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::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Date, length, and both hooks verified. Fixed credit (article was written entirely by Cbl62, with no edits at all by GrahamHardy). [[User:Mandarax|<font color="green">M<small>AN</small>d<small>ARAX</small></font>]]&nbsp;<font color="blue">•</font>&nbsp;[[User talk:Mandarax|<font color="999900"><small>XAЯA</small>b<small>ИA</small>M</font>]] 04:24, 4 July 2010 (UTC)
::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Date, length, and both hooks verified. Fixed credit (article was written entirely by Cbl62, with no edits at all by GrahamHardy). [[User:Mandarax|<font color="green">M<small>AN</small>d<small>ARAX</small></font>]]&nbsp;<font color="blue">•</font>&nbsp;[[User talk:Mandarax|<font color="999900"><small>XAЯA</small>b<small>ИA</small>M</font>]] 04:24, 4 July 2010 (UTC)
::: As there is nothing particularly unusual about a physical conditioner becoming a coach, I suggest alt 1. Being an MVP in one sport and then winning 9 coaching championships in another sport is the more unusual accomplishment. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 16:36, 4 July 2010 (UTC)
::: As there is nothing particularly unusual about a physical conditioner becoming a coach, I suggest alt 1. Being an MVP in one sport and then winning 9 coaching championships in another sport is the more unusual accomplishment. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 16:36, 4 July 2010 (UTC)

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Candidate entries

Articles created/expanded on July 6

Catherine Pollard (Scouting)

Created by Rlevse (talk). Self nom at 00:45, 6 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Abingdon (plantation)

5x expanded by Caponer (talk). Nominated by Caponer (talk) at 00:36, 6 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on July 5

Notes Left Behind

  • ... that six-year-old Elena Desserich left hundreds of notes, which were published in Notes Left Behind, for her parents to find after her death?

Created by 216.196.223.242 (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 23:53, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Frankliniella tritici

  • ... that Frankliniella tritici, known as Eastern flower thrips, is an insect that attacks crops in the United States of America, including strawberries, grapes, beans and asparagus?

Created by Chzz (talk). Self nom at 22:46, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Rita Abrams

Created by Ghmyrtle (talk). Self nom at 22:30, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Marshall H. Twitchell

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 22:18, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George W. Thompson (Medal of Honor recipient)

Created by 71.184.58.124 (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 22:11, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Operation Checkmate (commando raid)

x5 expansion by --Jim Sweeney (talk) 22:07, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bernard Taylor (Medal of Honor recipient)

Created by 71.184.58.124 (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 22:05, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Portrait of Wally

an abstract portrait of the upper torso of a woman with red hair, wearing a black dress with white trimmings around the neck

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 21:38, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Camilla Tilling

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 21:00, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Viminaria

  • Comment: almost an April fool's type joke and maybe better without an image. Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:53, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by Casliber (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 20:53, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Rudyard Kipling (Ship)

  • ... that the Rudyard Kipling was the 27th merchant ship to be sunk by a German U-boat in World War II?

Created by White Shadows (talk). Nominated by White Shadows (talk) at 20:41, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Valkininkai

5x expanded by Renata3 (talk). Self nom at 20:25, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Pac-Man Pinball Advance

  • ... that the plot of Pac-Man Pinball Advance focuses on the kidnapping of all the residents of Pac-Land by the four ghosts Inky, Pinky, Blinky, and Clyde?

Created by Nomader (talk). Self nom at 19:37, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Danny Valencia

  • ... that Danny Valencia, who after being drafted only 576th in baseball's 2006 draft said: "It does not matter where you start, but where you finish", debuted in the majors in 2010?

Expanded by --Epeefleche (talk) 19:24, 5 July 2010 (UTC) [reply]

Cache In Trash Out

Created by Rock drum (talk). Nominated by Rock drum (talk) at 19:12, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Article is too short. It needs to be at least 1500 characters in prose. fetch·comms 20:55, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kim Bồng woodworking village

Three carved wooden heads

5x expanded by Dragfyre (talk). Self nom at 18:51, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Shutout (baseball)

Created by Notorious4life (talk). Self nom at 18:44, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thomas H. Paterniti

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 17:43, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

New Kilpatrick

  • ... that in 1649, Sir Umphra Colquhoun tried to stop the building of New Kilpatrick parish church by commandeering the workmen's tools?

