News]]'', a far-right magazine that happens to be notorious for making things up, a reliable source on CFC's funding?
*Is an [[Catholic League (U.S.)|organization]] that calls George Soros a "bigoted pro-abortion mogul" a reliable source on his activities?
*Is it undue to include self-published criticism of CFC by far-right groups like the Catholic League and Catholic News Agency, particularly when we already detail the (also self-published) criticism from the Roman Catholic Church and other criticism published in reliable sources?
*Is it necessary to have the criticism of CFC's funding be over four times as long as the actual information about its funding, particularly when most of said criticism is mostly cited to the worst possible sources, as noted above?

--[[User:Roscelese|Roscelese]] ([[User talk:Roscelese|talk]] &sdot; [[Special:Contributions/Roscelese|contribs]]) 00:48, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

:No, no, yes, no. [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 06:42, 20 July 2011 (UTC)
::Ditto. - [[User:J. Johnson|J. Johnson (JJ)]] ([[User talk:J. Johnson|talk]]) 23:35, 25 July 2011 (UTC)

== [[Allegations of fraud involving Chinese stocks]] ==

Serious NPOV issues generally, including a list of "fraudulent" Chinese stocks without proper sourcing. Making one last attempt to salvage this before I nominate it for deletion. Constructive input into the page is welcome. [[User:Figureofnine|Figureofnine]] <small>([[User talk:Figureofnine|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Figureofnine|contribs]])</small> 15:40, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

== NPOV over SYN? ==

*{{pagelinks|Van Tuong Nguyen}}
*Dear all, IF possible I'm requesting all to assist in the reviewing the aforementioned article and comment on the discussion page for the difference of "explained" (supported by the source, and an archive of the original source I found) over the word "said" (which isn't supported by any source), the latter is incessantly demanded by an extremely abusive Anon IP editor ({{ip|2.220.204.70}}) to replace the former, per [[WP:SAY]]. Similarly, I've placed this same request for review on [[WP:No original research/Noticeboard#NPOV over SYN?]] in order to give it a fair chance at hearing. Apologies for any disturbance caused, thank you. --<small>[[User:Dave1185|<font face="Rage Italic" size="4" style="color:#000000;color:green"><i>Dave</i></font>]] <sup><span style="font-family:Italic;color:black">[[user_talk:Dave1185|♠♣♥♦™№1185©♪♫®]]</span></sup></small> 00:14, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
:I think this argument is bizarre. There is no obligation to use words that sources use. To say that a simple verb like said "isn't supported by any source" is just ridiculous. Biased sources can very easily be reported in a neutral way, unless you decide, arbitrarily and unilaterally, that for some reason you have to use one particular word from the source. [[Special:Contributions/2.220.204.70|2.220.204.70]] ([[User talk:2.220.204.70|talk]]) 06:05, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
::From what I can see the IP editor has a point there. Why do you feel the IP is misunderstanding [[WP:SAY]]? [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 02:30, 22 July 2011 (UTC)

== [[War of the Pacific]] : Bolivian declaration of war ==

The current article [[War of the Pacific]] states that:
* ''However, under international law at that time'' <nowiki>[</nowiki>before the Chilean declaration of war<nowiki>]</nowiki> ''neither side had actually declared war.''

User MarshalN20 asserts that the wording of the current version is correct.

User Keysanger asserts that the wording is biased and pretend to elude the fact that Bolivia declared the war first and refused any negotiation with Chile looking forward to Peru's help.
(For a better understanding of the text: H. Daza was at that time dictator of Bolivia, Lavalle was the Peruvian envoy to Chile short before the war)

For this asserts, that there was no Bolivian declaration of war, the User MarshalN20 presents following sources:
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<li>Ramiro Prudencio Lizon (Historian and Diplomat) [http://www.la-razon.com/version.php?ArticleId=67183&EditionId=2582]: "In order for Chile to be able to advance further north an official war declaration was necessary. And it wasn't this country but rather Bolivia the one who sent an internal decree which was afterwards interpreted as a true declaration of war. [...] Obviously, '''Daza had no interest in declaring war''', because he knew that Bolivia was not in conditions to affront a campaign against a country much superior in belligerent resources and which counted with a powerful navy."</li>
<li>Atilio Sivirichi, "''Historia del Perú''" (1932), page 193: "[Daza's decree] was skilfully interpreted by the Chilean government as a declaration of war and as a justification for its occupation of the [Bolivian coast]."</li>
<li>William F. Sater, "''Andean Tragedy''", page 28: "Two weeks after the Chilean occupation of Antofagasta, he declared that '''Chile''' had imposed "a state of war" on Bolivia. Apparently this decree '''did not constitute a formal declaration of belligerence''', which he announced on 18 March."</li>
<li>Tommaso Caivano, "''Historia de la guerra de América entre Chile, Perú y Bolivia''", pages 61-62 ([http://books.google.com/books?id=KO9YAAAAMAAJ&pg=PA62&lpg=PA62&dq=Decreto+Daza+Bolivia+no+fue+declaracion+de+guerra&source=bl&ots=kR3Gg_OYeU&sig=_0xg1-ZmC3Ml3OpbMdgG2wtuZqo&hl=en&ei=TbwpTsTDM4i60AGDprjRCg&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=1&ved=0CBsQ6AEwAA#v=onepage&q&f=false]): "[Daza's decree], as can be clearly read within it, does not do anything more than dictate a few measures relative to true the state of war in which Bolivia and Chile found themselves after the invasion of [Bolivian territory] by [Chile], and, like it textually and carefully states, "''while this state of war imposed by Chile upon Bolivia''", was interpreted by Chile in an extremely original manner."</li>
<li>Mariano Felipe Paz Soldán, "''Narracion Historica de la Guerra de Chile contra el Peru y Bolivia''". On Page 80 he presents the Bolivian March 1st declaration and explains its nature (at no point describing it as a declaration of war). On Page 86 makes first mention of a declaration of war, this coming from Chile to both Peru and Bolivia. Text from Page 86 ([http://www.archive.org/stream/narracionhistri01soldgoog#page/n105/mode/2up]): "War having been declared by Chile, it needed to justify its conduct upon the neutral nations and, at a loss of good reasons founded in law and corroborated by deeds, opted for falsity, presenting a series of situations under a distortion of reality, and others completely false. [Chile] said among other things that Peru did not gesture Bolivia in time to lead it towards a good path and procede with fewer recklesness and violence in its determinations."</li>
<li>Valentín Abecia Baldivieso, "''The History of Bolivia in International Relations. Vol 2.''," page 73: "But in reality no such declaration of war took place. The decree (Hilarión Daza's decree) to which this characteristic [of declaring war] is attributed only alludes that "Chile has indeed invaded the national territory", stipulating that "all commerce and communication with the Republic of Chile is cut for the duration of the war that [Chile] has promoted upon Bolivia." He later states that Chileans should vacate the country given deadlines in cases of emergency and taking action on property belonging to them. Therefore, it is not correct to attribute that Decree the characteristics of a [[declaration of war]], because under the international law of the time, it was not. The steps taken were for security because Chile had taken Antofagasta. On April 3 the declaration of war by the Chilean Congress was approved, and by the 5th it became known throughout the press."</li>
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The user Keysanger means that the wording (''however''), facts (''neither side had actually declared war'') and interpretations (''under international law'') don't show the overwhelming opinion under historians, that is there was a Bolivian declaration of war and Keysanger presents following sources:
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<ol style="list-style-type:lower-roman;">
<li> William F. Sater in "Andean Tragedy", page 28 states:
:''Two weeks after the Chilean occupation of Antofagasta, he declared that had imposed "a state of war" on Bolivia. Apparently this decree did not constitute a formal declaration of belligerence, which he announced on 18 March.''</li>
<li> "Documentary History of the Tacna-Arica dispute, University of Iowa studies in the social sciences, Vol. 8", by William Jefferson Dennis, [http://books.google.de/books?id=kL0JAAAAIAAJ&pg=RA2-PA90&lpg=RA2-PA90&dq=%22Peru+desired+to+monopolize+and+appropriate%22&source=bl&ots=kWJ0hMP2ph&sig=FhErXCieDavmhpX765R0oCUS-DY&hl=de&ei=gAWgStCRFI7mnAP79NzWDw&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=1#v=onepage&q=%22Peru%20desired%20to%20monopolize%20and%20appropriate%22&f=false here], page 69: ''On March 14 Bolivia advised representatives of foreign powers that a state of war existed with Chile. ... Godoi advised President Pinto that this move was to prevent Chile from securing armaments abroad ...''</li>
<li> "Andean Tragedy", William F. Sater, page 39:''Thus, Daza's declaration of war was a godsend ...'', also page 42''in March he suddenly declared war on Chile''</li>
<li> "Latin America's Wars: The age of the caudillo, 1791-1899" By Robert L. Scheina, page 376: ''On March 18 Bolivia declared war and confiscated all Chilean property in Bolivia and under the terms of a secret treaty ..."</li>
<li> "Wars and Peace Treaties, 1816-1991", By Erik Goldstein, page 182: ''As result of this action Bolivia declared war on Chile (1.March)''</li>
<li> "The history of Chile" By John Lawrence Rector, page 100: ''Bolivia declared war and attemted to expel all Chileans from its territory''</li>
<li> [http://www.onwar.com/aced/data/papa/pacific1879.htm onwar.com]: ''Bolivia then declared war on Chile and called upon Peru for help.''</li>
<li> [http://www.country-data.com/cgi-bin/query/r-1543.html country-data.com]: ''Bolivia, in alliance with Peru, declared war on Chile on March 1, ...'''</li>
<li> [http://www.andrewclem.com/LatinAmerica/WarOfThePacific.html andrewclem.com]: ''... , but Bolivia declared war on Chile and made known its “secret” alliance with Peru in March, ...''</li>
<li> [http://www.globalsecurity.org/military/ops/war-of-the-pacific.htm globalsecurity.com]: ''Bolivia, in alliance with Peru, declared war on Chile on March 1,...''</li>
<li> [http://encarta.msn.com/encyclopedia_761565235/war_of_the_pacific.html Encarta]: ''Bolivia declared war and was joined by Peru, a partner in a secret alliance.''</li>
<li> "The geopolitics of security in the Americas: hemispheric denial from Monroe ..." by Martin Sicker [http://books.google.com/books?id=WfrdnheP0CUC&pg=PA153&dq=Bolivia+declares+war+on+Chile#v=onepage&q=&f=false here]: ''and Bolivia declared war on 14 February 1879 ...''</li>
<li> "A history of Chile‎" - Page 326, by Luis Galdames, Isaac Joslin Cox - History - 1941 - 565 pages: ''The government of Chile refused to accede to this. Meanwhile Peru mobilized its army rapidly, Bolivia declared war against Chile, and the press of those ...''</li>
<li> "Chile and the War of the Pacific"‎ - Page 9 by William F. Sater - History - 1986 - 343 pages ''Two weeks after Chile occupied the disputed territory, Daza declared war.''</li>
<li> "The Bolivia-Chile-Peru dispute in the Atacama Desert" by Ronald Bruce St. John, Clive H. Schofield [http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=KPORDM85EsIC&pg=PA12&dq=%22war+of+the+pacific%22+bolivia+chile+%22declared+war%22&client=firefox-a#v=onepage&q=%22war%20of%20the%20pacific%22%20bolivia%20chile%20%22declared%20war%22&f=false here]: ''"Once Bolivia declared war on March 14 1879 ..."''.</ol>
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===Old Discussion in Talk page of the article===
There was a long discussion in the talk page, where the parties didn't agree about the issue. You can see the thread here:
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* ''However, under international law at that time neither side had actually declared war.[23][24]''

It is astonishing that 2 sources are enough to write in the that there was no Bolivian declaration of war. One of the sources (a broken link) is the Peruvian newspaper "La Razon", known not for its scientific art but for his anti-Chilean resentements.

I found 15 sources that state that there was a Bolivian declaration of war and such a overwhelming opinion about the Bolivian declaration of war must be included in the text and as the common view of the historians. The no-declaration-of-war theory can also be included but as a rand view. Here the list of sources:
<ol style="list-style-type:lower-roman;">
<li> William F. Sater in "Andean Tragedy", page 28 states:
:''Two weeks after the Chilean occupation of Antofagasta, he declared that had imposed "a state of war" on Bolivia. Apparently this decree did not constitute a formal declaration of belligerence, which he announced on 18 March.''</li>
<li> "Documentary History of the Tacna-Arica dispute, University of Iowa studies in the social sciences, Vol. 8", by William Jefferson Dennis, [http://books.google.de/books?id=kL0JAAAAIAAJ&pg=RA2-PA90&lpg=RA2-PA90&dq=%22Peru+desired+to+monopolize+and+appropriate%22&source=bl&ots=kWJ0hMP2ph&sig=FhErXCieDavmhpX765R0oCUS-DY&hl=de&ei=gAWgStCRFI7mnAP79NzWDw&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=1#v=onepage&q=%22Peru%20desired%20to%20monopolize%20and%20appropriate%22&f=false here], page 69: ''On March 14 Bolivia advised representatives of foreign powers that a state of war existed with Chile. ... Godoi advised President Pinto that this move was to prevent Chile from securing armaments abroad ...''</li>
<li> "Andean Tragedy", William F. Sater, page 39:''Thus, Daza's declaration of war was a godsend ...'', also page 42''in March he suddenly declared war on Chile''</li>
<li> "Latin America's Wars: The age of the caudillo, 1791-1899" By Robert L. Scheina, page 376: ''On March 18 Bolivia declared war and confiscated all Chilean property in Bolivia and under the terms of a secret treaty ..."</li>
<li> "Wars and Peace Treaties, 1816-1991", By Erik Goldstein, page 182: ''As result of this action Bolivia declared war on Chile (1.March)''</li>
<li> "The history of Chile" By John Lawrence Rector, page 100: ''Bolivia declared war and attemted to expel all Chileans from its territory''</li>
<li> [http://www.onwar.com/aced/data/papa/pacific1879.htm onwar.com]: ''Bolivia then declared war on Chile and called upon Peru for help.''</li>
<li> [http://www.country-data.com/cgi-bin/query/r-1543.html country-data.com]: ''Bolivia, in alliance with Peru, declared war on Chile on March 1, ...'''</li>
<li> [http://www.andrewclem.com/LatinAmerica/WarOfThePacific.html andrewclem.com]: ''... , but Bolivia declared war on Chile and made known its “secret” alliance with Peru in March, ...''</li>
<li> [http://www.globalsecurity.org/military/ops/war-of-the-pacific.htm globalsecurity.com]: ''Bolivia, in alliance with Peru, declared war on Chile on March 1,...''</li>
<li> [http://encarta.msn.com/encyclopedia_761565235/war_of_the_pacific.html Encarta]: ''Bolivia declared war and was joined by Peru, a partner in a secret alliance.''</li>
<li> "The geopolitics of security in the Americas: hemispheric denial from Monroe ..." by Martin Sicker [http://books.google.com/books?id=WfrdnheP0CUC&pg=PA153&dq=Bolivia+declares+war+on+Chile#v=onepage&q=&f=false here]: ''and Bolivia declared war on 14 February 1879 ...''</li>
<li> "A history of Chile‎" - Page 326, by Luis Galdames, Isaac Joslin Cox - History - 1941 - 565 pages: ''The government of Chile refused to accede to this. Meanwhile Peru mobilized its army rapidly, Bolivia declared war against Chile, and the press of those ...''</li>
<li> "Chile and the War of the Pacific"‎ - Page 9 by William F. Sater - History - 1986 - 343 pages ''Two weeks after Chile occupied the disputed territory, Daza declared war.''</li>
<li> "The Bolivia-Chile-Peru dispute in the Atacama Desert" by Ronald Bruce St. John, Clive H. Schofield [http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=KPORDM85EsIC&pg=PA12&dq=%22war+of+the+pacific%22+bolivia+chile+%22declared+war%22&client=firefox-a#v=onepage&q=%22war%20of%20the%20pacific%22%20bolivia%20chile%20%22declared%20war%22&f=false here]: ''"Once Bolivia declared war on March 14 1879 ..."''.</ol>

Best Regards, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 16:11, 18 July 2011 (UTC)

:Bolivia didn't declare war. Even the first source you present states it: "Apparently this decree did not constitute a formal declaration of belligerence, which he announced on 18 March." "Undue weight" doesn't apply here since even Daza explains that the decree he presented was not a declaration of war.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 16:45, 18 July 2011 (UTC)
::You forget the 14 others, what about that?. Best Regards, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 23:07, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
:::You can provide 100+ sources on the topic, but the article already presents:
:::#The view that Chile saw Daza's decree as a declaration of war.
:::#The view that his decree was not a declaration of war.
:::The only new thing you have provided which is important to note is that Daza announced, on March 18, that he did declare war. You can take it to an administrator's forum, but like in the other issue, it will lead you to nothing.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 03:19, 20 July 2011 (UTC)
::::Hi MarshallN20, Keysanger seems to have provided quite a bit of support for his position here. Do you have reliable sources that also state that this decree was not a declaration of war? Generally, in situations like this, it is appropriate to note in the article that there is disagreement in the reliable sources. [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 04:10, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::Yes, I do have reliable sources for this matter. First, a quick analysis:
:::::#William F. Sater is used 3 times in his list, and the source contradicts itself. (P. 39) "''Thus, Daza's declaration of war was a godsend''". (P. 28) "''Apparently this decree did not constitute a formal declaration of belligerence, which he announced on 18 March.''" Something is incongruent with this source; how is it possible for a decree to not be a declaration of war in Page 28, but then become a declaration of war on Page 39?
:::::#The Iowa source does not support Keysanger's view as, "''On March 14 Bolivia advised representatives of foreign powers that a state of war existed with Chile''", does not translate into "Bolivia declared war on Chile".
:::::Please quit trying to trick users with your lists. You have been warned of this plenty of times.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 15:02, 22 July 2011 (UTC)