5x expanded by Wikiwayman (talk). Self nom at 15:53, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Problem - This article has made a 5x expansion, but not over five days as far as pure text is concerned... Victuallers (talk) 17:52, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Blount Island

Created by Mgreason (talk). Self nom at 15:19, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Cathal Goan

Created by Cargoking (talk). Nominated by Cargoking (talk) at 15:03, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Erysiphe alphitoides

Created by Smartse (talk). Nominated by Smartse (talk) at 14:00, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Operation Blumenpflücken

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 13:42, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

St Benet's Chapel, Netherton

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 13:25, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Gunsa Airport

Created by John Hill (talk) 09:24, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • At 1265 characters of prose, it's a little short of the 1500 required. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 10:34, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Please note that I have corrected the spelling of the name of the airport from Gunsar Airport to Gunsa Airport. I have also added some more text which I think expands it to more than the required 1500 characers of prose.John Hill (talk) 23:13, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I removed a copyright violation. (I would have removed the part which merely quoted someone giving out flight schedule information even it wasn't a copyvio.) The article now stands at 1007 characters. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 00:49, 6 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Taylor Vixen

A tanned girl wearing a black shirt looks at the camera with her mouth slightly open.

5x expanded by Nomader (talk). Nominated by Nomader (talk) at 06:35, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • 5x expansion and hook verified - image isn't fair use so all good to go. Smartse (talk) 13:40, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Harriet E. Derman, 18th Legislative District (New Jersey)

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 03:45, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on July 4

Meridian City Hall

1915 Beaux Arts Building undergoing renovation

Created by [[User:|User:]] ([[User talk:|talk]]). Self nom at 21:01, 5 July 2010 (UTC)


Chhaya

  • ... that the Hindu goddess Chhaya is described to be born from the shadow of goddess Sanjna and substituted her in her house, after she abandoned her husband?
  • Comment: former redirect

Created by Redtigerxyz (talk). Nominated by Redtigerxyz (talk) at 15:36, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lucas Maius

Created by Til Eulenspiegel (talk). Self nom at 03:35, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ny Dag

  • ... that during the Second World War a 'transport ban' was imposed on the communist newspaper Ny Dag, banning carrying the newspaper on trains and public buses?

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 03:29, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I suggest adding Sweden's neutrality, for instance: "that in neutral Sweden during the Second World War ..." Geschichte (talk) 13:45, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Beach Nourishment

Picture featuring a nearly white strip of wide beach extending from bottom center to top center right. To the left of the the beach is a boardwalk, and beyond that suburban houses and other buildings. To the right of the beach is the Atlantic Ocean.

Created by Weissmax25 (talk), Jeff G. (talk). Nominated by Jeff G. (talk) at 01:48, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • This article appears to overlap with Beach nourishment, which also has the benefit of being properly capitalized. These articles should probably be merged, unless I'm missing something. Alansohn (talk) 03:49, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


William Foster (Medal of Honor)

Created by 71.184.32.146 (talk). Nominated by Fetchcomms (talk) at 23:17, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thomas H. Forsyth

Created by 71.184.32.146 (talk). Nominated by Fetchcomms (talk) at 23:12, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Third Battle of Seoul

Created by Jim101 (talk). Self nom at 22:49, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bill Hyman

Created by Johnlp (talk). Self nom at 22:14, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

HootSuite

Created by Gary King (talk). Nominated by Gary King (talk) at 22:12, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • – Accepting offline refs in good faith, hook refs verified. Gosox(55)(55) 14:46, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bill Mosienko

5x expanded by Resolute (talk). Nominated by Resolute (talk) at 21:41, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Chucho el Roto

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 21:22, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Historic Trails Award

Created by Rlevse (talk). Self nom at 21:19, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1

John H. Foley

Created by 71.184.32.146 (talk). Nominated by Fetchcomms (talk) at 21:18, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1980 National League West tie-breaker game

5x expanded by Staxringold (talk). Nominated by Staxringold (talk) at 21:16, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fort Morris Historic Site

Created by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 21:12, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

National Library of Indonesia

Created by Arsonal (talk). Self nom at 19:40, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent. Good catch. Dr. Blofeld White cat 13:04, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Action Man: Search for Base X

Created by Nomader (talk). Self nom at 19:24, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pilate's Court

Created by Twilight Chill (talk). Self nom at 19:23, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John A. Saliba

Created by Jayen466 (talk). Self nom at 17:48, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Herb Gardiner

A man in his mid 30s stares off into the distance. He is wearing a hockey uniform with a stylized "CH" logo on his chest.

5x expanded by Resolute (talk). Nominated by Resolute (talk) at 17:17, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Michael Lachanodrakon

Created by Cplakidas (talk). Self nom at 16:48, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Melvin Bernhardt

5x expanded by Cryptic C62 (talk). Self nom at 16:35, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bölkow Bo 46

The Bölkow Bo 46 V1 (first prototype), at the Hubschrauber Museum, Bückeburg.

  • ... that the Bölkow Bo 46 was an experimental helicopter built to test the high-speed Derschmidt rotor system?

5x expanded by Maury Markowitz (talk). Nominated by Maury Markowitz (talk) at 15:16, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I have added a direct ref to the hook statement (in the intro), that appears to meet spec. I don't like putting refs in intros though, this seems to be a specification collision. Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:37, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Operation Collar (commando raid)

x5 expansion by --Jim Sweeney (talk) 14:58, 4 July 2010 (UTC) [reply]

Andrew Balmford

Created by Smartse (talk). Nominated by Smartse (talk) at 12:09, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Note that this was moved from my user space today. Smartse (talk) 12:16, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT 1: ... that Andrew Balmford found that 8 year-old British children could identify 80% of Pokémon characters but only 50% of common species of British wildlife. Smartse (talk) 12:16, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Neoromicia malagasyensis

Created by Ucucha (talk). Self nom at 11:48, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • New article, sufficient length, hook verified. Smartse (talk) 12:02, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Charles J. and Ingrid V. (Frendberg) Koebel House

Koebel House in Grosse Pointe Farms

  • ... that the Koebel House (pictured) was the first commission for the father-and-son firm of Eliel and Eero Saarinen, and included a built-in electrical and sound system controlled from the master bedroom?

Created by Andrew Jameson (talk). Nominated by Andrew Jameson (talk) at 11:44, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Verified, thanks for the detailed links for the hook references. Smartse (talk) 20:14, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

5 Ural articles

Delta of Ural River.
Ural River.

  • Comment: See the last section in Ural (region). Bottom image is for the river, not delta. There are mountains images in Ural Mountains, but this shows a very rare delta shape.

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 10:41, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Lengths, dates, sources, image, and hook verified. Great job! LittleMountain5 22:04, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent job! Dr. Blofeld White cat 13:05, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Ian Botham

Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 10:33, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bill Long (writer)

  • ... that Bill Long was Ireland's longest surviving heart transplant patient?

Created by Candlewicke (talk). Self nom at 08:25, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

U.S. Route 30 in Iowa

  • ... that it cost USD$30,000-per-mile ($19,000-per-kilometer), $658 thousand-per-mile ($409 thousand-per-kilometer), adjusted for inflation, to pave U.S. Route 30 in Iowa in the late-1920s and early-1930s?
  • Comment: I can add what it would cost in today's dollars if desired.

Created by Fredddie (talk). Self nom at 07:09, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • You can do that as long as you have a source for the conversion, it might make the hook a little more interesting. Gatoclass (talk) 08:16, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Inflation figures added. Since I used {{Inflation}} to figure the inflation, is {{Inflation-fn}} sufficient for citations? —Fredddie 22:35, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
On reflection, I think there is a better hook in that article. I might take a closer look at it a little later. Gatoclass (talk) 07:21, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK, thanks. —Fredddie 23:24, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Holbrooke Hotel

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 04:51, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Redondasuchus

  • ... that in one study on the aetosaur Redondasuchus, the orientation of a diagram in the paper may have contributed to the misidentification of its holotype as a left scute rather than a right?

Created by Smokeybjb (talk). Self nom at 04:23, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alan M. Kriegsman

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 04:07, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Louis Moyroud, Rene Alphonse Higonnet

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:52, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Crackdown 2

  • ... that Crackdown 2 is being released on July 6th, 2010 and is based 10 years after the events that happened in Crackdown?

Created by Predstar1958 (talk). Nominated byUser:RenderedGEAR | User talk:RenderedGEAR at 23:37, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • No were near the 5x expansion during the last 5 days required by the DYK rules. In fact since May 31 the article prose has not even doubled (4829 B to the current 9471 B). --Allen3 talk 00:35, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on July 3

Russian battleship Ioann Zlatoust

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 22:42, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William Robert Ming

Created by AbbyKelleyite (talk). Self nom at 21:31, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sleeping Giant Wilderness Study Area

The "Sleeping Giant", or Beartooth Mountain, in Montana in the U.S., a famous natural landmark which, in profile, looks like a person sleeping on their back and which lends its name to the Sleeping Giant Wilderness Study Area

Created by Tim1965 (talk). Nominated by Tim1965 (talk) at 15:32, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Sisimiut

Sisimiut

5x expanded by Algkalv (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 13:08, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Prose should be around 5 times. Dr. Blofeld White cat 13:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

According to DYKcheck it's gone from 2099 > 8665 characters and is therefore still 2500 short of a 5x expansion. Smartse (talk) 13:54, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Willie Heston

Photograph of Willie Heston, circa 1904

Created/expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 08:02, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Truth (novel)

Created by Canley (talk). Self nom at 23:46, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Everything checks out except to length. Can you add some more to get it over the minimum 1500 characters of prose. —Bruce1eetalk 07:40, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Roman Imperial Church

  • ... that during the early Middle Ages the Gothic rulers in Western Europe established their own (Arian) churches alongside the Roman churches of their subjects?