::::::My proposal is to consider William F. Sater as a reliable [http://www.blackwell-compass.com/subject/history/article_biog?article_id=hico_articles_bpl373 professor of Latin American History at California State University] (others [http://bilder.buecher.de/zusatz/21/21700/21700739_vorw_1.pdf], [http://www.csulb.edu/divisions/aa/catalog/2009-2010/emeritus/emeritus_s-z.html]). I am convinced that such a source is more reliable than the Peruvian newspaper "La Razon". If you have better sources, please feel free to let us know more. Best Regards, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 15:38, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
:::::::Sater is one person, not multiple persons. It's illogical to gather 3 sources from the same author and try to pass them off as different; writing: "''I found 15 sources''". It's also surprising that such a reliable source as Sater contradicts himself within the same book. If Daza is the author of his presidential decree, and Sater explains that Daza stated his decree ''was not'' a declaration of war; then how is it possible for a few pages later for Sater to claim the decree ''was'' a declaration of war? Sater places himself in a position in which he contrasts with Daza's opinion of his own decree.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 16:29, 22 July 2011 (UTC)

'''</nowiki>===MarshalN20 Sources===</nowiki>'''
<ol style="list-style-type:lower-roman;">
<li>Ramiro Prudencio Lizon (Historian and Diplomat) [http://www.la-razon.com/version.php?ArticleId=67183&EditionId=2582]: "In order for Chile to be able to advance further north an official war declaration was necessary. And it wasn't this country but rather Bolivia the one who sent an internal decree which was afterwards interpreted as a true declaration of war. [...] Obviously, '''Daza had no interest in declaring war''', because he knew that Bolivia was not in conditions to affront a campaign against a country much superior in belligerent resources and which counted with a powerful navy."</li>
<li>Atilio Sivirichi, "''Historia del Perú''" (1932), page 193: "[Daza's decree] was skilfully interpreted by the Chilean government as a declaration of war and as a justification for its occupation of the [Bolivian coast]."</li>
<li>William F. Sater, "''Andean Tragedy''", page 28: "Two weeks after the Chilean occupation of Antofagasta, he declared that '''Chile''' had imposed "a state of war" on Bolivia. Apparently this decree '''did not constitute a formal declaration of belligerence''', which he announced on 18 March."</li>
<li>Tommaso Caivano, "''Historia de la guerra de América entre Chile, Perú y Bolivia''", pages 61-62 ([http://books.google.com/books?id=KO9YAAAAMAAJ&pg=PA62&lpg=PA62&dq=Decreto+Daza+Bolivia+no+fue+declaracion+de+guerra&source=bl&ots=kR3Gg_OYeU&sig=_0xg1-ZmC3Ml3OpbMdgG2wtuZqo&hl=en&ei=TbwpTsTDM4i60AGDprjRCg&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=1&ved=0CBsQ6AEwAA#v=onepage&q&f=false]): "[Daza's decree], as can be clearly read within it, does not do anything more than dictate a few measures relative to true the state of war in which Bolivia and Chile found themselves after the invasion of [Bolivian territory] by [Chile], and, like it textually and carefully states, "''while this state of war imposed by Chile upon Bolivia''", was interpreted by Chile in an extremely original manner."</li>
<li>Mariano Felipe Paz Soldán, "''Narracion Historica de la Guerra de Chile contra el Peru y Bolivia''". On Page 80 he presents the Bolivian March 1st declaration and explains its nature (at no point describing it as a declaration of war). On Page 86 makes first mention of a declaration of war, this coming from Chile to both Peru and Bolivia. Text from Page 86 ([http://www.archive.org/stream/narracionhistri01soldgoog#page/n105/mode/2up]): "War having been declared by Chile, it needed to justify its conduct upon the neutral nations and, at a loss of good reasons founded in law and corroborated by deeds, opted for falsity, presenting a series of situations under a distortion of reality, and others completely false. [Chile] said among other things that Peru did not gesture Bolivia in time to lead it towards a good path and procede with fewer recklesness and violence in its determinations."</li>
<li>Valentín Abecia Baldivieso, "''The History of Bolivia in International Relations. Vol 2.''," page 73: "But in reality no such declaration of war took place. The decree (Hilarión Daza's decree) to which this characteristic [of declaring war] is attributed only alludes that "Chile has indeed invaded the national territory", stipulating that "all commerce and communication with the Republic of Chile is cut for the duration of the war that [Chile] has promoted upon Bolivia." He later states that Chileans should vacate the country given deadlines in cases of emergency and taking action on property belonging to them. Therefore, it is not correct to attribute that Decree the characteristics of a [[declaration of war]], because under the international law of the time, it was not. The steps taken were for security because Chile had taken Antofagasta. On April 3 the declaration of war by the Chilean Congress was approved, and by the 5th it became known throughout the press."</li>
</ol>
These sources are more than enough to demonstrate that Daza's decree was not a true declaration of war. Not only does Daza explain this, as sourced by Sater, but the information is backed up by historical analysis. On the other hand, the sources presented by Keysanger are merely textual ''parrots'', merely stating that Bolivia declared war without any further analysis. It's important to mention that the article does present Chile's view about Daza's decree. However, Keysanger is trying to use the WP concept of "Undue weight" to present Chile's POV as supreme and leave the analysis of Daza's decree (including Daza's own opinion about his decree) as "minority views".--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 18:49, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
:Your rationale is broken because you contradict yourself: W.F.Sater, is a source for or not for a Bolivian Declaration of war?. Now you say that he is a source for NO declaration of war. Above you say that he was cited three times. What about the other two?. Do you have also reliable sources?. Best Regards, --[[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 21:19, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
::I honestly don't understand what it is you are trying to state. I have already provided the necessary amount of sources to discard your "Undue Weight" claim.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 22:45, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
{{od}} Hi Marshal, I am inclined to agree that Keysanger has made a point here, and that it is probably too strong to have Wikipedia assert as a fact that, "under international law at that time neither side had actually declared war". That is an absolute statement. I think the statement should be attributed, i.e. "According to X, ...". When Wikipedia's voice makes an absolute statement, it should be a statement of an ''uncontested fact''. Also I am finding it confusing that Keysanger's sources do indeed say that Bolivia declared war - ''not just that Chile thought Bolivia declared war''. If these historians are wrong, the article doesn't help me to understand ''why'' they are wrong. I am happy to be persuaded otherwise? Also (a suggestion to both Keysanger & MarshalN20), having multiple threads open discussing multiple disputes at the same time is probably not ideal. Should we try to resolve this point first? [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 15:47, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
:That's not Keysanger's point, but rather your point Alex. Keysanger's point is that there is "Undue Weight" in the article, which is not true. The sources I have provided are from a long timespan (starting from the early 20th century all the way to the 2000's) of different historians from different nationalities (including Daza's own explanation of his decree). Your point, Alex, about the "International law" part and its status as "uncontested fact" is correct. Going back in time, I found this old consensus statement, proposed by me, in which the four users discussing this same issue at that time agreed [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:War_of_the_Pacific/Archive_3#Findings_so_far]:
<blockquote>''How about this for statement: "After the Chilean invasion of Antofagasta, Hilarión Daza made a presidential decree which demanded the expulsion of Chileans and the nationalizing of Chilean private property. Due to its aggressiveness, the Chilean government understood the decree as a declaration of war. However, although both nations had already taken aggressive actions, in reality no war had yet been formally declared from either side of the conflict."--[|!*//MarshalN20\\*!|] (talk) 00:56, 9 May 2009 (UTC)''</blockquote>
:This discussion reminded me of the existence of this consensus statment. I no idea what happened to it until now: [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=War_of_the_Pacific&diff=312004072&oldid=311999668]. It turns out that Keysanger massively deleted the consensus statement and sources in order to impose his POV. Strangely enough, he is trying to do the exact same thing at this point, except that now he tries to use the concept of "Undue Weight". I don't believe in history repeating itself, but this sure does seem like a case of ''Déjà vu''. What I plan to do at this point is propose another consensus statement, which may take a few minutes.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 17:10, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
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===Discussion===
Marshall's list of 6 sources has severe problems. Atilio Sivirichi, Mariano Felipe Paz Soldán are Peruvian and Valentín Abecia Baldivieso and Ramiro Prudencio Lizon are Bolivian historians. They represent a rand view that see Peru and Bolivia as victims of the Chilean agressor. Tommaso Caivano is an Italian historian and is a primary source ([https://www.libri.de/shop/action/productDetails/13542633/tommaso_caivano_storia_della_guerra_d_america_parts_1_2_fra_chili_il_peru_e_la_bolivia_1886_1169148034.html 1886]). This 5 sources recognize that Bolivia declared a '''state of war''' and interpreted by Chile, and the majority of historians, as declaration of war.

The only one neutral historian in MarshalN20's list, is professor of Latin American History at California State University W. F. Sater. Perhaps is that the reason why MarshalN20 has so many problems to understand Sater's passage: ''"Apparently this decree did not constitute a formal declaration of belligerence, which he announced on 18 March."''. Instead the complete sentence MarshalN20 reads ''"<s>Apparently</s> this decree did not constitute a formal declaration of belligerence, <s>which he announced on 18 March.</s>"'' and lose sight of the fact that the other two books of Sater, also given in my list, repeat the same fact: ''"in March he (Daza) suddenly declared war on Chile"'' and ''"Two weeks after Chile occupied the disputed territory, Daza declared war"''. Therefore MarshalN20 presents one of Sater's books as a support for his theory.

Other neutral historians in my list are Dr. Robert L. Scheina, William Jefferson Dennis, Martin Sicker, John L. Rector (professor of history at Western Oregon University), Erik Goldstein (Professor of International Relations and History. (BA, Tufts University; MA, MALD, Fletcher School of Law and Diplomacy; PhD, University of Cambridge, Specialization: Diplomacy, International Relations, British Foreign Policy)([http://www.bu.edu/ir/faculty/alphabetical/goldstein/]), etc.

Of course I plead for a cite of the MarshalN20 view, I think we can show to the reader rand views, but the due weight must be correct. MarshalN20's view is a rand POV even in Perú. [[Jorge Basadre]] a famous Peruvian historian tell us about the declaration and why Daza was interested in a early declaration of war (See Jorge Besadre, "Historia de la Republica, La guerra con Chile"):
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<blockquote>Pero las pasiones excitadas no se enfriaron. El dí­a 18 de marzo se abrió un nuevo perí­odo de la misión Lavalle. Ese dí­a fue recibido en Santiago, desde Tacna por correo y desde Caldera por telégrafo el decreto expedido por el Presidente Daza y notificado al cuerpo diplomático el 14 de marzo estableciendo el casus belli con Chile con todos sus efectos y consecuencias, junto con otros decretos de ruptura de relaciones mientras durara la guerra y de expulsión y confiscación de bienes chilenos en Bolivia. Esto ocurrió a pesar de que Quiones y Doria Medina acordaron el 5 de marzo las bases para la mediación peruana. La versión chilena fue que Bolivia quiso impedir que Chile se armara. En realidad, Daza buscó la forma de malograr la misión Lavalle. Una vez más la legación peruana en La Paz había fallado porque, según el tratado secreto, un acto de esta especie debía haberse hecho previo acuerdo de las partes. Al no estar declarada la guerra entre Chile y Bolivia, Chile no podía pedir al Perú que se mantuviera neutral. Porque la había declarado Bolivia, la exigencia chilena de neutralidad peruana era inevitable. La declaración boliviana de guerra era (dice el historiador chileno Bulnes) un palo atravesado en las ruedas del carro empujado por Lavalle. La situación que se habí­a ido agravando mes a mes y semana a semana, se complicaba ahora día a dí­a, hora a hora, minuto a minuto. El Perú se veí­a envuelto con rapidez creciente en un conflicto tremendo, sin tiempo casi para presentar la acción conciliatoria propia y sin haber buscado una acción análoga de Argentina, Estados Unidos o las potencias europeas</blockquote>
Tranlation by Keysanger:
<blockquote>...on 18 March was the begin of a new phase in Lavalle's mission. This day was received in Santiago from Tacna by post and from Caldera by telegram Daza's decree that notified on 14 March all diplomats about the casus belli against Chile with all efects and consequences, together with other decrees of rupture of relations as long as the war lasted and of expulsion of Chileans and confiscation of his goods. The Chilean version saw that Bolivia ['s declaration of war] aimed to impede the purchase of weapons to Chile. In reality, Daza intended to eliminate Lavalle's mission. Once again the Peruvian legation in La Paz [Bolivia] failed because in accordance with the treaty such act [declaration of war] should have been done in agreement between both [Peru and Bolivia]. As long as no state of war between Chile and Bolivia existed , Chile couldn't require neutrality from Peru. Since Bolivia declared the war on Chile, the Chilean request of Peruvian neutrality was inevitable. '''The Bolivian declaration of war on Chile was (as stated by Chilean historian Bulnes) a traverse fault through the wheel of Lavalle's handkart'''. The situation worsened month to month ...</blockquote> (Bold by Keysanger)
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As we can read there is nothing in Besadre's "Historia de la Republica, La guerra con Chile" about a lacks of Bolivian declaration of war. Best Regards, [[User:Keysanger|Keysanger]] ([[User talk:Keysanger|what?]]) 23:37, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

:Alex Harvey is helping us out in the talk page of the article. At this point you're making forks of the discussion, and make a poor job at trying to discard my sources as unreliable when they are all written by reliable historians from different times in history. Thanks.--[[User:MarshalN20|<span style="color:red">'''MarshalN20'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:MarshalN20|<sup><font color="Red">'''T'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''a'''</font><font color="Yellow">'''l'''</font><font color="Red">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 23:48, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

== Red Eye w/ Greg Gutfeld ==

I believe the langauge in this section which deals with host Greg Gutfield's comments violate NPOV policy

"In a September 28, 2010, Rolling Stone article, President Barack Obama made another political attack[75] [76] [77] on Fox News Channel by accusing the cable network of having a "point of view that I think is ultimately destructive for the long-term growth of a country that has a vibrant middle-class."[78] [79] Red Eye host Greg Gutfeld responded to this particular political attack by Obama with his following September 29, 2010 Greg-alogue:[80] [81]


:I believe our article should state clearly that Reiki is not a replacement of conventional medical treatment, and that it can involve non-standard financial costs. However,{{pb}}
"Okay. So, you're the President of the United States, with both houses under your control. You also have the most fawning press of any president in the History of the Universe. And yet you let FNC get under your skin, because it’s the only network that doesn’t have a 'thrill up its leg'? Obama is like a sports team who owns the Ref, the fans and the field, but refuses to play ball until the kid in the 10th row stops chewing gum."
:Imagine, if, I say if, you were one of the good-faith Reiki practitioners who has never intended to deceive (you genuinely believe that you are helping others). One day you come home from work, and your children ask you,
:{{pb}}
:“Dad (/Mum), my classmates said what you are doing is quackery and pseudoscience. You are bad and you are deceiving people. You aren’t doing good work as you’ve told me, is it? They said it’s what Wikipedia said!”{{pb}}
:Is that OK? --[[User:Dustfreeworld|<span style="color: navy">'''Dustfreeworld'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Dustfreeworld|talk]]) 19:09, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
::Yes. NPOV does not mean that Wikipedia should avoid reporting the facts. Quacks need not be deliberate frauds - sometimes they are just well meaning but ignorant folks who have avoided educating themselves. That doesn't mean we should avoid doing so on Wikipedia. [[User:MrOllie|MrOllie]] ([[User talk:MrOllie|talk]]) 19:22, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
:::{{tq|Yes.}} -{{smiley|:-O}}{{pb}}{{pb}}
:::{{tq|Quacks need not be deliberate frauds - sometimes they are just '''well meaning''' but ignorant folks who have avoided educating themselves.}}
:::I don’t think so. That’s your personal opinion.
:::From [[quackery|our own definition]]:
:::<blockquote>Quackery, often synonymous with health '''fraud''', is the promotion of '''fraudulent''' or ignorant medical practices. A quack is a "'''fraudulent''' or ignorant '''pretender''' to medical skill" or "a person who '''pretends''', professionally or publicly, to have skill, knowledge, qualification or credentials they do not possess; a charlatan or snake oil salesman"</blockquote> --[[User:Dustfreeworld|<span style="color: navy">'''Dustfreeworld'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Dustfreeworld|talk]]) 19:40, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
::::"ignorant medical practices"&mdash;from the definition just given. [[User:tgeorgescu|tgeorgescu]] ([[User talk:tgeorgescu|talk]]) 19:54, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
::::'''Ignorant''' is right there in what you quoted. [[User:MrOllie|MrOllie]] ([[User talk:MrOllie|talk]]) 19:55, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
::::“Unambiguous exposés of quackery will inevitably appear rude to some people and hurt some feelings. This is a fact of adult life.” Quoted from PMID: 15208545. [[User:tgeorgescu|tgeorgescu]] ([[User talk:tgeorgescu|talk]]) 20:07, 5 June 2024 (UTC)