Created by Mcorazao (talk). Nominated by Mcorazao (talk) at 19:56, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Resurrection of Jesus in Christian art

Raising Adam and Eve is almost always depicted in the East as part of the Resurrection, as in this mural where Satan is bound in Hell, Chora Church, Istanbul, c.1315.

Created by History2007 (talk). Self nom at 03:15, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: Here is the Googlebooks link to verify the hook [1]. Cheers. History2007 (talk) 17:45, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Holocaust's Arab Heroes

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 14:49, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Stalag Luft III murders

  • ... that the extensive manhunt that took place after the Stalag Luft III murders was the only time that a major war crime was investigated by a single service branch of any nation's military?
  • Comment: source of the fact is footnote 2

Created by Michael Dorosh (talk). Self nom at 14:41, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hank Erickson

Person with baseball bat.

Created by Halvorsen brian (talk). Self nom at 03:15, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Verified. I added the word "supposed" to the hook as it's only a matter of opinion. Gatoclass (talk) 07:10, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Nativity of the Blessed Virgin Mary Catholic Church

A grey stone church with a tall tower

  • ... that the walls of the Catholic church (pictured) in Cassella, Ohio, which burned in an 1888 fire, remained unrepaired for nearly thirty years?

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 00:03, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment An article on Cassella will be written in a day or two, well before this gets to the Main Page. I'm about to go out and watch fireworks. Nyttend (talk) 00:42, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Never mind; the fireworks are later than I thought, so I wrote the Cassella article as well. It's about 2000 characters, so I'm going to go for a double nomination. Nyttend (talk) 01:32, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Both articles verified, image verified as PD. Gatoclass (talk) 07:23, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Buildings at 1200-1206 Washington Street

expanded 5x and nominated by Theornamentalist (talk) 23:47, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Well I hate to challenge a good hook, but ref 8 states that Green lived at 1203 Washington, and according to the NRHP ref, the Historic District consists of the even numbered addresses. Gatoclass (talk) 07:34, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
What? I'm so confused now, there are only the yellow flats on the eastern side of Washington (compare with google maps) and here's a picture in an article that I found that of course is called Hetty Green lived at 1203 Washington Street but look at the picture! its the same building, same side! I thought one of these reasons it was on the NJRHP was because of her, what should I do?
  • Well I think you need to confirm somehow whether or not 1203 Washington is in the Historic District. I may not be able to since a lot of NRHP web pages won't load for me. Gatoclass (talk) 14:47, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • This New Jersey Register of Historic Places document (which you've used in the article) confirms that both the National and New Jersey Registers include just the even-numbered buildings. The National Register database says that the district is listed exclusively under Criterion C, "Significant Architecture"; if Green had lived in the district, it likely would have also been listed under Criterion B, "Significant Person". I tried to find New Jersey-specific resources besides the link I already gave, but Wikipedia:WikiProject National Register of Historic Places/Editor help doesn't have anything at all for New Jersey. Sorry to have to confirm the disappointment. Nyttend (talk) 15:36, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you Nyttend and Gatoclass for looking into this. Maybe she was not the reason for the addition to the criterion, as supported above. The bizarre thing is that the building which she lived in is called the Yellow Flats in Hoboken and the only yellow flats on 12th street/washington are on the eastern/even numbered side.
    from hobokenmuseum.orgYellow Flats, east side of 1200 Washington Street. Circa 1890. Build by Hoboken Land & Improvement Company, these apartments were once home to one of the wealthiest women of her day, Hetty Green, nicknamed the "Witch of Wall Street." Her reluctance to spend money is legendary. It is said that her injured son lost a leg because she was unwilling to pay for his medical attention
    Even the pictures I've provided above verify this, that the buildings 1200-1206 are the same as the one in which she lived; it's just that every reference says 1203... So something isn't adding up, and I wonder if maybe for some reason the numbers were different when she lived there or something. What do you guys think? - Theornamentalist (talk) 18:05, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Do you think it would be okay to add something to the article like "Even though listed as a resident in 1203 Washington Street, an address which is found on the western side of the street from several sources, other sources say that she resided in the Yellow flats on the eastern side of the street"? - Theornamentalist (talk) 21:20, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bigar

Created by Mihaiepopa (talk). Nominated byHJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? at 23:37, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Harry Oliver (ice hockey), Barney Stanley, Rusty Crawford

5x expanded by Resolute (talk). Nominated by Resolute (talk) at 23:30, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Wildcat Mountain State Park

5x expanded by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 21:16, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • 5x expansion verified - not sure about "is home to" - it's not only found in the park. I also think that American Walking Fern sounds more interesting, therefore, how about:
ALT 1 ... that the rare American Walking Fern can be found in Wildcat Mountain State Park a Wisconsin state park in the Driftless Area? Smartse (talk) 11:50, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Much better hook, thanks! Dincher (talk) 12:03, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Marinus Anton Donk

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 20:16, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alsace-Lorraine Regional Party

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 18:43, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

French expedition in Syria

French expeditionary corps landing in Beyrouth 16 August 1860.

Created/expanded by Per Honor et Gloria (talk). Nominated by Per Honor et Gloria (talk) at 18:32, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Peter of Farfa

  • ... that Abbot Peter of Farfa rescued his abbey's library and archives when it was attacked by the Saracens in 897?

Created by Srnec (talk). Nominated by Srnec (talk) at 18:18, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Eagle Butte Mine

Created by Roborunt (talk). Nominated by Chzz (talk) at 15:52, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The interesting factoid is the "500 million short tons of coal", which isn't followed by a reference in the article. Please add a reference immediately following this fact in the article and we'll be good here. Also suggest lower-casing "o" in Open :)-- φ OnePt618Talk φ 05:56, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I added a reference inline with the factoid and have made minor typographical changes to the article. Roborunt (talk) 06:48, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for adding the reference - there's still a problem I'm afraid though as I can't find the fact in the reference. Could you point me to the page that you got the number 521 from? Also can you change the article to explain what the abbreviation "mm" means as in "471 mm tons" - I assume it is million million but I might well be wrong. Smartse (talk) 19:52, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
If you add up the total productions shown, it is 521,427,969.
The units quoted in the source are 'millions of tons', so I will change mm to 'million'.  Chzz  ►  20:05, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Somerset County Cricket Club in 2009

A man in all white cricket uniform and a burgundy helmet holds his bat high after hitting a shot.

Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 14:39, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • In the hook it says 1,814 but in the article it says 1,817. Which is it?-- φ OnePt618Talk φ 06:00, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fixed the hook; 4 and 7 are very near each other on the keyboard! Harrias talk 08:44, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Marlborough Fault System, Wairau Fault, Awatere Fault, Clarence Fault, Hope Fault

Satellite image of northern South Island, New Zealand, showing Alpine Fault splaying into a set of sub-parallel faults

  • Comment: Marlborough Fault System, Wairau Fault, Awatere Fault, and Clarence Fault all new, Hope Fault 5x expanded N.B. Hook >200 characters but 5 articles nominated, per C3

Created by Mikenorton (talk). Self nom at 14:22, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • New articles/expansion verified. The hook is is "reasonably compact and readable" as C3 requires so I see no problems with it. Smartse (talk) 19:41, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fort-Liberté

The fort in Fort Liberte

  • ... that the bay of Fort-Liberté (fort pictured) was the site of Caribbean's largest sisal plantation until nylon was invented?

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk) and Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 14:15, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I could verify this, but I'm a little confused over the "Other historical places of interest" section. Are these other historical places of interest in Fort Liberte? Or in Haiti as a whole? If the latter, I'm not sure what the section is doing there. Gatoclass (talk) 07:59, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Second Chance Program

Created by ChrisO (talk). Nominated by ChrisO (talk) at 13:30, 3 July 2010 (UTC). Hook is 187 chars including spaces.[reply]

The Ballad of Rodger Young

Created by Sandstein (talk). Nominated by Sandstein (talk) at 12:46, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Coanwood Friends Meeting House

A single-storey stone building with two windows and a door in a graveyard

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 12:37, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nueces Bay

A large white bird with slender legs wades on a large body of water, near the brushy shore with industry on the horizon.

  • ... that Nueces Bay (pictured) in Texas, was once referred to as papelote or wastepaper Bay?

5x expanded by William S. Saturn (talk). Nominated by William S. Saturn (talk) at 06:14, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Battle Tag

  • ... that video game critics were confused by the presentation of the game Battle Tag at Ubisoft's E3 2010 press conference?