== Great Barrington Declaration ==
"And this is why the Crybaby-in-Chief needs us. It provides cover, so Obama can criticize Americans without ever saying 'those Americans.' He can just say Fox News instead. One thing is for sure: If you go after a collection of talking-heads, you're going to get an earful back. And if you disagree with me, you're a racist, homophobic, taurophobe." <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/118.93.220.21|118.93.220.21]] ([[User talk:118.93.220.21|talk]]) 06:42, 24 July 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
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[75] http://www.torontosun.com/news/columnists/peter_worthington/2009/10/29/11561946-sun.html <br>
[76] http://www.nytimes.com/2009/10/12/business/media/12fox.html?pagewanted=all <br>
[77] http://www.nytimes.com/2009/10/18/weekinreview/18davidcarr.html?ref=media <br>
[78] http://www.rollingstone.com/politics/news/obama-in-command-br-the-rolling-stone-interview-20100928?page=2 <br>
[79] http://www.aoltv.com/2010/09/29/obama-slams-fox-news-and-greg-gutfeld-slams-him-back-video%20&%20transcript/ <br>
[80] http://www.aoltv.com/2010/09/29/obama-slams-fox-news-and-greg-gutfeld-slams-him-back-video%20&%20transcript/ <br>
[81] http://www.foxnews.com/story/0,2933,601642,00.html 9-29-2010 'Greg-alogue' transcript <br>
-footnoted sources added by: --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 06:08, 28 July 2011 (UTC)


Article: [[Great Barrington Declaration]]
:I wouldn't say it's a blatant NPOV violation but it could use some cleanup. It should simply say "President Barack Obama criticized Fox News Channel..." and "responded to this criticism from Obama with..." instead of "political attacks". The phrases "another" and "this particular" are subtle POV phrases. –[[User:CWenger|CWenger]] ([[User talk:CWenger|<font face="Webdings"><big>^</big></font>]] • [[Special:Contributions/CWenger|<font face="Webdings"><big>@</big></font>]]) 06:57, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
::Greg Gutfeld, the host of Red Eye, specifically said that he was responding to this particular quote by President Obama in ''Rolling Stone''. That is not a POV - that is a fact and sourced with complete transcript of episode containing the complete Greg-alogue, which is not shown above. The phrases "another political attack" is also not POV because the White House Anita Dunn publicly announced in the ''New York Times'' and elsewhere that they would be making many political attacks against Fox News and their on-air personalities from now on in response to what they saw as political attacks by Fox. This is also all fact - not POV and many political attacks soon followed which were all reported as such, including the Rolling Stone Obama quote, even by the ''New York Times'' which warned the WH that it was unwise to attack Fox News and their on-air personalities in this way. --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 13:56, 26 July 2011 (UTC)


I'd like to bring the forementioned article to the attention of the noticeboard.
Well my point also to add would be that this paragraph is also not needed as no other news agency carried the story of any conflict between Obama and Red eye, but yes criticized is an appropriate substitute, if someone could please make these changes as the current author to the page keeps changing these attempts. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/118.93.220.21|118.93.220.21]] ([[User talk:118.93.220.21|talk]]) 08:25, 24 July 2011 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:I had a look and it looks obvious that an editor or editors are expressing a POV that Obama has made ''political attacks'', not criticisms, against Fox News. The wording is contrived to reiterate that they were 'political attacks' and about 10 sources have been added to "prove" that Obama has made "blatant political attacks". I'll try to clean it up. [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 15:11, 25 July 2011 (UTC)


'''Issues:'''
The user IP 118 that wants this change is a long-time banned user known originally as Jackjit. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Sockpuppet_investigations/Jackjit/Archive
He libeled the host of Red Eye, Greg Gutfeld, calling him a racist in the Red Eye article without any source, so he is not capable of judging NPOV or having fairness on this Red Eye article. He has a LONG history of ''shopping for help'' [[WP:FORUMSHOP]] using his banned ''shared/revolving'' 118 IP address, avoiding his block. He was just recently blocked again after avoiding his block. Over the past months, many other editors have reverted these changes Jackjit/118 wants to the Red Eye article, as well as his other vandalism to the article, so he is not being truthful here saying it is only one editor reverting his changes/vandalism. In fact, many editors across Wiki are reverting his vandalism to Conservative/republican articles. He should not be here ''shopping around for help'' (he's supposed to be banned), but especially since I was NOT notified of this discussion here but discovered it on my own by mere chance. I suspected this when user Alexh suddenly showed up out-of-the-blue on Red Eye article deleting the same well-sourced material as Jackjit/118IP.


* The article content seems to have a clear bias of criticism against the declaration.
As to [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) false/uninformed accusation that 10 references were added over time, it is only three reliable sources that have always supported the term "another political attack", which is toned down from "war" and "battle" which is used in the two "New York Times" sources and ''Toronto Sun'' source. Ten more could have been referenced, but three is plenty to support the language some people might find objectionable. These sources also use the term "attack". WP:NPOV is being followed here because the language used is netural when compared to the reliable sources language, which is much harsher POV and tone toward Obama administration's political war/battle against Fox News and how unwise the Obama administration was to announce a war against Fox. Also, WP:NPOV does allow objectionable language to be used, even if some or many may find it objectionable or more likely [[WP:JUSTDONTLIKEIT]].
* The article has multiple paragraphs where sentences read more like an editorial, not a factual wikipedia article
* The editing history on the article shows a continuous reversal of seemingly factual edits made by other editors


I have always been open to some changes to this particular section and have allowed several to remain in the past without challenging them, even though I thought the references fully supported keeping them. It is not fair for one editor (Alexh) to go delete material that has been well sourced without discussing it on the Talk page of the article first, especially since this is a '''very obvious attempt''' at shopping for help [[WP:FORUMSHOP]] and [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) willingly took the bait and then stated falehoods here. He obviously did NOT look at the footnotes because if he had, he would have known there were three sources cited supporting the term, not ten as he stated above (addendum: and not 6 either, as he incorrectly stated below --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 03:43, 28 July 2011 (UTC)). That also proves ''he did NOT even bother to read the source material to see if it did support the language before he deleted the content'' (but he did leave many references hanging so a 'bot' wouldn't immediately revert his edits as pure vandalism); therefore, his only ''real objection'' is [[WP:JUSTDONTLIKEIT]]! It is false that anything was "contrived" - it was all well-sourced. The term "political attack" is an often used term which describes an attack that is of a "political" nature, which is fully supported by the three references which Alexh didn't bother to read before making his uninformed deletions and forcing ''his'' political POV into the article without any discussion.


'''Examples:'''
Please compare my talk page/contributions to Alexh and Jackjit and see who is more capable of compromise, following NPOV and being fair with deletions/helpful edits/adding references/talk. I like debating issues such as this, but the ''proper'' place is the Red Eye Talk page where other interested editors, who wanted to keep the language in question and have in the past reverted these same edits by Jackjit/118IP (and now, Alexh), could have commented. Jackjit/118IP knew many there didn't want that material deleted, so he went ''shopping for help'' [[WP:FORUMSHOP]] to get someone else to respond to his deceptive untruths and then make his edits, which is always his MO when he can't get his way by simply deleting well sourced material without discussion. So much for banning a user on Wiki - even one as bad as Jackjit still edits deceptively on Wiki and spreads untruths to get his way. --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 09:54, 26 July 2011 (UTC) --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 13:11, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
:Hi Red Eyed Cajun, is it fair to say that this is a pretty strongly worded response? For the record I am Australian with no interest in US politics and no prior knowledge of this subject. One doesn't always need prior knowledge to see that something is biased, and that is the case with the section discussed here. It's true that I didn't actually count the number of sources you've given to justify your wording 'political attacks' and 'blatantly attacking'. So now I have counted and you have 6, 3 on the first wording and 3 on the second. Generally, there are a lot of footnotes "proving" various bits of wording in that article - probably more than I've ever seen actually. The NPOV policy states,
:<blockquote>'''Prefer non-judgmental language'''. A neutral point of view neither sympathizes with nor disparages its subject (or what reliable sources say about the subject), although this must sometimes be balanced against clarity. Present opinions and conflicting findings in a disinterested tone.</blockquote>
:::Actually, if you had ever bothered just once to go read the footnotes and sources, you would know that I did not try to "prove various bits" with footnotes. That is outright false. There are 3 footnotes (not 6 or 10 footnotes like you incorrectly stated above) that show this was 'another political attack' by Obama. The first sentence was a combination of a ''Rolling Stone'' Obama quote and another source which used the word "attack", all properly footnoted at the end of the sentence. I'm so sorry if you just don't like properly footnoted content on Wiki, which is Wiki policy. --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 05:44, 28 July 2011 (UTC)


A few examples (pasted from the article verbatim, problematic sections bolded):
:Do you feel that your section is consistent with this policy? Do you feel you have used a disinterested tone? [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 15:14, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
::In 20/20 hindsight, I should not have gone with the word "attack" which the reliable sources used (and thus mislead me). I should have instead replaced "attack" with the term "political comment", i.e. "President Obama made the political comment that Fox News was a destructive force..." That would have been a lot better than the current wording which uses the biased [[weasel word]] "criticized" which automatically implies there is something bad that deserves criticism. --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 05:37, 28 July 2011 (UTC)


* ''"It claimed harmful COVID-19 lockdowns could be avoided via the '''fringe notion''' of "focused protection", by which those most at risk of dying from an infection could purportedly be kept safe while society otherwise took no steps to prevent infections"'' - Negative bias in framing the content. Multiple reverts in the edit history regarding different editors attempting to remove the "fringe" claim in its current phrasing.
::Nobody here has complained once about "destructive force" being very pejorative. Yet they delete Gutfeld's response quote of "Crybaby-in-Chief". The section is now in violation of WP:NPOV as long as "destructive force" is allowed without being balanced by Gutfeld's "Crybaby-in-Chief" response for clarity/balance. In an ironic way, by removing Gutfeld's "crybaby" quote, Gutfeld's 'Greg-alogue' response cannot be properly judged in context by the reader. Many on the left might well say Gutfeld's political response to the President's political comments proves Fox's on-air personalities are "destructive forces". Do you really think Gutfeld's response was helpful to Fox News' image? The ''Huffington Post'' bloggers didn't think so.--[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 05:37, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
* ''"By October 2020, many of these things had already happened in some parts of the world, but likewise were being restricted elsewhere; for instance the UK saw quarantines of students, travel advisories, restrictions on meeting other people, and partial closures of schools, pubs and restaurants."'' - An editorial-like sentence that appears under the "Background and content" section. The content section should focus on the content of the declaration, not editors adding their own interpretations of the context.
* ''"The declaration does not provide practical details about who should be protected or how they can be protected. For instance, it does not mention testing any people outside of nursing homes, [[contact tracing]], [[Face masks during the COVID-19 pandemic|wearing masks]], or [[social distancing]]. It mentions multi-generational households but does not provide any information about how, for example, low-risk people can get infected without putting high-risk members of their household at risk of dying."'' - Again, the whole paragraph is an editorial and WP:OR
* ''"The declaration does not provide any references to published data that support the declaration's strategy."'' - Again, with the phrasing used, this is WP:OR. A single source provided as reference to the claim is a newspaper article. At the very least, this should be phrased as "Critics have claimed that the declaration does not provide any references to published data that support the declaration's strategy. I will attempt to correct this and will see how long the correction will remain.


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::To re-quote NPOV policy: "A neutral point of view neither sympathizes with nor disparages its subject (or what reliable sources say about the subject), although this must sometimes be ''balanced against clarity.'' Present opinions and conflicting findings in a disinterested tone." And objectionable material you [[WP:JUSTDONTLIKE]] is not a reason to delete and eviscerate a section using [[WP:NPOV]] as a sledge hammer, because sometimes you lose the very clarity, balance and unbiased content most are seeking to present on Wiki articles. --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 05:37, 28 July 2011 (UTC)


::Hi Alex, Cajun. I've gone through the section and trimmed it. There's no reason for using a pejorative term ("political attack") when a non-perjorative term ("critcise") will suffice. Alex, [[Wikipedia:Citation_overkill#Examples|this list]] may both amuse and depress you; I've seen far worse than two pairs of three citations on Wikipedia. '''[[User:Sceptre|Sceptre]]''' <sup>([[User talk:Sceptre|talk]])</sup> 16:37, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
:::I have no problem at all leaving the edits you made to the article. We shall see if others who disagreed in the past step up now and revert your edits or not. I will let others decide the fate of this section. But I don't think a banned user like Jackjit should be allowed to edit/vandalize this article or others, using WP:FORUMSHOP by asking above "...if someone could please make these changes..." I did NOT think further describing the kind of "attack", which was the word used in many reliable sources, by adding it was an obvious "political" attack was perjorative. It's all political and don't we all know this. I think it was also fair of these same sources to say some of Fox's "attacks" were political in nature and the WH had every right to respond sometimes. --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 17:14, 26 July 2011 (UTC)
I will offer here what was never offered to the interested editors of the [[Red Eye w/ Greg Gutfeld]] article: I am copying this discussion (minus the banned user Jackjit's comments) and moving it to the ''Red Eye'' TALK page, which the NPOV noticeboard policy clearly states was the proper place to discuss such major changes to content of the article. --[[User:RedEyedCajun|RedEyedCajun]] ([[User talk:RedEyedCajun|talk]]) 06:48, 28 July 2011 (UTC)


== Coatracking at [[George Packer]]? ==


[[User:Saltsjöbaden|Saltsjöbaden]] ([[User talk:Saltsjöbaden|talk]]) 19:29, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
An editor has removed the following brief text from the [[George Packer]] article based upon the claim that it is coatracking:


:This is too misleadingly framed to result in well-informed outside opinions. Much of what is described as editorial opinion or original research is pulled directly from reliable sources. [[User:Firefangledfeathers|Firefangledfeathers]] ([[User talk:Firefangledfeathers|talk]] / [[Special:Contributions/Firefangledfeathers|contribs]]) 19:35, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
:''From 2004 to 2005, Packer contributed $1,000 to Democratic organizations and candidates.''
:: Another example of non-NPOV behavior by editors can be found here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Great_Barrington_Declaration#Signatories [[User:Saltsjöbaden|Saltsjöbaden]] ([[User talk:Saltsjöbaden|talk]]) 20:20, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
:After reading the content and checking the cited sources, the article looks neutral to me—in that it neutrally summarizes what reliable, secondary sources say, and it gives prominence to available mainstream viewpoints over fringe viewpoints. I'll also say that highlighting a list of signatories that aren't highlighted in secondary sources is a great example of an edit that should be reverted on sight, not only for NPOV reasons but BLP as well. [[User:Woodroar|Woodroar]] ([[User talk:Woodroar|talk]]) 20:55, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
::I think this is a case of [[Wikipedia:NPOV means neutral editing, not neutral content]].
::@[[User:Saltsjöbaden|Saltsjöbaden]], when nearly all of the ''reliable'' sources say that this proposal is vague, unworkable, will result in hospitals collapsing, increase the total number of deaths, etc., then the Wikipedia article is [[Wikipedia:NPOV|required by policy]] to reflect this dominant view as being the dominant view. It is not "neutral" to [[Wikipedia:GEVAL|pretend that both views are equally plausible]].
::About your claim that {{xt|editors adding their own interpretations of the context}}: It is a fact that you can't have the schools open for in-person instruction of all kids and still keep all high-risk adults (aka their teachers, almost half of whom qualified as high-risk) at home. It is a fact that you can't have all kids in school and keep their high-risk family members from being exposed to the germs that the kids will share at school. In the US, about 20% of kids live in multi-generational homes. "Go to school" and "Nobody living with Grandma (or the baby) should go anywhere" are mutually exclusive options. These are not "my interpretations"; these are things that come ''from reliable sources''. They are also facts, not opinions. It is not "editorializing"; it is "explaining".
::We could go further: I understand that there are sources saying that the reason GBD doesn't provide any details is because they knew (or ought to know) that this was not workable in practice, but they wanted to make a political splash despite knowing that their whole idea was bad. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 18:38, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
*Really hard to see anything failing NPOV here. The letter was strongly criticized by experts in medicine and virology, among other sciences. It's ideas may have some possible credibility but there stances were unproven and went against the prevailing scientific thought. As such it is presented in the correct tone to reflect that it's claims are dubious, rather that yet proven
[[User:Masem|M<span style="font-variant: small-caps">asem</span>]] ([[User Talk:Masem|t]]) 18:52, 5 June 2024 (UTC)


== I feel an edit war simmering ==
This is sourced to [http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/19113485/ns/politics/t/journalists-dole-out-cash-politicians-quietly/ this] article by investigative journalist [[Bill Dedman]], where Packer is disussed:


[[Special:Contributions/Dadude sandstorm|Dadude sandstorm]] keeps changing Ursula Andress' longstanding infobox photo to an unrecognizable photo taken in her teens [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ursula_Andress&diff=1226285073&oldid=1224664918] [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ursula_Andress&diff=1226710278&oldid=1226649802] (around a decade before she even became famous, by the way).
:''George Packer is The New Yorker's man in Iraq.''