Created by Nomader (talk). Self nom at 05:13, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yuri Matochkin

Created by Reyk (talk). Nominated by Reyk (talk) at 04:31, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Recaredo Santos Tornero

Created by Diego Grez (talk). Nominated by Diego Grez (talk) at 03:23, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: To check this on the references provided, please look for 'fábrica de papel'. :-) Thanks in advance! --Diego Grez let's talk 03:25, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of places named after Robert Byrd

Robert C. Byrd Green Bank Telescope

Created by Caponer (talk). Self nom at 02:51, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Nominated lists have been selected for DYK in the past, so I'm not quite sure what separates this one from previous lists given that they too were comprised of "bulleted text." I've noticed that many featured lists consist of templates rather than bullets, so perhaps I will reformat the article to make it a more attractive candidate for DYK. I can provide an introductory paragraph as well. --Caponer (talk) 13:37, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • The article will need 1,500 words of prose (basically in an article like this, the lead). Unfortunately words in the tables, bulleted lists etc don't count, as Chanaka L says. Harrias talk 19:36, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • In light of this information, I know of some wonderful sources that I can pull from to write an introduction for the list of place names. I would greatly appreciate receiving any and all guidance as to what would account for a suitable introduction to a list such as this. Thanks again! --Caponer (talk) 21:46, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I've added some introductory paragraphs to introduce the list. Please let me know if this is suitable, both to Wikipedia's overall guidelines and to the guidelines of DYK. --Caponer (talk) 00:20, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yep, that's suitable for DYK now. Smartse (talk) 20:09, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on July 2

William Downie Stewart (1842–1898)

  • Comment: Expansion started 2 July. The hook tries to create the intrigue that father and son have the same name, and it's unusual to have a sister as Mayoress.

5x expanded by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 20:04, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Family E

5x expanded by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nom at 09:08, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dan McGalliard

Created by Michaeljamesadams (talk). Nominated by My76Strat (talk) at 02:34, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sanctioned name

Created by Circeus (talk), Sasata (talk). Self nom at 20:25, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jyestha (goddess)

Stone sculpture of a broad woman seated on a throne, with two attendants

  • ... that a good wife is prescribed to propitiate Jyestha (pictured) - the Hindu goddess of misfortune - to keep the goddess away from her home?

Created by Redtigerxyz (talk). Nominated by Redtigerxyz (talk) at 04:53, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Ferdinand Maria von Senger und Etterlin

Created by User:Cyberherbalist. Nominated by Cyberherbalist (talk) at 02:18, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Size and date of the article are okay, but there are some issues. • At 266 characters, the hook is way over the limit of 200. • As is often the case with translated articles, this one is very insufficient in references, and in particular the hook facts do not have inline citations. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 08:59, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: I have worked on the article a bit, adding several references (an English one is used 3 times) and the seventh referred to him directly as a general of the joint command (in English, as well). The first reference I found does cover him as an Oberleutnant losing an arm, though not the particular battle, so the alternate hook below is verifiable. Marrante (talk) 17:47, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Iran – Sri Lanka relations

Created by Pectore (talk). Self nom at 02:11, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Verified. Interesting stuff. --Soman (talk) 18:47, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fuller Harding

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 02:02, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Arizona Beach State Recreation Site

Created by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 00:33, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Congregational Chapel, Nantwich

Photograph of a red-brick building with a pediment and arched windows. An old-style lamppost is in the foreground
Photograph of a red-brick building with a pediment and arched windows.

  • Comment: Alternative image:

Created by Espresso Addict (talk). Nominated by Espresso Addict (talk) at 00:08, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Tub'a Abu Kariba As'ad

5x expanded by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 23:36, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


The Simmons & Wright Company

The Simmons & Wright Company

Created by Dudemanfellabra (talk). Nominated by Nyttend (talk) at 22:31, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment Not sure why "The" is in the title; I'll be leaving Dudeman a note to say (1) that I've nominated this article, and (2) asking why "The" is in the title. Nyttend (talk) 22:32, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The" is in the title because it was part of the official NRHP listing name. Simmons & Wright Company is a redirect; I'm not opposed to moving it, but I created it with "The" simply because of the NRHP. --Dudemanfellabra (talk) 22:46, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

list of knuckleball pitchers

  • Comment: This is an article that had been under development in userspace and is now ready for the big show.

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 20:26, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Looks great; I'll wait for comment by people who actually work with the DFK process. MC10 (TCGBL) 20:42, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Looks good, how about this tweak?
Crum375 (talk) 22:31, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • What about this slight rearrangement of words?
Nyttend (talk) 23:54, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I have no issue with any of the alternates, which are all probably better than what I proposed. Alansohn (talk) 19:08, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Malcolm Shabazz

5x expanded by Malik Shabazz (talk). Self nom at 20:06, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Harosheth Haggoyim

Created by Broad Wall (talk). Nominated by Broad Wall (talk) 2 July 2010 (UTC)

  • I'm afraid the article doesn't support the strong and rather naive-sounding claim made by the above hook, about a definite identification of the chariot with that of the biblical Sisera. Fut.Perf. 20:13, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I was trying for a punchy hook. Alt hook: A fancy linchpin from a war chariot associated with the Biblical Sisera has been found at his fortress of Harosheth Haggoyim?Broad Wall (talk) 22:12, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think the issue is that there is no evidence that Sisera existed, so referring to "his" fortress or artifacts associated with him is misleading. All the sources you provide tell us is that certain artifacts and structures were found, from a certain time period. Crum375 (talk) 01:17, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

F. James McDonald

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 17:08, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Article is not long enough at less than 500 words, not including templates and references. Redfarmer (talk) 18:25, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is 500 words a new requirement, because this is well above the traditional 1,500 character cutoff. Alansohn (talk) 19:02, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • My apologies...I'm still new to reviewing these and could have swore it said 1500 words. In that case, hook, length, and date verified. Redfarmer (talk) 19:05, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Peter Womersley

Created by Jonathan Oldenbuck (talk). Nominated by Jonathan Oldenbuck (talk) at 16:18, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date and references check out. Interesting article! (A relative of mine formerly lived in a modernist house in Gattonside, now I'm wondering whether Womersley might have had a hand in designing it.) Espresso Addict (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Albanian Songs of the Frontier Warriors

Created by Sulmues (talk). Self nom at 16:08, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hook is in the lead and currently unreferenced. Redfarmer (talk) 18:37, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Please see last sentence of third from last paragraph, where the same hook is referenced. --Sulmues Let's talk 18:44, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • If you want this to be your hook, you need to change the submitted hook slightly. The referenced sentence says, "It is assumed that these men constitute the very last traditional native singers of epic verses in Europe." This is a slightly different connotation from your submitted hook, which leads one to believe the fact is definite. Redfarmer (talk) 18:48, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you for the suggestion! Tweaked to be "who are assumed": In fact Elsie says "One can safely assume". Let me know if it's ok now.--Sulmues Let's talk 18:53, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Works for me. Length, hook, and date verified. Redfarmer (talk) 19:08, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Isabella Brant (drawing)

A drawing of Isabella Brant by Peter Paul Rubens

  • ... that a rough sketch of Peter Paul Rubens, his second wife Hélène Fourment and child, was discovered on the reverse side of the drawing of his first wife, Isabella Brant (pictured)?

Created by Noelypole (talk). Self nom at 15:36, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date and length verified. Offline hook taken in good faith. Image in public domain. Redfarmer (talk) 18:43, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Hwa Chong Institution

The clock tower of Hwa Chong Institution and the statue of its founder

5x expanded by AngChenrui (talk). Self nom at 13:40, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, length, and hook verified. Impressive work! Redfarmer (talk) 19:20, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Concur with Redfarmer: very impressive! Everything right and tight. Mike (talk) 02:31, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Salem Chapel, East Budleigh

Two cream-coloured buildings at right angles to each other, in front of which are brick walls and an iron gate with an overthrow and lantern

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 12:52, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kildare Poems

Created by Future Perfect at Sunrise (talk). Nominated by Future Perfect at Sunrise (talk) at 12:19, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, lengths, hook ref verified. But the section quoting the Land of Cokaygne needs an inline reference for the quoted material, per WP:V. Crum375 (talk) 01:33, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of endemic birds of Sri Lanka

Created by Chanakal (talk), Jimfbleak (talk) . Self nom at 10:24, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length, date, and hook ref verified. I fixed the article, which said 2004; it's now 2001, in agreement with the reference. However, "such discovery" is vague, and before seeing the article I thought it referred specifically to the discovery of an owl species. I think the following hook is better: MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 22:26, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks very much Mandarax for the review. In 2001, the discovery was announced, in 2004, it was formally described. I've mixed up the dates. Thank you for fixing it.--Chanaka L (talk) 01:26, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Frederick Jarvis

Created by 71.184.34.96 (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 09:51, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

SeaChoice

Spiny lobster

Created by Gobonobo (talk). Self nom at 09:38, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Big Brother 11 (U.S.)

  • ... that the Big Brother 11 house was equipped with fifty-two cameras and eighty-nine microphones to record the participants?

5x expanded by Alucard 16 (talk). Nominated by Alucard 16 (talk) at 06:57, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Yep, it's about a 2x expanded article, not a 5x expanded article. MC10 (TCGBL) 19:27, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John James (Medal of Honor recipient)

  • ... that John James was awarded the Medal of Honor for "gallantry in action" after defending the Lyman Train from Indian attacks for 3 days?