Everyone knows that BLP infoboxes should use modern photos. I can already tell from the vocabulary in the second edit summary that the odds of this user being reasonable are slim. Any of you willing to take the reigns? [[User:Ieonine|Ieonine]] ([[User talk:Ieonine|talk]]) 19:58, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
:''The war correspondent for the magazine since 2003 and author of the acclaimed 2005 book "The Assassins' Gate: America in Iraq," Packer gave $750 to the Democratic National Committee in August 2004, and then $250 in 2005 to Iraq war veteran Paul Hackett, an anti-war Democrat who campaigned unsuccessfully for a seat in Congress from Ohio.''


:Hey, @[[User:Ieonine|Ieonine]]. Thanks for the report. Have you ever started any [[Wikipedia:Requests for comment]]? It's not difficult. Try a question like "Which image should be used in the infobox?" You might give people a link to [[c:Category:Ursula Andress]] and to whichever guidelines you think are relevant. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 18:52, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
:''In addition to his reported pieces, Packer also writes commentary for the magazine, such as his June 11 piece ruing Bush's "shallow, unreflective character."''


== Gaza Health Ministry ==
:''"My readers know my views on politics and politicians because I make no secret of them in my comments for The New Yorker and elsewhere," Packer said. "If giving money to a politician prejudiced my ability to think and write honestly, I wouldn't do it. Fortunately, it doesn't."''


Some non-involved editors would be welcome at [[Gaza Health Ministry]].
In addition, an article in ''The Washington Post'' also mentions Dedman's reporting about Packer's contributions.


The context is essentially
The dispute has been discussed [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:George_Packer#Campaign_contributions_and_reliable_sources here].
* Israel and the US expressed unspecific doubts about GHM's casualty data.
::I don't know about "coatrack", but my feeling is that for a biography as brief as this one, it would be a [[WP:BLP|BLP]] violation and [[WP:UNDUE|undue weight]] to include material that arguably puts a question mark over his political neutrality. [[User:Alexh19740110|Alex Harvey]] ([[User talk:Alexh19740110|talk]]) 13:20, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
* Organizations like the UN say the GHM's data has historically been reliable.
* Two peer-reviewed articles published in [[The Lancet]] did not find evidence of inflated or fabricated data.
* Later, statistics professor Abraham Wyner wrote in [[Tablet (magazine)]] that the data contained irregularities, such as a strong negative correlation between male and female deaths.
* Later still, [[Michael Spagat]] wrote about GHM's "declining data quality", explained by a shift to user-submitted reports as hospitals have closed.


The current lede is unbalanced, emphasizing the sources that say the data is reliable, while not mentioning opposing viewpoints at all. My various attempts to include brief mentions of the latter (even just "received significant attention and scrutiny") have been reverted.
== No Man Knows My History: The Life of Joseph Smith ==


The argument seems to be that the two peer-reviewed Lancet articles trump non-peer-reviewed sources, making opposing viewpoints somewhat fringe. However, the two Lancet articles are older, and focused on very different aspects of the data. In some sense they support opposing narratives, but they absolutely don't contradict one another.
The article concerns the first critical biography of Mormon founder Joseph Smith written by Fawn Brodie in 1945. A recent conflict has arisen between me (a non-Mormon) and all the other current editors (who are Mormons), over whether research by a Mormon geneticist and publicized only by a LDS-owned newspaper and a Mormon apologetic organization should be so labeled. The Mormon editors oppose allowing readers to be aware of these connections. Here's the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=No_Man_Knows_My_History%3A_The_Life_of_Joseph_Smith&action=historysubmit&diff=441729171&oldid=441720114| diff].


The current article also quotes a blog comment by "Ken M", with speculation about how the irregularities noted by Wyner might be explained. My attempt to remove that was reverted as well. — [[User:XDanielx|<span style="font-family: Arial; font-weight: bold; color: green;">xDanielx</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:XDanielx|T]]</sup>/<sub>[[Special:Contributions/XDanielx|C]]</sub>\<sup>[[Wikipedia:Editor review/xDanielx|R]]</sup> 17:56, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
Here's a [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:No_Man_Knows_My_History:_The_Life_of_Joseph_Smith&action=edit&section=8| link] to the discussion segment. There's more, but this section is probably more than you want to read anyway.--[[User:John Foxe|John Foxe]] ([[User talk:John Foxe|talk]]) 21:47, 27 July 2011 (UTC)


:I think you might want to reflect on the concept of [[Materiality (auditing)]]. No source I've seen thinks the GHM data is dramatically wrong. It's even possible that it's an undercount (e.g., bodies that haven't been found in the rubble yet). [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 18:56, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
==[[Abortion]]==
Several editors at this article want the lead sentence to say there is no such thing as abortion after about five months of pregnancy (i.e. when the fetus becomes viable), notwithstanding definitions in reliable sources like the ''Oxford English Dictionary''.[http://oxforddictionaries.com/definition/abortion] So, the lead sentence of the article now recites a narrow medical definition, while excluding all other definitions, and this lead sentence has been installed without talk page consensus regarding how to change the previous lead sentence that existed from 2006 to 2011. Wikipedia is a general encyclopedia rather than a strictly medical text, and the subject of this article is not merely medical, but also social, legal, historical, etc. Favoring a narrow technical definition to the 100% exclusion of all broader viewpoints in reliable sources seems contrary to NPOV, and seems to be intended to reduce the scope of the entire article. Any advice?[[User:Anythingyouwant|Anythingyouwant]] ([[User talk:Anythingyouwant|talk]]) 07:28, 28 July 2011 (UTC)

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    The "prophet Muhammad" (lowercase 'p')[edit]

    UrielAcosta seems to be on a mission, systematically searching through Wikipedia to find "[p]rophet Muhammad" and remove the word "prophet" (even if it's in lowercase), with the edit summary: Removed religious bias per MOS:PBUH because he's not Wikipedia's prophet.

    The latter link points to NPOV policy.

    I and other editors have queried these edits on UrielAcosta's talk page, but UrielAcosta disagreed and soon after, s/he deleted the talk page entries, and continued to make these mass edits.

    My mild objection, as a non-Muslim, is that "prophet" (lowercase 'p') is descriptive and informative, and is in accordance with MOS, so when the word "prophet" has been removed, I've instead re-added it as "Islamic prophet Muhammad" (for greater clarity). To me, this is no different than referring to "the novelist Doris Lessing", or "the British politician Rishi Sunak".

    MOS:MUHAMMAD actually says this: recommended action is to simplify and NPOV to just "Muhammad" except when it is the first reference in an article, or the first reference in the lead, in which case it may be rendered as "the Islamic prophet Muhammad" if necessary.

    I'd appreciate the input of other editors here, please. Thanks. Esowteric + Talk + Breadcrumbs 09:20, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    • Pertinent discussions held on this subject with UrielAcosta] arehere and here. I addressed the rationale "because he's not Wikipedia's prophet" by observing Pablo Escobar is not Wikipedia's drug lord, but it wouldn't be wrong to write of somebody, "It was on his trip to Panama that he became acquainted with drug lord Pablo Escobar.". Their bizarre response: ... you are 100% incorrect: Pablo Escobar IS Wikipedia's drug lord, because "drug lord" has a specific definition in English and Escobar qualifies under that definition. I mean, huh? (Have you ever heard Escobar described as "Wikipedia's drug lord"?) Then I pointed out that WP:PBUH explicitly provides for the usage that they've been obliterating, distinguishing honoring someone from merely identifying them in context on first mention, and it fell on deaf ears. When I saw that UrielAcosta had taken this campaign up again with vigor after having been reproved by at least three people, I was ready to report them to WP:ANI or somewhere, so I thank User:Esowteric for raising it here. Largoplazo (talk) 11:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Relevant discussion: Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Islam-related articles#NPOV usage of "the prophet Muhammad" or "the prophet" Some1 (talk) 11:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • I've instead re-added it as "Islamic prophet Muhammad" (for greater clarity). Did UrielAcosta revert these edits (by removing "Islamic prophet")? If they did, then that would be against what MOS:PBUH recommends (i.e. adding "the Islamic prophet" if necessary for clarity purposes). If they didn't revert, then they're just following what MOS:PBUH recommends. Some1 (talk) 12:14, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      No, they changed "prophet Muhammed" to "Muhammed", but left alone my later changes to "Islamic prophet Muhammed". However, they did this to the first (or only) mention of the name Muhammed in the two articles that were on my watchlist that were affected. Esowteric + Talk + Breadcrumbs 12:19, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      The only reason I bring this up is that these are mass edits, so a whole lot of people may either not notice the changes or choose to change the entries to "the prophet Muhammad", when they could either be left alone or the passionate editor could make the changes themselves and avoid work for others. Esowteric + Talk + Breadcrumbs 12:22, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • I don’t agree with the removal of “prophet” for the first usage of Muhammad in an article because the MOS clearly allows for the usage in that case. That being said, I don’t think it’s necessary to go back and add it to articles where it was removed. I don’t agree that “Muhammad” (with the wikilink) would cause confusion to the reader. Mokadoshi (talk) 12:16, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      Thanks, but how many Wikipedia articles would simply name Rishi Sunak because users could easily click on the link to find out who he is or what he is, when it is far simpler and more informative to refer to them in the first instance as (say) British Prime Minister Rishi Sunak? Esowteric + Talk + Breadcrumbs 12:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      I don’t think specifying “British Prime Minister” is necessary every time. In some cases it is helpful, like the usage of “Senator Obama” verses “President Obama” can clarify the period of his career when an event occurred. I don’t think it’s an appropriate comparison to this case. Probably a better comparison would be “author J.K. Rowling” verses just “J.K. Rowling” and the former seems to be rare. Mokadoshi (talk) 13:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • I've been asked to give my two pennies worth on this matter as I was made aware of Uriel Costa's editing on Bust of Abd al-Rahman III, Cadrete, a page I had created. I did not know, but I was barely surprised, that Uriel Costa then went on to make the same edit on a variety of other pages. This is my view on the matter:
      The page I saw related to a Muslim monarch. Monarchs are known by their given name. Removing "prophet" before Muhammad could be confusing as many monarchs, including in Islamic Spain where I was writing about, were also called Muhammad.
      I just put "prophet" as a disambiguator. I think it's quite clear in the context we were not talking about a prophet of the Mormons. Uriel Costa removed this completely, he did not even negotiate by saying "Islamic prophet".
      You could say that the majority of the world does not see Muhammad as a prophet, nor has any human been peer-reviewed to be a prophet. But at the same time, we have the page at Guru Nanak when the majority of the world has probably not even heard of him, and no independent study has proven that he had more spiritual wisdom than anyone else in the world. The term Pope comes from "father" and the majority of the world does not see him that way, but we still title the page Pope Francis.
      My previous edit was not endorsing Islam, a religion I do not follow, and instead of making it more specific, getting rid of "prophet" completely made it less specific. Unknown Temptation (talk) 16:14, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      "Pope" clearly means that he has a particular role in the Catholic church. Similarly for other examples given. Simply "prophet" is an assertion in the voice of Wikipedia which a majority of people would disagree with. "Islamic prophet" implicitly says that Islam considers him to have that status/role/capability. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 16:30, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • The problem we are having here is that in those cases when it is necessary or even simply better to clarify (this often depends on context and background knowledge of subject matter), UrielAcosta is still systematically removing it based on a literal reading of MOS:PBUH, to the point of edit warring over it, without engaging in substantial discussion.
      An example of where mentioning "prophet" was better because of subject matter context is here, an example of where it was necessary to disambiguate from other Muhammads named in the article here (cf. [1]).
      In my mind, because the problem is an overly literal reading, the solution to this is to update MOS:PBUH and have it explicitly allow "the prophet Muhammad" in cases where it is needed for disambiguation or clarification. My own proposal to simply always allow it (because all relevant RS are in fact using it constantly and casually) was perhaps too ambitious, but simply instating Some1's counterproposal here would already solve a lot of the issues (Some1's proposal, but adjusted to lowercase 'prophet'):

      (The) Holy Prophet in place of, or preceding, "Muhammad" — recommended action is to use just "Muhammad" except when it is the first reference in an article, or the first reference in the lead, in which case it may be rendered as "the Islamic prophet Muhammad" if necessary. In cases where ambiguity or confusion exists, the "prophet Muhammad" or "the prophet" may be used as a variation on "Muhammad".

      Regards, ☿ Apaugasma (talk ) 16:32, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      Re "overly literal reading"—except for the part about continuing to ignore except when it is the first reference in an article, or the first reference in the lead, in which case it may be rendered as "the Islamic prophet Muhammad" if necessary even when it's pointed out to them point-blank. The reason Muhammad gets his own provision in the first place is because of a matter very specific to him: the practice of some people of writing "PBUH" after every use of his name, and referring to him as "the Prophet Muhammad" or even just "the Prophet" on every occasion. There's nothing about the provision that suggests that Muhammad is less deserving than anyone else in history of being introduced in a text in the way that people are very commonly introduced, by the use of context. If anyone's being non-neutral, it's UrielAcosta, for deeming Muhammad not to deserve to be identified in such a manner. Largoplazo (talk) 16:46, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      I agree that they are deliberately ignoring the part of the MOS that they don't seem to agree with. Their he's not Wikipedia's prophet breaks the very policy that they are citing as an excuse to expunge the word from every article. M.Bitton (talk) 16:53, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • The changes en masse by UrielAcosta are unhelpful at best as they needlessly create a lot of work for others. M.Bitton (talk) 16:37, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      I'm in agreement with the responses expressed by @M.Bitton, @Largoplazo, and @Apaugasma. It's evident that there's an issue of overzealous editing on the part of UrielAcosta. As others have noted, even in cases where, for purely practical reasons as MOS allows, it was better to leave a term rather than removing it. I would encourage @UrielAcosta to take a breather and once again go through WP:5P5, if it might provide a newfound sense of direction and clarity. StarkReport (talk) 16:54, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • We had this one at Regency of Algiers also. I am not certain if UrielAcosta realizes just how many people can be named Mohammed in an article that covers 400 years of North African history, but this was righteously reverted by the article's primary author. I urge UrielAcosta to get a grip and find another mission. Elinruby (talk) 05:57, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    This is the place where we refer to the Islamic prophet Mohammed. I believe that before Uriel Acosta came along it possibly said the Prophet Mohammed, This may be slightly better but seems like a really silly thing to spend time on, like arguing about whether Joan of Arc's visions were real. The thing to do is report the claim without endorsing, it, yes? [2] The sharifs were a religious nobility who claimed descent from the Islamic prophet Muhammad, and often members of the Naqib al-ashraf institution of the Ottoman Empire.[405] I spent a LOT of time on this section and made zero claims about Mohammed in wikivoice. I am not real upset about this either way but I consider myself an interested party and I oppose a mandatory naked Mohammed. Please ping me if this escalates. Going on a rampage about the word prophet is bigotry to my mind, just like it would be to insist on a disclaimer in an article about the visions of Joan of Arc or the incarnations of Vishnu.
    This is merely what some people believe or believed at some point, period, end of story, and I submit that it is neither possible nor desirable to explain a religious dynasty whose power stemmed from its claim of descent from the prophet Mohammed without mentioning the prophet Mohammed. If some people feel that we need to specify that he was an Islamic prophet rather than a Hindu or an Buddhist or a Catholic prophet, ok fine, whatever.
    Btw, ctl-f finds 21 instances of "Mohammed" in that article, a few of whom are mentioned more than once, and at least one of whom is the author of a reference. I think a serious count would give use ten or eleven men named Mohammed plus some honorific. Elinruby (talk) 10:23, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I fail to see why uses of the word prophet [Name] should be considered improper or require editing out when talking about a figure (notwithstanding their historicity) identified by a sufficiently significant amount of people as a prophet of their religion, creed, or belief system — especially, if it serves purposes of disambiguation. And I disagree with @North8000′s assessment of a distinct treatment of the epithets pope and prophet, since both are similar religious positions, claiming to form a bridge between the divine and humankind. The position of pope is as limited and debated among Christian creeds as the question of “Who is the real, final, ultimate prophet?” is in various branches of Islam. Konanen (talk) 15:03, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Shooks, I did not intend this to be a reply to @Elinruby, sorry. Konanen (talk) 15:03, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Respectfully, IMO your argument against my point has flaws. The widespread meaning of "Pope" is a particular position in the catholic church. Saying "Pope" in the voice of Wikipedia means that they hold that role in the Catholic church. The claim in the voice of Wikipedia does not go any further than that. An atheist can take it to mean only that. An unattributed statement in the voice of Wikipeda that someone is a prophet is a statement in the voice of Wikipedia goes far beyond just saying that they have a particular role in a a particular religion. Simple attribution of the statement to Islam solves all of that. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 23:35, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    For statements like "Joshua was a prophet who [...]" or "when the prophet Muhammad came to Mecca [...]", if the implication of the statement is 'hey, this is the prophet of God, so better listen to him', then it's obviously religiously non-neutral and problematic. If the implication of the statement is 'this figure is considered a prophet in the religion(s) we are talking about in this context', then it's perfectly fine. Not only perfectly fine, but also often necessary, because the status of these figures as prophets is often an important part of the encyclopedic information we are trying to convey. The current restrictions in MOS:MUHAMMAD often make this difficult or impossible. Readers are intelligent enough to pick out the intended implication, they don't need the current censorship to get that we are not declaring these figures to be actual prophets in wiki-voice, nor are the relevant RS who are all of them (the challenge made here to find an exception still stands) routinely referring to Muhammad as "the prophet" or "the prophet Muhammad". ☿ Apaugasma (talk ) 12:32, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Apaugasma:You made a good point there which I think is that these are often obviously (just) statements by Islam rather than statements by / in the voice of Wikipedia. North8000 (talk) 16:17, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Removing "The Prophet" in this way appears to be agenda driven. I am not a Muslim and I see no issue with the phrase being "The Prophet Muhammed" being used when it is referencing the founder of Islam Elmmapleoakpine (talk) 15:23, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    As noted above, I'm in agreement with inclusion of the word but, used in this way, "prophet" is a common noun and shouldn't be capitalized. Largoplazo (talk) 19:27, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree. "The prophet Mohammed" is ok but "The Prophet Mohammed" runs afoul of MOS:MUHAMMAD specifically and more broadly MOS:HONORIFIC. In fact it would be better to say "the Islamic prophet Mohammed" and that is what the guidance says: except when it is the first reference in an article, or the first reference in the lead, in which case it may be rendered as "the Islamic prophet Muhammad" if necessary. If this were equivalent to "The Pope" it would be phrased just as "The Prophet" when obviously Mohammed doesn't occupy the proper noun of "The Prophet" in English. —DIYeditor (talk) 00:38, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    There is a long-standing dispute over pages [3] and [4].

    The dispute concerns the following statement: ‘There is a consensus among economists that rent control reduces the quality and quantity of rental housing units’.

    The statement was added by Snooganssnoogans on 24 December 2020 at 14:54, without prior discussion on the talk page.[5]

    Several editors have shown opposition and/or raised concerns about the veracity and/or neutrality of such statement and/or the sources provided, as can be seen in the talk pages [6] and [7], evidencing that there is no consensus among editors on the content of the page.

    Several users act as custodians of this page, systematically deleting references to indexed scientific articles, or reverting edits by users contrary to their views (e.g. this scientific reference [8], was deleted here [9]).

    Several users have been targeted and banned by editors who oversee the site, accused of vandalism by those who uphold an statement that was unexpectedly added to the article without previous discussion in the talk page.

    It appears that the sentence lacks the required consensus and does not seem to adhere to a neutral point of view.

    139.47.66.252 (talk) 22:06, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Courtesy links:
    Rotideypoc41352 (talk · contribs) 04:22, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The 2021 NPOVN closure does not appear to reflect any consensus. It explicitly states that the statement in question should be replaced or rephrased, and no such correction has been made or allowed since. 139.47.66.252 (talk) 11:57, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    This is not so much 'a long-standing dispute' as a single IP-hopping editor who periodically shows up to attempt to blank parts of the article and make repetitive arguments and/or personal attacks on the talk pages. Talk:Rent regulation had to be semi protected because of this a few months ago. They have gotten many, many responses on the relevant talk pages, but the WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT continues nonetheless. MrOllie (talk) 12:16, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    PS: This IP is almost certainly Pedrote112 (talk · contribs) evading their block again. MrOllie (talk) 12:54, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Is this yet another attack by this user on anyone who does not think like him/her in order to prevent the article from being reviewed? 139.47.66.252 (talk) 15:17, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't see problems here. This removal seems justified, if it's an individual study it should be added to the body of the article and not to the lede, unless it's super-transformational and has overturned the scientific consensus, which I doubt. Alaexis¿question? 20:54, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    What scientific consensus? There is neither scientific consensus nor consensus among editors. Why do you consider it legitimate to withdraw this scientific article and other articles that have been cited on the talk page?88.12.251.41 (talk) 15:01, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The consensus documented in the cited sources. Pretending that those sources don't exist isn't going to work. Nor will you be able to undermine them by citing minority viewpoints or individual data points. MrOllie (talk) 01:45, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The statement as presented is implicit OR. It implies that the purpose of rent control was to increase the quality and quantity of rental units, and therefore the policy was a failure.
    To provide an example, the average cost of a one bedroom apartment in Toronto, where new buildings are not subject to rent control, is CAD2,513. But many tenants are paying half that or less because of rent control for the same or greater square footage. Not many of them are moving to new units that offer newer stoves and refrigerators. TFD (talk) 02:17, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Snooganssnoogans, I wonder if you could comment on this. TFD (talk) 02:30, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The statement is yours, you added it without prior discussion in the talk page. You are the one that has to gain a consensus that doesn't exist. 2A02:9130:9435:1805:DDDA:5696:E2AD:B4F7 (talk) 12:07, 29 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The statement was added by Snooganssnoogans without any previous discussion in the talk page. 88.12.251.41 (talk) 15:34, 1 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Could someone review this article and this discussion (Talk:Weaponization of antisemitism#Adding POV and POV LEDE tags) for whether or not NPOV violations exist or if the POV tag belongs on the article. Thank you, IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 18:57, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    It's a terrible article, so would really benefit from the engagement of non-involved editors. BobFromBrockley (talk) 15:17, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Just finished an RM on the title, no consensus. Not that terrible imo but I suppose mileage may vary. This has been here since 4 May and it was at the OR noticeboard as well without much reaction so while there is always something to fix, maybe not so much. Selfstudier (talk) 15:33, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree with @Bobfrombrockley, the articles sourcing issue combined with the plethora of other problems discussed on the talk page combined with the RM problems are not inspiring my confidence that this article will (or maybe even can) be modified to resemble a NPOV. FortunateSons (talk) 20:08, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Need some patient people at Jordan Peterson[edit]

    I have just spent a couple of hours I will never get back at this page explaining:

    • What is a revert
    • What is a one-revert restriction on a page
    • What it means to have a personal one-revert restriction
    • What is another editor's talk page comment
    • What is Wikivoice and why we do not use it to say "politically correct"
    • Why we don't randomly name drop politicians in an article about a YouTube misogynist
    • Why this is even more so when the politician in question is the once and likely future premier of Alberta, who is female.
    • Why it really doesn't matter how we as Wikipedia editors think she should feel about the mention
    • Why the alleged billions of times the misogynist Youtuber's videos have been played matters not at all
    • Why his alleged ranking at some download site doesn't matter either
    • What is precedent in a common law legal system

    The following remain to be addressed:

    • use of student newspaper in an evaluation of his research
    • Article variously says he resigned, was no longer on the faculty, was asked to resign or put teaching on hold temporarily due to other project.
    • What is ONUS and who has it
    • Whatever this is: Peterson's work has generated billions of views from all over the world. Meanwhile, Rachel Notley is some minor politician in Canada. How many people outside of Canada knows about her or cares about her? Remove her from the article if you want. Obscure people shouldn't be allowed to parasite on the success of famous people. Trakking (talk) 10:28, 16 May 2024
    • whatever this is also: Some people are trying hard to make this encyclopedic article be much more sensational and provocative than it ought to be. Trakking (talk) 22:33, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

    and much more. I am sure I am forgetting stuff. Did I mention that a lot of the sources seem to fail verification? I have not yet run Wikiblame though. Please send whisky and psychiatrists. The editor mentioned a above is swedish and rather new. The other is @Springee:. Elinruby (talk) 12:23, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @Trakking: Elinruby (talk) 12:24, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah the comment about Notley had me entirely confused. I'm already there but more hands make light work. Simonm223 (talk) 12:46, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Re "an article about a YouTube misogynist" -- in fact it's an article about Jordan Peterson. Re Rachel Notley: the mention has existed in the article since at least May 2017, but I didn't interpret the talk page comments as firmly opposing removal. I won't post there since I know that people can be tbanned for doing so. Peter Gulutzan (talk) 14:26, 16 May 2024
    Yes. that is the YouTube misogynist in question. Elinruby (talk) 19:46, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Not sure we should be sending additional psychological professionals, seeing what carnage has been wrought by just one of them. 🤔 jp×g🗯️ 08:39, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I mean the College of Psychologists of Ontario are deeply embarrassed by him. Simonm223 (talk) 12:24, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    update:Various shiny objects have distracted me from this. Possibly the one-revert question has been addressed; I at least have had an answer that satisfied *my* questions about this for now. I do not know if the other editors on the talk page agree. I remain preoccupied and busy RL. Some of those editors have said that they don't see why mentioning Notley is a PoV problem, but on the other hand they do not object to the mention being removed. Removing it would resolve that matter in my eyes. If that has not happened I may do that sometime soon. As far as I know the rest of this remains unaddressed. Elinruby (talk) 10:33, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Elinruby: You really ought keep your (potentially defamatory) personal opinions about BLPs to yourself. "Misogyny" and "misogynist" appear only twice in the article currently and not in a way that would lend to them being listed in the lead along with "psychologist, author, and media commentator". I daresay maybe you ought not edit articles you have such strong opinions on if you feel compelled to use the slurs when discussing the person. This is no reflection on my personal opinion of Jordan Peterson. I don't like misogyny or misogynists, and I don't know much about Peterson other than that it is definitely not someone I would take advice from. I just think you are pushing the limits of WP:BLP and might be edging into having your comments refactored:
    • Do not label people with contentious labels, loaded language, or terms that lack precision, unless a person is commonly described that way in reliable sources. Instead use clear, direct language and let facts alone do the talking.
    • Remove immediately any contentious material about a living person that: 2. is an original interpretation or analysis of a source, or a synthesis of sources
    • WP:LIBEL
    —DIYeditor (talk) 00:54, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @DIYeditor: can you restate that please? I think I must be misunderstanding you. Elinruby (talk) 04:04, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    At the least it looks biased to me to be bad-mouthing a living person beyond what the article describes the person as being. Maybe it's true (or not), but to me "misogynist" is a strong and potentially defamatory label to use, and it doesn't seem to be widely applied to him from what his article says. Is it necessary, useful and appropriate to express distaste for the subjects of articles? —DIYeditor (talk) 08:28, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I think the issue here is that you have posted a legal threat and a personal attack from what his article says. You do understand that I posted here because I was questioning the article's neutrality? It does indeed say, based on the subject's YouTube posts and some hagiography in student newspapers, that he is essentially the second coming of Carl Jung, to the point of including the Carl Jung navbar in the article. I thought the above was a decent start on the article's problems, but we can discuss misogyny if people want. I would have thought that this was obvious from the use of the word on RS, the description of women in his own voice as "witches" and forces of chaos, and his contention that they are responsible for murders by incels, a situation to be remedied by what he calls "mandatory monogamy." I will be happy to provide sources for these statements, and yes, I agree, actually, that they are not in the article. Or weren't the last time I looked.Elinruby (talk) 01:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Actually, here, let me by all means introduce some sources into this conversation. Sources include but are not limited to:
    • Grant Maxwell (February 20, 2018). "Why Are So Many Young Men Drawn to Jordan Peterson's Intellectual Misogyny?". American Philosophical Association.
    • Nellie Bowles (May 18, 2018). "Jordan Peterson, Custodian of the Patriarchy: He says there's a crisis in masculinity. Why won't women — all these wives and witches — just behave?". New York Times. "He was angry at God because women were rejecting him," Mr. Peterson says of the Toronto killer. "The cure for that is enforced monogamy. That's actually why monogamy emerges. Mr. Peterson does not pause when he says this. Enforced monogamy is, to him, simply a rational solution. Otherwise women will all only go for the most high-status men, he explains, and that couldn't make either gender happy in the end.
    • Burgis, Ben; Bongard Hamilton, Conrad; McManus, Matthew; Trejo, Marion (2020). Myth and Mayhem: A Leftist Critique of Jordan Peterson. John Hunt Publishing. ISBN 1789045541. His willingness to say misogynistic and transphobic things, and support patriarchal institutions is damning
    • Nesbitt-Larking, Paul (July 2022). "Constructing narratives of masculinity: Online followers of Jordan B. Peterson". Psychology of Men & Masculinities. 23 (3): 309–320.
    • Hadley Freeman (23 May 2018). "Jordan Peterson may be a 'public intellectual', but his latest theory isn't very clever: The academic believes violent men can be cured by the love of a good woman through enforced monogamy. And he can't understand why people are laughing at him?". The Guardian. Peterson felt compelled to blog about it, explaining in his usual "Look, you may not like it, but I'm just stating the scientific truth, guys" tone, that he wasn't advocating the "arbitrary dealing out of damsels to incels", just that scientific facts show that "socially enforced monogamous conventions decrease male violence". How any of this explains his theory that feminine is chaos and masculine is order was left unexplored
    • Bethan Iley. "From Andrew Tate to Jordan Peterson, a phoney zero-sum-game argument sits at the heart of anti-feminist backlash". The Conversattion UK. Take Peterson's conceptualisation of order and chaos as reflecting masculinity and femininity...to raise these issues as an argument against more freedom for women is to feed the false idea that men and women are battling for power
    • Revesz, Rachael (21 January 2018). "Misogynistic abuse against Cathy Newman is a symbol of the backlash against the MeToo movement: When white men feel they are losing power, any level of nastiness is possible – and much power has been ceded of late". The Independent. No matter what she would have asked, a woman daring to question his expertise was bound to have ramifications. Especially in 2018.
    • SANNEH, KELEFA (March 5, 2018). "SORT YOURSELF OUT, BUCKO". Vol. 94, no. 3. New Yorker. ISSN 0028-792X. When he does battle as a culture warrior, especially on television, Peterson sometimes assumes the role of a strident anti-feminist, intent on ending the oppression of males by destroying the myth of male oppression. (He once referred to his critics as "rabid harpies.")
    • Charlotte Lydia Riley, ed. (20 November 2020). "Jordan Peterson, the alt-right and neo-fascism". The free speech wars. doi:10.7765/9781526152558.00027. ISBN 9781526152558. women of colour calling out racism are routinely 'shut down' for 'incivility'. A guide to free speech politics in the age of Peterson, this chapter shows how inescapably raced, classed and gendered the exclusionary practice of 'free speech' really is, and what this tells us about liberalism's inadequacy in responding to neo-fascism.
    • Southey, Tabatha (November 17, 2017). "Is Jordan Peterson the stupid man's smart person? Tabatha Southey delves into University of Toronto professor Jordan Peterson's work and finds his secret sauce—and what makes his work unnerving". Maclean's. What he's telling you is that certain people—most of them women and minorities—are trying to destroy not only our freedom to spite nonbinary university students for kicks, but all of Western civilization and the idea of objective truth itself. He's telling you that when someone tells you racism is still a problem and that something should be done about it, they are, at best, a dupe and, at worst, part of a Marxist conspiracy to destroy your way of life. Peterson says he only thinks of it as a "non-violent war." But when you insist the stakes are that high, the opposition that pernicious, who's to say where the chips will fall?
    • Annabelle Dufourcq; Annemie Halsema; Katrine Smiet; Karen Vintges, eds. (2024). "Power, Sex, and Myth: Beauvoir, Paglia, and Peterson". Purple Brains: Feminisms at the Limits of Philosophy. Radboud University Press. p. 67. doi:10.54195/HSOV8373. ISBN 978 94 9329 639 8. The known stands for order, form, and culture, symbolically linked to the masculine. The unknown is chaos, substance, and nature, symbolically associated with the feminine. Chaos is origin, source, mother, matter, and order must restrain and shape that chaos.
    • Mannella, Francesco (2020). "General Insights From: "The Intellectual Dark-Web": A Case Study of Jordan Peterson and Ben Shapiro". Intersect: The Stanford Journal of Science, Technology, and Society. 14 (3). Stanford University. they can be watched for hours espousing conservative doctrine to their predominantly male, adolescent audience in hopes of maintaining the status quo, and eschewing activism (Weiss & Winter, 2018). There are quite a number of figures in this group; however, this paper will be focusing primarily on the two most notable members: Jordan Peterson and Ben Shapiro. Elinruby (talk) 01:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Not sure where I think the issue here is that you have posted a legal threat and a personal attack came from but what you've listed looks like good groundwork for inclusion in the article. —DIYeditor (talk) 05:02, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I am not particularly interested in pursuing the matter, but "maybe you ought not edit articles you have such strong opinions on if you feel compelled to use the slurs" does assume I said this with no basis, and you did say I was committing libel. But fine; apparently you now think otherwise. Glad to hear it, and glad we got that cleared up. I am still preoccupied with a different problem, but my primary concern, above and beyond all this background, is that the article devoted a great deal of real estate to quoting his very fringe statements about Bill C-16 and most likely still does Elinruby (talk) 07:59, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    WP:LABEL is quite clear that “misogynist” is a value-laden label to be avoided unless widely used by reliable sources. If the source evidence is insufficient to state it in wikivoice in a BLP, then it should be avoided on Talk too, per WP:BLPTALK. A personal attack against the subject of the article, even if you think it is justified, is WP:BATTLEGROUND noise that doesn’t help make content decisions. Barnards.tar.gz (talk) 08:33, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Ok, apparently you have not noticed the dozen sources above. The article still extensively quotes the subject making extremely hyperbolic statements, in addition to his advocacy of involuntary sexual servitude for women. But by all means, let's debate whether it is polite to include some secondary sources in the article that say so. Elinruby (talk) 09:09, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Do those reliable sources widely state, in their own voice, that the subject is a misogynist? Barnards.tar.gz (talk) 09:11, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    feel free to click handily provided links. I would start with the New York Times. They are also afaict all extremely RS, certainly better in any event that the student newspapers currently in the article. More sources exist to say that the subject's claims about Canadian constitutional law are to put it politely only tenously related to fact, which is actually the primary concern. The stuff about women is opinion, no matter how alarming it is that somebody with his reach has been saying this stuff. Elinruby (talk) 09:24, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I checked a couple, and have now checked the NYT source too. It doesn’t call him a misogynist. Barnards.tar.gz (talk) 09:31, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Only three of those sources explicitly mention the term misogyny—one is some random blog, another is a polemic book called ”A leftist critique,” and the third does not even apply the term to Jordan Peterson specifically; it just simply states that ”well, there’s misogyny on the internet.” This post is a clear example of WP:OR and WP:BATTLEGROUND. Trakking (talk) 09:30, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    (ec) I see this escalated while I was typing. That "random blog" has an editorial policy and a submissions process and is published by a professional organization. And yeah, the NYT times only quotes him saying that the solution to a guy running over random pedestrians is "mandatory monogamy" for women with men who might do such things. Speaking of polemic. The book is a published source that beats a student newspaper any day, and the source you are dismissing as "there's misogyny on the internet" has his name in the title, so.... not so much. But I am always happy to hear from an editor who thinks that a former provincial premier is somehow "parasiting" the subject by being mentioned in his Wikipedia article. Have you removed that mention yet, Trakking? Surely if I want it gone and you think it's parasitic, a meeting of the minds is possible somewhere? But Macleans, the Guardian and the other sources all talk about hateful statements about women and pretty much everyone who is not an incel white male, so... OR is a pretty ridiculous dismissal, given that all of these sources are better than 90% of what's in the article now, ie mostly YouTube and student newspapers. But without getting into the article's current content, if it's reliably sourced, it ain't OR. As opposed for example to quoting the subject on what his expertise is, even though he doesn't seem to be the lead author of many of those articles at all. So how about we talk about what he says about the law, hmm? Elinruby (talk) 10:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Trying to log in but keep kicking to other places 2600:100A:B03C:8E18:0:34:799D:E901 (talk) 11:38, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Misandry neutrality[edit]

    A debate about the Misandry article is ongoing at Wikipedia:No original research/Noticeboard. I welcome as many people as possible to chime in about how the article should be phrased as possible. Thank you. ImmersiveOne (talk) 20:41, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    This may count as vandalism, but this IP user has been adding things like this onto this article. BOZ (talk) 22:07, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    See [10]. I reverted a similar edit a few days ago. The issue I see is do we describe the Irgun in articles the way their article does or does Wikipedia call then terrorists. Doug Weller talk 17:20, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    See King David Hotel bombing which is what the Irgun is notorious for, obviously terrorism, and the attack is described in the lead as a "terrorist attack". In the section Terrorism, it says "The bombing has been discussed in literature about the practice and history of terrorism. It has been called one of the most lethal terrorist attacks of the 20th century." When a preponderance of sources are all unequivocal about calling it terrorism, it's terrorism.
    I see an editor objected on the grounds that we don't do that for Hamas but there is no unanimity of sourcing for that (the BBC being one notable example of a refusal to call them that). Selfstudier (talk) 17:41, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The way Irgun describes them is, imo, fine. This was (to my knowledge) way before proscription was a thing, so it's probably the best we're going to get if we're never going to be able to say "described by A, B, and C as a terrorist org". Extending that, however, to Ze'ev Jabotinsky is a bit weird to me. Although al-Qaeda's designation is mentioned on Osama Bin Laden. Yr Enw (talk) 18:26, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The same editor who adds mentions of terrorism to Irgun-related articles also removes mentions of terrorism related to Palestinian factions [11]. However, when reverted, they label the revert as "vandalism" [12]. This could indicate a possible conduct issue. ABHammad (talk) 07:55, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I have a similar view to Yr Enw in cases like this. Also, I'm a fan of aligning contentious labels to the labeling used in main articles about the thing being given a contentious label in another article. And if you are going to avoid the use of Wiki-voice via words like "proscribed", it seems better to say who is doing the proscribing. I'm not a big fan of the fuzzy wording "unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject" in WP:TERRORIST as a decision procedure because, in practice, editors can't/don't do enough sampling. Not using contentious labels in wiki-voice or without some kind of attribution is a simple solution. Sean.hoyland (talk) 08:29, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    not using contentious labels in wikivoice or without some kind of attribution is a simple solution”. This is my preferred interpretation of MOS:TERRORIST, and imo the only possibly impartial way of dealing with terrorist designations. But the guidance is, as you note, quite reliant on editors making editorial judgements. It’s unlikely to get resolved anytime soon either, as when I tried to get consensus on the VP for a more explicit guideline that would align with this, it wasn’t very forthcoming. Yr Enw (talk) 10:34, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    In practice, in Wikipedia, for understandable reasons, editorial judgement can be difficult to distinguish from convenience sampling. Sean.hoyland (talk) 12:53, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Perhaps but the rule as it stands (I don't agree with it either but there it is) says that if there is a preponderance of sourcing, we go by that. If there is alleged insufficient sampling, editors will have to work out a consensus on that, same as anything else. Selfstudier (talk) 12:58, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    This is true. I think we have made some progress towards neutrality though. When people in my family would tell stories about their time in Palestine in 1947-48, any mention of Irgun might be accompanied by slightly confusing statements like 'scum of the Balkans'. Of course, this was back in the days when making sweeping and/or offensive and/or inaccurate statements about 'foreigners' was fine. Sean.hoyland (talk) 14:59, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Wasn't Irgun self-described as terrorists? They were formed as "restraint breakers" specifically to carry out unprovoked violent attacks against Palestinians and British as part of a campaign of political violence. They promoted terrorism, were self-described terrorists. They publicly celebrated their terrorist identity. They had a goal and their chosen path was the path of violent unconstrained terrorism, and they were proud advocates of this. Fanccr (talk) 03:46, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Fanccr, your comment is inconsistent with the WP:ARBECR rule. A quick look at your contributions suggests that you might need to (re)read that and the information on your talk page. If you have sourcing that supports the "self-described terrorists" statement, you can submit it with an edit request at the Irgun article's talk page using WP:EDITXY as a guide. Even if true, I would still favor attributing the label to them rather than using wiki-voice. Sean.hoyland (talk) 04:46, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, same. The problem with their suggestion is that it assumes readers will understand what the Irgun itself meant by the term, which I don’t think they will. Yr Enw (talk) 07:56, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree with @Yr Enw here. In an article about a different topic, appending a contentious qualifier like terrorist can be done only if that's what RS do. The onus is on the editor who adds this. Alaexis¿question? 06:47, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Including death parameters in the infobox for BLPs[edit]

    I tried removing the "death date" and "death place" parameters from the infoboxes on BLPs (e.g. [13], [14], [15], [16], [17], [18], [19], [20]), but the removals have been reverted. The vast majority of BLPs do not include such parameters. The infobox for the Joe Biden article, to cite a high-profile example, does not include parameters for death. Neither does the Taylor Swift article, to cite another high-profile example. Why should some BLPs include death parameters and others not? Seems morbid and downright prejudicial. Ieonine (talk) 23:34, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    The unused parameters aren't seen by the reader..... we consider this a cosmetic edit pls review WP:COSMETICBOT. Moxy🍁 23:41, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    But they are seen by the editors, and the implication is shady. Ieonine (talk) 23:50, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Every subject of a BLP will die someday. I would argue that there is no good reason to remove empty death parameters from articles that have them or to add empty death parameters to articles that don't. – Muboshgu (talk) 23:43, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Then why isn't there an across-the-board policy addressing this? To cite some more high-profile examples, look at the infoboxes for Donald Trump, Kim Kardashian, Kanye West, Madonna. Nowhere does it list "death date" or "death place". So why should some BLP infoboxes include death parameters and others not include death parameters? There's no equality in that. Ieonine (talk) 23:47, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    What matters is that for all of these BLPs, the death fields are empty and don't show in the page. – Muboshgu (talk) 23:55, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Again, this is prejudicial. Who decides which BLPs should have death fields and which shouldn't? Ieonine (talk) 23:59, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    They are irrelevant if they are not seen. I suggest you find something productive to do. Moxy🍁 00:02, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    In what way are they “prejudicial”? Who exactly is harmed by the fact that some BLP infoboxes have this (empty and hidden) parameter while others do not? And what is that harm? Blueboar (talk) 00:38, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    It's not really hidden. Anyone who clicks the edit button can see it. If there was a BLP page about me that had a "death date" field I'd take offense. The harm is implication of imminent death. To insist certain BLPs must contain this stigmatic mark while other BLPs get off scot-free, is unbalanced, unfair, and prejudicial; a double standard. Does this answer your question? Because none of you have answered mine: Why are some BLPs exempt from containing this awful text and others aren't? Ieonine (talk) 05:20, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Meh… having a field for date of death that is empty does not imply an imminent death… just an eventual one. We will all die at some point (hopefully a long time from now). No need to change. Blueboar (talk) 13:30, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    If it ain't broke, don't fix it Cambalachero (talk) 01:54, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    These unused parameters are appropriate and will be useful for reference when the person does die. The infoboxes are not only for living persons AFAIK, but a variety that might be used for living or dead people. —DIYeditor (talk) 00:58, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Article title should be renamed Hokkaido Colonization Commission[edit]

    The title of Hokkaidō Development Commission should be renamed to Hokkaido Colonization Commission. The National Archives of Japan [21] officially refers to it as the "Colonization Commission," so that should be the title instead of "Hokkaidō Development Commission." While some sources may use the latter, giving more weight to the National Archives' designation aligns better with Wikipedia's rules, avoiding WP:UNDUE emphasis on other sources. the lede sentence "The Hokkaidō Development Commission (開拓使, Kaitakushi), sometimes referred to as Hokkaidō Colonization Office or simply Kaitakushi, was a government agency in early Meiji Japan." would also need to be rewritten because it is incorrect to say that the commission is sometimes referred to as Hokkaido Colonization Office when it was the official name. talk page: [22]

    • Actually, our rules DON’T favor “official names” over the names used in sources. See: WP:COMMONNAME. Blueboar (talk) 13:40, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    that's fair enough, but guidelines also state, "When there is no single, obvious name that is demonstrably the most frequently used for the topic by these sources, editors should reach a consensus as to which title is best by considering these criteria directly." there are also plenty of other sources that use Colonization Commission. consensus needs to be reached as to which title is best for the article.(see talk) LilAhok (talk) 20:13, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I recently came across these two newly created articles and they are both deeply problematic and subject to what look like intense back and forth editing. Do non-involved editors think NPOV versions could be made from either of them? BobFromBrockley (talk) 18:25, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Dismal articles, the pair of them. Might do something with them if merged into one article...maybe. Selfstudier (talk) 18:30, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I think the "Animal" word should be dropped from both article titles, since apart from animals there's also "cavemen", "beasts", "morons", "vampires", "bacteria", "cancer", "germ".
    I haven't checked sources much, but the sentence At times, denigrators can allow that they are human: Yonathan Netanyahu considered them cavemen while the Likud MP Oren Hazan allows that Palestinians are human, but only in so far as they are morons. appears to fail WP:NPOV, as the cited quotes (as provided in the footnotes) don't appear to say anything about allowing to be considered humans. NicolausPrime (talk) 18:54, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Selfeditor, I'm afraid that just as in the real world conflict a two-articles solution is more realistic than a one-article solution... Vegan416 (talk) 19:31, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Selfeditor? K, doesn't sound so bad. Anyway its not the solution that's the problem, its the occupation. Selfstudier (talk) 19:34, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    NOTFORUM. What I mean is that the number of arguments and back and forth editing would likely be much higher in one article than in two articles. Vegan416 (talk) 19:39, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I think a theoretical NPOV version is possible, but I agree that a merger might be more promising. The primary issue will likely be due weight and FALSEBALANCE, and I don’t envy whoever will have to adress the inevitable discussions that will emerge. FortunateSons (talk) 19:42, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Are animal stereotypes singularly notable in partisan discourse in the I/P debate, beyond the usual dehumanization inherent in similar debates? (Not like you have to go far to find someone calling someone similar in the US.) If the answer is no, the articles shouldn't exist at all, and having them around is just asking for COATRACK and battleground issues. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 19:48, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    That’s a good question. I’m honestly not sure, and also don’t know how we would measure that, particularly considering the linguistic and cultural complexity involved. Subjectively, I would say probably yes, but that’s worth very little. FortunateSons (talk) 19:53, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs Animal stereotypes are very common, certainly with regard to caricatures of Palestinians, and are sufficiently impressive to have formed part of the evidence presented by South Africa (pp.59ff.) in its recent case against Israel at the International Court of Justice. The point is, at least for that article, they are all documented by core figures in the Israeli state, and not simply off-the-cuff remarks by the usual lunatic or fanatical fringe. I'll ignore the other article, which is unretrievably bad, and am surprised that the two, one written with stringent method, the other without any semblance of the same, could be viewed interchangeably as 'dismal'. 'Animal', lastly, refers to the 'animal kingdom', the realm of existing organic beings, as opposed to the plant kingdom. I thought everyone knew that, or has the kindergarten curriculm changed its views about this in the last half century?Nishidani (talk) 21:10, 21 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]
    I don't see the complaint as being a useful bellwether. It's not just about calling Palestinians animals, that specific part is a very small section of a very, very long complaint, and it's specifically about the language Israel's leadership is using in the context of whether they're calling for genocide. That doesn't equal "we need to have an article about all the bad things one side in a conflict is calling the other". If that were the benchmark, you could write that sort of article about literally any conflict on earth. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 21:20, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Articles are dictated by many things. In my case, I wrote that when, over a decade, my personal file on such theriomorphic imagery (this is an important topic in scholarship) grew to such a length I wrote it up, for my own curiosity. On October 7th a veritable tsunami of zoomorphic vituperation hit the front pages, with many articles noting this upsurge in animal stereotypes. Some time after that an editor tried to write that article, and it was up for AfD, understandably so since it was poorly written. So I asked the deleters for a few days, and produced more or less the article we have, out of those old research files. For students of antisemitic history there is a substantial scholarly literature on the use of animal stereotypes for the Jews by their historic persecutors, most recently the erudite Jay Geller's,Bestiarium Judaicum: Unnatural Histories of the Jews, to name but one. So, to my mind, the article's justification is that, despite frequently (as a student of these things) noting for well over a decade the frequency of zoomorphic dismissals of Palestinians, even those outraged by the attacks on Palestinians as 'animals' appear to have scant familiarity with the history of such terminological usage. If wikipedia, drawing on scholarship, can set some order, context and detail into this glossed over but well attested manner of speaking, it is doing its encyclopedic job. I couldn't care a fuck about the politics, except that most discourse in this area reflects a strong desire to control narratives, usually by excluding important things from the record. I do care about seeing that the vast literature on antisemitic stereotypes generated these last decades polemically against the Muslim world does not sweep from sight the substantial documentation, systematically ignored until recently, on Israeli stereotypes about Palestinians.Nishidani (talk) 21:40, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The starting point is whether a subject is notable, hence why I asked my original question. I'm not seeing anything in either article at first blush that suggests they are anything more than cobbled-together coatracks with news articles and books saying "this person said bad thing about that group" with the obvious purpose of grinding axes. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 21:57, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    A subject is notable when secondary sources - scholarly books and articles in particular-cite the topic frequently or deal with it in more than en passant length, as do Bar-Tal and Teichman (2005), Bruneau and Kteily (2017), Chomsky (1883), Gerteiny (2007), Peteet (2005) and Pugliese (2020). Then we have a large number of articles that report instances of the phenomenon. The new topic of the programmatic raping of Israeli women putatively organized by Hamas on Oct 7 is 'cobbled together' from claims and anecdotes that emerged in those first few days. There is so far, no forensic study and overview of those claims available (the one attempt to do so in the NYTs was pulled to pieces almost immediately), unlike the case with these two articles. No one is questioning the notability of the latter as a topic - the only dispute is whether it is an allegation or a fact. 'Cobble together' is a wholly inappropriate term of dismissal, implying that a motif observed is a subjective construction, not present in the objective field described. The pattern, per secondary sources, zoomorphic denigration, is confirmed by the scholarly analyses of these discursive traits characteristic of both Israeli and Palestinian speech. In this sense, the articles are perfectly consonant with normative work on wikipedia. Nishidani (talk) 07:42, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs, "If that were the benchmark, you could write that sort of article about literally any conflict on earth". Why not? By all means, anyone is invited to write a similar article about any international conflict on earth. Provided of course that they can find enough material about it in reliable sources. In the case of the two articles under discussion here, there seems to be a deluge of such sources. I'm not so sure if this is true about all other conflicts, but I didn't really check. But anyway if wikipedia has many articles about individual race horses and many articles about the diplomatic relations of each pair of countries in the world (such as Barbados–Suriname relations) than why not have many articles about the particular kinds of dehumanization that exist in each international conflict in the world? Vegan416 (talk) 06:30, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    It's only my personal opinion but when I say "dismal", I am not referring to the quality of the articles but to the subject matter itself. Selfstudier (talk) 21:40, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    All history is dismal in that sense, as noted historians have said on numerous occasions. I have to grit my teeth every day just to force myself to maintain some contact with contemporary events by reading newspapers. One recompense for being dead is that, despite no longer having a cup of tea and a fag of a morning, the molecular combination that conjures up a sense of duty to keep oneself informed of the world, will have decomposed, extinguishing the material basis for that burdomsome faculty, and that thought gives me a sense of relief.Nishidani (talk) 21:46, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Selfstudier (or Selfeditor), since when do we propose to censor articles just because their subject matter is dismal? See Wikipedia:UNCENSORED Vegan416 (talk) 06:19, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    That's my opinion, whether other editors agree with it remains to be seen. If it were down to me, I would merge and simplify but there is at least one editor querying whether these articles even deserve to exist. Selfstudier (talk) 09:34, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    (could-be-perceived-as) Racist content[edit]

    This may be the wrong place to ask, but can someone please look at Biophilia hypothesis and more specifically Indigenous Perspectives on the Human-Nature Connection? It is some weird noble savage-type (could-be-perceived-as) racism.

    People did not live in balance with nature, balance was imposed upon them by nature. "Indigenous" people were and are human, with all the same flaws. They overhunted certain species into near-extinction and were just as familiar with the concept of greed as we are. Romanticizing them as noble savages is not just incorrect; it (could-be-perceived-as) racist.

    The noble savage (Do we not have an air quotes template?) lives in peace only with those species that have never been vulnerable to mankind's population growth. Polygnotus (talk) 23:21, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    If the cited sources don't use the term "biophilia", then that section is probably WP:OR. I haven't managed to check this yet as most of the sources are paywalled.
    I would wait before calling it racist. I suspect that this section was just written to promote indigenous perspectives, not to romanticize them in the way the concept of noble savage did. NicolausPrime (talk) 00:30, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Good point, thank you! I will call it "could-be-perceived-as racist" instead. But it is entirely possible to do could-be-perceived-as racist stuff with great intentions. Polygnotus (talk) 00:35, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The overhunting of large animals in North America (which I'm assuming you're referencing) is actually disputed! There's growing evidence it was due to climate change instead. See: https://www.science.org/content/article/what-killed-great-beasts-north-america Sock-the-guy (talk) 19:07, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    That, while interesting, was not what I was talking about. Polygnotus (talk) 19:22, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    If there was a way to "promote" the beliefs of indigenous people, that section reads like that. It's sorta starting at the wrong place, and should likely introduce the reasons why such groups had to live in harmony with nature, and then move on to why their beliefs can center around that. Masem (t) 19:31, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The racism angle is a distraction: if something is racist it must be removed. Unless we are racists, we must agree with you.
    This article is about a theory and every claim in it should be presented that way. Furthermore, sources should always be about the theory. It's not our role to find sources to support or debunk the theory. If the proponents say noble savages are biophilic, the article should report that. If they don't, it shouldn't. If sources say the theory is racist, the article should report it. If they don't, it shouldn't.
    It shouldn't be difficult to summarize the literature, explain its degree of acceptance, and present opposition and its support, without getting into arguments about racism.
    TFD (talk) 03:51, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Mermaids-Section on GIDS[edit]

    Article: Mermaids (charity) Putting this here possibly too early but I'd rather that then let this descend into squabbling. There's been some back-and-forth on this section and I'd like it to see a more broad audience, especially because I have little experience with wiki policy in general. I don't see how phrases like 'dealings with' and 'lobbying' are neutral especially when sourced from an opinion piece and book. The source I found also disputed what was written in the paragraph, so I'm unsure that stating these sentences as fact is even the right way to go about it. Sock-the-guy (talk) 16:32, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    The "book" is a glowingly-reviewed, award-winning publication by a well-respected investigative journalist specifically about what went wrong at GIDS. This is a high quality secondary source. The quote the text is:
    But demands for change grew more vociferous from the mid 2000s. Along with Mermaids, the Gender Identity Research and Education Society - GIRES - lobbied hard for GIDS to lower the age at which they'd consider treating children with puberty blockers.
    This is reflected accurately in the article. I think you were premature in bringing this barely-discussed content dispute to NPOV. Void if removed (talk) 11:28, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Unsure how being overly cautious in getting more eyes and input on a topic is a bad thing, or as you said on the talk page, not assuming good faith. I thought it would be helpful to get the opinions of people who don't almost entirely edit only British trans-related topics as they might be better at discussing what a neutral point of view is.
    Anyone can write a book, or be an 'investigative journalist.' From my understanding, that's not what makes a source reliable or unbiased. The author has a clear POV from her other writings and social media that should be considered. Using this book is just repeating the opinion of a person, not citing a reliable source. Sock-the-guy (talk) 16:56, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The book is not an opinion piece. If we are not allowed to use the work of investigative journalists, we would not be allowed to use any news publication as a source. Sweet6970 (talk) 11:48, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    We don't use the 'investigative journalism' from PragerU either Sock-the-guy (talk) 15:43, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Investigative journalism is a primary source. It requires secondary sources to establish weight. If it is ignored, then the article should ignore it. If it is reported, then only what is reported has weight for inclusion. TFD (talk) 03:57, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I don’t see how this makes sense. Reputable newspapers are treated as suitable sources for facts. We don’t need a secondary source to report on a newspaper report before we can use a newspaper report as a source. And the book itself is so significant that it has its own article: [23] And the comparison with PragerU does not make sense. Sweet6970 (talk) 16:37, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The book is the definitive factual account of the collapse of GIDS. It is not opinion. It is not 'PragerU'. It is a meticulous, fair, balanced, significant, and very well regarded secondary source. Barnes' original Newsnight investigation prompted the NHS service review that resulted in its closure, so kind of the exact opposite of "ignored" .
    The source has been brought here because apparently it is not neutral. Here's what reviews say:
    The Guardian:
    A journalist at the BBC’s Newsnight, Barnes has based her account on more than 100 hours of interviews with Gids’ clinicians, former patients, and other experts, many of whom are quoted by name. It comes with 59 pages of notes, plentiful well-scrutinised statistics, and it is scrupulous and fair-minded. Several of her interviewees say they are happy either with the treatment they received at Gids, or with its practices – and she, in turn, is content to let them speak. Such a book cannot easily be dismissed. To do so, a person would not only have to be wilfully ignorant, they would also – to use the popular language of the day – need to be appallingly unkind.
    Times Literary Supplement
    Hannah Barnes’s scrupulous research is a painful, important reminder
    Financial Times
    A book about the Tavistock could easily have been a howl of outrage. But Hannah Barnes has written a meticulously researched, sensitive and cautionary chronicle.
    The Times (Book of the Week)
    Her account is sober, rhetoric-free and meticulously researched
    Void if removed (talk) 19:31, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Ah yes the notoriously neutral and balanced UK press that never does anything transphobic thought the book was "scrupulous and fair minded." That's not the glowing set of endorsements you seem to think it is. Simonm223 (talk) 12:26, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Making unevidenced allegations against the entire UK press is not a serious argument. The Guardian, the Financial Times, and the Times all have green ticks at WP:RSP. And these 3 newspapers have different political positions. Sweet6970 (talk) 22:58, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    There is some misunderstanding of our use of news sources above. A re-read of WP:Primary might enlighten some of you. Most 'news' articles on events that are current (to the writing) are primary sources, not because they are in newspapers, TV, etc, but because they deal with ongoing events at the time of writing, relying on re-published primary accounts with little rigourous analysis, interpretation or other marks of good secondary sourcing. Investigative journalism (when done properly), even when dealing with current/recent events, most often tips over into secondary sourcing WP:SECONDARY because they often contain analysis, evaluation, interpretation, or synthesis from primary sources. A book, written significantly after the event, written by an investigative journalist who collects, evaluates, interpretes from primary accounts. Interviews, primary source material etc, is almost always going to be a reliable secondary source as per the criteria our guidelines and polices describe. The only reason it would be unsuitable is if the author's reputation was unsound or they were unqualified. That doesnt appear to be the case here. "Investigative journalism is a primary source" is not only both wildly incorrect per our policies and guidelines, but also the almost exact opposite of the reality outside of tabloid journalism. Only in death does duty end (talk) 12:57, 29 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Lacking Balance[edit]

    Several editors have engaged in tactics to modify the page of Michael Shellenberger in a biased direction with intent to diminish his accomplishments. My own work has not been to cheerlead. I have simply asked for the Times Environmentalist of the Year Award to be recognized as such. I have notified several editors because they have coordinated together on the talk page. M.boli has given too little weight to the award, stating that what the times articles writers liked about Michael Shellenberger and Nordhaus is more important than acknowledging it as an award. NewsAndEventsGuy, M.boli, and Dumuzid have repeatedly taken down my edits. Dumuzid further gives the award too little weight, insisting it was not an award, justifying such with a citation from the Times article trying to claim it was a special report and not an award. LuckyLouie cited a paragraph from Shellenbergers' wikipedia article to prove the article these editors are working on is not biased. The quote is irrelevent as it ignores all the slanted portions throughout the article. NewsAndEventsGuy and Valjean have accused me of edit warring for pointing out these biases.  Shellenberger won an award and however editors on wikipedia may feel about him, giving this matter due weight, staying neutral, and not missing the point are the correct things to do. Michael Shellenberger (Talk) Brahman12 (talk) 17:56, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I haven't seen anything to indicate several editors have been coordinating to bias the article. But if you have evidence, it sounds like something you should report to WP:AN/I.
    - LuckyLouie (talk) 18:39, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    LuckyLouie, you haven't addressed the points made by MysticMagpie on the talk page nor has any of the other editors addressed the points made. Brahman12 (talk) 16:46, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    "Regarding the Times Environmentalist of the Year Award. There is no such award." seems to be a direct refutation of part of the claim. Slatersteven (talk) 16:52, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    you haven't addressed the points made by MysticMagpie nor has any of the other editors addressed the points made. They are addressed directly on the Talk page by another editor, Zenomonoz: "We don't use dictionary definitions to label things "award". That is WP:SYNTH. Time does not call it an award, so WP:STICKTOSOURCE". And I have to agree with him, your refusal to get the point is getting WP:TENDENTIOUS. See WP:DROPTHESTICK. - LuckyLouie (talk) 17:12, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The burden of proof is on you to demonstrate that it is not an award. You have not proven such. Brahman12 (talk) 18:37, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Brahman12, the burden of proof is on anyone who wants to add or restore material. See WP:BURDEN, which is part of our Verifiability policy. In short, if you want to claim that Michael Shellenberger won a "Times Hero of the Environment Award", then you need to find a source that directly and explicitly says that. The Time source that you added here does not do that. Woodroar (talk) 21:02, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The section in Shellenbergers article that should have the times award is 'awards and recognition' and the editors on the talk page won't acknowledge the award he won there. You're using the rules on Wikipedia to enforce Orwellian doublespeak. Brahman12 (talk) 02:16, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Hey, thanks for the notification. And accusing others of "Orwellian doublespeak" when your stated is position is "NO, you have to prove he DIDN'T win an award" is rather rich. Dumuzid (talk) 02:31, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Are you referring to Heroes of the Environment? Moxy🍁 02:31, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    That is indeed what we're talking about, at least to my understanding. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 19:17, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I have not been notified of this discussion, as required. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 17:34, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    To be clear, neither was I, if my sarcasm was not clear above. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 19:16, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    References

    1. ^ Walsh, Bryan (2008-09-24). "Ted Nordhaus and Michael Shellenberger - Heroes of the Environment 2008". Time Specials. Archived from the original on 29 July 2009. Retrieved 2022-11-20.

    Adding back POV tag without ongoing discussion or attempts to fix the perceived problem with the article[edit]

    An editor keeps adding the maintenance tag to European Court of Human Rights despite no consensus that he is right about the perceived issue or any attempt to fix it. Last time I checked the tag is supposed to be for ongoing improvement not a badge of shame. What is the appropriate response to incorrect use of the tag? (I tried reverting but don't want to get into an edit war) (t · c) buidhe 17:34, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    There is no requirement that someone needs to fix the issue that they're tagging. The only requirement according to WP:NPOVD is to start a discussion that clearly explains the issues that need fixing. They seem to have done so on the Talk page, so I don't think it's an incorrect use of the tag. Whether their argument has merit or not, or whether the editor is being disruptive or not, is a different matter. I hope people other than you two can weigh in on the content dispute on the Talk page. Mokadoshi (talk) 04:07, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Mokadoshi, would it be possible for you to weigh in your inputs to next section related to the article Jinn, too. That would be helpful. Bookku (talk) 06:08, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    POV tagging @ article Jinn, be retained or removed?[edit]

    The pre-RfC stage was and is almost supposed to proceed for RfC formatting step, but an additional content issue came up about DUE/UNDUE relevance and fringe-ness at Talk:Jinn#Comparative mythology, Due, Fringe or Undue?. for discussion and initial inputs have been received.

    Two side issues have cropped up is one user removed section Jinn#Comparative mythology and also tagged article for POV another user reverted the same.

    also Pre-RfC stage info:
    • Also A user has proposed updates for consideration at this sand box for the article Jinn.

    As a discussion facilitator fyi a WP:DUE discussion (some aspects may touch WP:Fringe) is at Talk:Jinn#Pre-RfC stage's WP:RSN#Hachette Livre and WP:ORN step. After RSN and WP:ORN step, RfC formatting is likely to be discussed at Talk:Jinn#Pre-RfC in a new sub section.

    • While article soon to go for RfC, Input requesting questions at this stage are:
    a) Whether POV tag should be retained or removed?
    b) Whether section Jinn#Comparative mythology be there or in removed state until RfC consensus is achieved?
    C) Help in RfC formatting too welcome.

    Well I am myself playing a just discussion facilitator role up til now. Bookku (talk) 17:00, 25 May 2024 (UTC) [reply]

    To be honest, I do not think we should give the user that much credit. The User is constantly shifting the debate more and more into their direction. There has been no issue that so ever. Their original claim that "jinn are essential to islam" they claimed not to be part of the article is actually part of the article. Then the user claims to be ignored, which is a lie, in fact, they ignored all replies. Then they added a template, without the template even being appropriate. There is one issue raised after the other, and before one is even solved, the User rises another. At this point, I assume it is part of their strategy to push their own viewpoint, making so muhc trouble until people forget what it was about. Therefore, although you have my regards for your dedication to solve this issue, I do not plan to further invest time or energy to taht matter. We do not need to answer every absurd request, I always linked wiki guidlines to each action I did. Just because the user choose to ignore them and raising another dispute, does not mean I need to conform. VenusFeuerFalle (talk) 17:15, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The user insists on his opinion without any evidence and without showing a single source that proves his point of view, while I presented many sources on the talk page. The user is biased towards a certain point of view that is against the mainstream views, plz see: Talk:Jinn#Cherrypicking?.--TheEagle107 (talk) 18:09, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    There are two other Muslim world related sections having live discussions / at least some participation. I wonder why still no inputs for this section? Bookku (talk) 09:08, 29 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Masem:, @Slatersteven: You seem to be most editing and recently active on this notice board hence pinging you, also because, actually DR is mostly proceeding in ideal structured manner but users lately bit nervous. An early guidance / inputs shall be helpful I suppose hence requesting your inputs. Bookku (talk) 17:55, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Misinformation from Israeli officials[edit]

    There is some NPOV controversy in Misinformation in the Israel–Hamas war, particularly the Reliability of Israeli officials as sources section. A discussion was (improperly?) started by non EC users, suggesting the extreme option of nuking the section. It would be good to get more input from non-involved and EC editors.

    My (involved) opinion is that the section does have a serious WP:WEIGHT issue. Editors have continually been expanding the section without enough consideration of significance, relevance, proportionality, or redundancy. For example, the section currently includes four separate quotes (three in the intro + the Qatari PM) that express a general skepticism about Israel's truthfulness, without getting into specifics.

    There's also a lack of coverage about misinformation from the other side of the war, such as Hamas' statement that Oct 7 fighters "only targeted the occupation soldiers". So there may be WP:PROPORTION and WP:STRUCTURE issue, but this would be easy enough to address if the Israeli section wasn't so lengthy.

    I've trimmed some content from the Israeli section, and I'd be inclined to trim a lot more still, but it might not be appropriate without more input. What's the right balance here? — xDanielx T/C\R 18:17, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    The section contains several pretty clear-cut examples of statements made by Israeli officials that turned out to be not true (Attacks on Palestinians evacuating Gaza City and the white phosphorus incident), so the section should be kept.
    Including information in a section called Misinformation is pretty much equivalent to stating it in wikivoice. We should not do it unless we have multiple RS calling something "misinformation" or at least explicitly contradicting the words of Israeli officials.
    Much of the current content should be removed as it's not described as misinformation by RS, for example:
    1. analysis by the BBC found that video released by the Israeli military following the Al-Shifa Hospital siege had been edited [24] - no mention of misinformation
    2. In March 2024, the Israeli army said it had "fired precisely" at individuals who posed a threat to soldiers during the Flour massacre; however, a United Nations team investigating the massacre's aftermath stated there was evidence of heavy shooting of civilians by the IDF. [25] - no mention of misinformation, "heavy shooting" and "precise fire" are not mutually exclusive
    etc. etc. Alaexis¿question? 19:12, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I replied to your cross posting of this uh..., at the article talk page. Selfstudier (talk) 22:18, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    xDanielx tried to confront me for creating a paragraph about an attack the IDF launched against a church in Gaza in December. This ultimately didn't end well for him, as can be seen here. I'm saying this because it shows he's coming here for begrudging the mere existence of a section on Israeli misinformation, and not because he has serious objections to the quality of the contributions and the sources they use. His objections are all about preserving the side he sympathizes most in this conflict. Peleio Aquiles (talk) 22:12, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    For context for others, User:Peleio Aquiles added some of the content in this section which I expressed accuracy concerns about, see also here. I don't think we need to get into accuracy concerns here though; the overarching concern here is WP:WEIGHT.
    They also removed my Template:Unbalanced section tag twice. I thought was an appropriate way to draw attention from some non-involved editors, no?
    There have also been WP:CIVIL and WP:FAITH issues, but this probably isn't the place for that. — xDanielx T/C\R 23:02, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    That first conversation we had also serves as proof of the astonishing capacity you have to selectively read sources and not see an argument that occupies prominent space in the text, when such blindness serves a certain purpose. Admittedly, not seeing that Channel 4 had consulted independent sources who refuted the Hamas fake phone call Israel presented was not as bad as not seeing that Layla Moran had given very extensive details in two separate links employed as sources in the entry of how the Israeli army had harassed, starved and killed Christians at the Holy Family church, a bizarre failure that you have not yet explained, but that you should in the name of encouraging good WP:FAITH, since it doesn't seem possible for a patient and honest reader to have missed all this content.
    I am amused by the suggestion you're holding back on the editors of that page by not addressing issues of accuracy right now. I have the impression that had you had any such serious complaints, you wouldn't have wasted your time with that quixotic performance against the paragraph on the Holy Family church siege.
    Your attempt to impose the Unablanced tag over the Israeli misinformation section should be rejected for two reasons: first, because it clearly presupposes the view that Wikipedia needs to pretend that all sides in a given conflict are equally given to lying, a rule that is not observed in articles on similar topics, such as desinformation on the Ukrainian conflict, where the section on Russian disinformation is much longer. And second, because it makes no sense to impose this tag on the section on Israeli disinformation, which thematically has no obligation to provide content on alleged disinformation on the part of Palestinian militias.
    If you don't like how lengthy the Israeli disinformation section has become, you could follow the advice other editors have already given you and start a section on Hamas or PIJ disinformation, something that as far as I know you haven't been prevented from doing by anyone there. That you haven't done so yet is perhaps because you don't know of any examples of such misinformation, in which case imposing the Unbalanced tag the way you're doing amounts to punishing other editors for doing work that you can't do. Peleio Aquiles (talk) 10:38, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Peleio Aquiles, in ARBPIA, your tone is like wearing a hat that says "topic ban me". All the personal stuff is unnecessary. You can save yourself some typing by leaving it out. Sean.hoyland (talk) 11:00, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Use of contentious labels in lead of an article[edit]

    There has been NPOV controversy on-going about the Reiki article on its Talk Page, which is nothing new (I have read through all archives of the talk page to get a better picture, and it has been an on-going debate for nearly 20 years).

    I specifically find the use of the word quackery in the lead objectionable, which seems unduly loaded and wilfully placed in such a prominent position, as well as further uses of WP:WTW throughout the article. Taken into consideration in its entirety, the article reads as though it had been written by someone with a personal vendetta against the topic.

    Input from other editors would be appreciated. Thank you! –Konanen (talk) 17:22, 29 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Maybe it could be more specific as to labeled quackery by whom (scientists? journalists? quacks?) but I don't see the problem with it. If it is medical pseudoscience, it is quackery, isn't it? Anyway, we aren't saying it in Wikipedia's voice, we're pointing out that it has been characterized as such by presumably relevant persons to the topic. —DIYeditor (talk) 01:03, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I have addressed the question of labeled quackery by whom in the Talk page, where I pointed out that one of the two references attached to quackery did not even use that term, and that the other reference was of questionable reliability:

    The other reference tagged to the word quackery, however, does attribute said word to Reiki. Yet that source amounts to nothing more than a WP:QUESTIONABLE rant opinion piece whose inclusion in the lead definitely skews the balance of the article unduly.

    Konanen (talk) 12:53, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Makes sense. —DIYeditor (talk) 20:33, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @DIYeditor; agree. --Dustfreeworld (talk) 16:32, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    See below about "parity of sources". SBM is an excellent source for this subject -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 17:13, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree that "quackery" is falling a bit into slang even if it is commonly used. It's already labeled as pseudoscience, and to me, the context to be added is why it is called that. All that is there, and can be achieved with a rewrite as: Reiki is a pseudoscience. It is based on qi ("chi"), which practitioners say is a universal life force, although there is no empirical evidence that such a life force exists. Clinical research does not show reiki to be effective as a treatment for any medical condition, including cancer, diabetic neuropathy, anxiety or depression. There is no proof of the effectiveness of reiki therapy compared to placebo. Studies reporting positive effects have had methodological flaws. Reiki is used as an illustrative example of pseudoscience in scholarly texts and academic journal articles. Masem (t) 01:11, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't have a personal vendetta against the topic. Even had a friend that was into it years ago. However I consider it to be "quackery" as it is pseduoscience. However as mentioned probably best to use the term pseudoscient unless there is a WP:WEIGHT of WP:RS calling it "quackery" in which case it would not be a WP:NPOV probablem to do likewise in the article. TarnishedPathtalk 02:13, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Seems easier to take it as a writing quality problem than a NPOV problem. "Reiki is a pseudoscience, and its practice has been characterized as quackery" is a pointless tautology. Also not sure why pseudoscience/pseudoscientific needs to appear 3 times in the lead in quick succession. CMD (talk) 02:19, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    "Its practice has been characterized as quackery" must be cited to a source that says its practice has been characterized as quackery, not just sources that call it quackery. Otherwise if violates WEASEL and NOR. TFD (talk) 00:47, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Nearly every definition of "quackery" includes things like deliberate misleading, deliberate pretending and fraud. IMO this should not be in the article much less in the lead. The lead should be a summary of the body of the article, and there is nothing about such aspects in the article. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 20:43, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I can see a very strong consensus here. I agree with you all. Thanks so much for the helpful comments:
    @Konanen, “quackery ... objectionable”
    @TarnishedPath, “probably best to use the term pseudoscient unless there is a WP:WEIGHT of WP:RS calling it "quackery" in which case it would not be a WP:NPOV probablem”
    @CMD, “ "Reiki is a pseudoscience, and its practice has been characterized as quackery" is a pointless tautology. Also not sure why pseudoscience/pseudoscientific needs to appear 3 times in the lead in quick succession”
    @TFD, “..”quackery" must be cited to a source that says its practice has been characterized as quackery, not just sources that call it quackery. Otherwise if violates WEASEL and NOR”
    @North8000, “Nearly every definition of "quackery" includes things like deliberate misleading, deliberate pretending and fraud. IMO this should not be in the article much less in the lead.”
    . --Dustfreeworld (talk) 16:50, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Add back ping...
    @Konanen, @TarnishedPath, @Chipmunkdavis, @The Four Deuces, @North8000 --Dustfreeworld (talk) 19:26, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    SBM is an excellent RS for this type of topic. Per Wikipedia:Fringe theories#Parity of sources, opinions and writings of mainstream authors have more due weight than the writings of promoters of fringe practices, and that includes all of alternative medicine. See also Wikipedia:Fringe theories#Due and undue weight. Beyond that, when in doubt, use attribution. More due weight means, among other things, the amount of content and the prominence of mention. Criticisms belong in the lead. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 17:13, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I believe our article should state clearly that Reiki is not a replacement of conventional medical treatment, and that it can involve non-standard financial costs. However,
    Imagine, if, I say if, you were one of the good-faith Reiki practitioners who has never intended to deceive (you genuinely believe that you are helping others). One day you come home from work, and your children ask you,
    “Dad (/Mum), my classmates said what you are doing is quackery and pseudoscience. You are bad and you are deceiving people. You aren’t doing good work as you’ve told me, is it? They said it’s what Wikipedia said!”
    Is that OK? --Dustfreeworld (talk) 19:09, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes. NPOV does not mean that Wikipedia should avoid reporting the facts. Quacks need not be deliberate frauds - sometimes they are just well meaning but ignorant folks who have avoided educating themselves. That doesn't mean we should avoid doing so on Wikipedia. MrOllie (talk) 19:22, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes. -
    Quacks need not be deliberate frauds - sometimes they are just well meaning but ignorant folks who have avoided educating themselves.
    I don’t think so. That’s your personal opinion.
    From our own definition:

    Quackery, often synonymous with health fraud, is the promotion of fraudulent or ignorant medical practices. A quack is a "fraudulent or ignorant pretender to medical skill" or "a person who pretends, professionally or publicly, to have skill, knowledge, qualification or credentials they do not possess; a charlatan or snake oil salesman"

    --Dustfreeworld (talk) 19:40, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    "ignorant medical practices"—from the definition just given. tgeorgescu (talk) 19:54, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Ignorant is right there in what you quoted. MrOllie (talk) 19:55, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    “Unambiguous exposés of quackery will inevitably appear rude to some people and hurt some feelings. This is a fact of adult life.” Quoted from PMID: 15208545. tgeorgescu (talk) 20:07, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Great Barrington Declaration[edit]

    Article: Great Barrington Declaration

    I'd like to bring the forementioned article to the attention of the noticeboard.

    Issues:

    • The article content seems to have a clear bias of criticism against the declaration.
    • The article has multiple paragraphs where sentences read more like an editorial, not a factual wikipedia article
    • The editing history on the article shows a continuous reversal of seemingly factual edits made by other editors


    Examples:

    A few examples (pasted from the article verbatim, problematic sections bolded):

    • "It claimed harmful COVID-19 lockdowns could be avoided via the fringe notion of "focused protection", by which those most at risk of dying from an infection could purportedly be kept safe while society otherwise took no steps to prevent infections" - Negative bias in framing the content. Multiple reverts in the edit history regarding different editors attempting to remove the "fringe" claim in its current phrasing.
    • "By October 2020, many of these things had already happened in some parts of the world, but likewise were being restricted elsewhere; for instance the UK saw quarantines of students, travel advisories, restrictions on meeting other people, and partial closures of schools, pubs and restaurants." - An editorial-like sentence that appears under the "Background and content" section. The content section should focus on the content of the declaration, not editors adding their own interpretations of the context.
    • "The declaration does not provide practical details about who should be protected or how they can be protected. For instance, it does not mention testing any people outside of nursing homes, contact tracing, wearing masks, or social distancing. It mentions multi-generational households but does not provide any information about how, for example, low-risk people can get infected without putting high-risk members of their household at risk of dying." - Again, the whole paragraph is an editorial and WP:OR
    • "The declaration does not provide any references to published data that support the declaration's strategy." - Again, with the phrasing used, this is WP:OR. A single source provided as reference to the claim is a newspaper article. At the very least, this should be phrased as "Critics have claimed that the declaration does not provide any references to published data that support the declaration's strategy. I will attempt to correct this and will see how long the correction will remain.

    ~~~~


    Saltsjöbaden (talk) 19:29, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    This is too misleadingly framed to result in well-informed outside opinions. Much of what is described as editorial opinion or original research is pulled directly from reliable sources. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 19:35, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Another example of non-NPOV behavior by editors can be found here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Great_Barrington_Declaration#Signatories Saltsjöbaden (talk) 20:20, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    After reading the content and checking the cited sources, the article looks neutral to me—in that it neutrally summarizes what reliable, secondary sources say, and it gives prominence to available mainstream viewpoints over fringe viewpoints. I'll also say that highlighting a list of signatories that aren't highlighted in secondary sources is a great example of an edit that should be reverted on sight, not only for NPOV reasons but BLP as well. Woodroar (talk) 20:55, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I think this is a case of Wikipedia:NPOV means neutral editing, not neutral content.
    @Saltsjöbaden, when nearly all of the reliable sources say that this proposal is vague, unworkable, will result in hospitals collapsing, increase the total number of deaths, etc., then the Wikipedia article is required by policy to reflect this dominant view as being the dominant view. It is not "neutral" to pretend that both views are equally plausible.
    About your claim that editors adding their own interpretations of the context: It is a fact that you can't have the schools open for in-person instruction of all kids and still keep all high-risk adults (aka their teachers, almost half of whom qualified as high-risk) at home. It is a fact that you can't have all kids in school and keep their high-risk family members from being exposed to the germs that the kids will share at school. In the US, about 20% of kids live in multi-generational homes. "Go to school" and "Nobody living with Grandma (or the baby) should go anywhere" are mutually exclusive options. These are not "my interpretations"; these are things that come from reliable sources. They are also facts, not opinions. It is not "editorializing"; it is "explaining".
    We could go further: I understand that there are sources saying that the reason GBD doesn't provide any details is because they knew (or ought to know) that this was not workable in practice, but they wanted to make a political splash despite knowing that their whole idea was bad. WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:38, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Really hard to see anything failing NPOV here. The letter was strongly criticized by experts in medicine and virology, among other sciences. It's ideas may have some possible credibility but there stances were unproven and went against the prevailing scientific thought. As such it is presented in the correct tone to reflect that it's claims are dubious, rather that yet proven

    Masem (t) 18:52, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I feel an edit war simmering[edit]

    Dadude sandstorm keeps changing Ursula Andress' longstanding infobox photo to an unrecognizable photo taken in her teens [26] [27] (around a decade before she even became famous, by the way).

    Everyone knows that BLP infoboxes should use modern photos. I can already tell from the vocabulary in the second edit summary that the odds of this user being reasonable are slim. Any of you willing to take the reigns? Ieonine (talk) 19:58, 1 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Hey, @Ieonine. Thanks for the report. Have you ever started any Wikipedia:Requests for comment? It's not difficult. Try a question like "Which image should be used in the infobox?" You might give people a link to c:Category:Ursula Andress and to whichever guidelines you think are relevant. WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:52, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Gaza Health Ministry[edit]

    Some non-involved editors would be welcome at Gaza Health Ministry.

    The context is essentially

    • Israel and the US expressed unspecific doubts about GHM's casualty data.
    • Organizations like the UN say the GHM's data has historically been reliable.
    • Two peer-reviewed articles published in The Lancet did not find evidence of inflated or fabricated data.
    • Later, statistics professor Abraham Wyner wrote in Tablet (magazine) that the data contained irregularities, such as a strong negative correlation between male and female deaths.
    • Later still, Michael Spagat wrote about GHM's "declining data quality", explained by a shift to user-submitted reports as hospitals have closed.

    The current lede is unbalanced, emphasizing the sources that say the data is reliable, while not mentioning opposing viewpoints at all. My various attempts to include brief mentions of the latter (even just "received significant attention and scrutiny") have been reverted.

    The argument seems to be that the two peer-reviewed Lancet articles trump non-peer-reviewed sources, making opposing viewpoints somewhat fringe. However, the two Lancet articles are older, and focused on very different aspects of the data. In some sense they support opposing narratives, but they absolutely don't contradict one another.

    The current article also quotes a blog comment by "Ken M", with speculation about how the irregularities noted by Wyner might be explained. My attempt to remove that was reverted as well. — xDanielx T/C\R 17:56, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I think you might want to reflect on the concept of Materiality (auditing). No source I've seen thinks the GHM data is dramatically wrong. It's even possible that it's an undercount (e.g., bodies that haven't been found in the rubble yet). WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:56, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]