Created by 71.184.34.96 (talk). Nominated by BejinhanTalk at 05:49, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Bejinhan assessed it as stub, that should be changed. Furthermore, a small paragraph outlining why the train was called "Lyman Train" would be great, possibly incorporating this source. Length and date check out alright. --Pgallert (talk) 09:04, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
 Done BejinhanTalk 10:01, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Victor Adamson

Created by Redfarmer (talk). Self nom at 04:38, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Majority of article (including the claim above) is sourced to a website of unknown reliability; what makes www.b-westerns.com reliable according to WP:RS? Jappalang (talk) 22:49, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fred Ewing

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 04:07, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, and hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 04:49, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Japanese Buddhist architecture

Byodo-in Buddhist temple, Japan

Created by Urashimataro (talk), Bamse (talk). Self nom at 03:58, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • AGF verified. If you added an image, this could be a lead article candidate. Gatoclass (talk) 10:35, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I second that. There's a lot of great images in the article. APK whisper in my ear 19:39, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
How about this or this? Frank (Urashima Tarō) (talk) 23:06, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
We will need a source to prove they are Buddhist temples. Gatoclass (talk) 07:26, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Do you mean a source which has a picture of the same structure and a caption that says "temple"? Would this page of the official Japanese tourist organization do? bamse (talk) 14:28, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No, I meant one which says Buddhist temple. Anyhow, your link seems to do the trick in either event, so I have added one of the images to the hook, and this is now officially a lead article candidate. Gatoclass (talk) 12:09, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, I've substituted the provided image as it didn't look very good at 100x100px. This one looks a lot better. Also added an alt image. Gatoclass (talk) 12:19, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. "Temple" in Japan (almost?) always refers to Buddhist temple (as opposed to "shrine", which refers to a Shinto shrine). As for the images you substituted, I wonder if the image should correspond to the hook or to the article? If it should match the hook, an image of an Amida Hall would be better, since that's what the hook is referring to. Here are some images of Amida halls which might look better at 100x100: 1, 2, 3, 4. Let me know if you take any of these and if you need a reference saying that it shows a temple. If you stay with the old (substituted) images, that's fine with me as well. bamse (talk) 16:46, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think we need to match the image precisely with info in the hook. The article is about Japanese Buddhist architecture after all, not one particular type. And the "change" mentioned in the hook seems to be more about the dedication of the temples rather than structural differences. Also the images you linked aren't that good, so IMO best to stick to the thumbnails already added above. Gatoclass (talk) 07:38, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK. bamse (talk) 08:19, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ride (Ciara song)

5x expanded by User:Candyo32 (talk). Nominated by Candyo32 (talk) at 03:46, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hook is a little long, I think it would still be workable if you dropped everything after the word "Ride". Gatoclass (talk) 10:38, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Okay, it's fixed. Candyo32 (talk) 15:35, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • After a closer look, this one appears to be only a x2 expansion. Gatoclass (talk) 07:57, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Stanley Wagner (vintner)

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:07, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, lengths, hook ref verified. Crum375 (talk) 03:20, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

James Jackson (US Army officer)

Created by 71.184.34.96 (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 01:18, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Frank Curto Park

Created by Duff (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 15:57, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Charles E. Fairman

Elderly bespectacled gentleman sitting at a table and looking in a microscope

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 00:36, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Checks out, offline taken in good faith. Very nice article, nice pic too. Chzz  ►  02:55, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Articles created/expanded on July 1

Independent Regional Party for Alsace-Lorraine

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 20:03, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Electric vehicle warning sounds

Created by Epson291 and expanded by Epson291 and Mariordo. Self nominated by Mariordo (talk) 21:22, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Only minor technical terms: electric drive includes EVs, PHEVs and HEVs, and hybrids are already in the market, so the change for "are", then what about this option, still too long?
  • ALT 2 Verified. Hook length now 156 characters (ok). Note 1: Article meets both the "created" and the "expanded" criterion, but you can get credit at DYK only once per article. Note 2: The hook might be read as "all electric vehicles will make these sounds", something that the sources of course do not support. But I don't think we should be so picky. --Pgallert (talk) 10:14, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK, but indeed "all" is not accurate, that is why the original text I used "several". Thanks.-Mariordo (talk) 15:53, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Siege of Coria (1138)

Created by Srnec (talk). Nominated by Srnec (talk) at 18:22, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

A Christian reflection on the New Age

Created by History2007 (talk). Self nom at 00:36, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: Here are the links to the two documents to check it [2] and [3]. Cheers. History2007 (talk) 08:36, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Wesleyan Methodist Church, Nantwich

Photograph of a red-brick building whose front face has two arched doors, two large arched windows and a small circular one under a pediment. A rounded flanking bay is visible on the right.

Created by Espresso Addict (talk). Nominated by Espresso Addict (talk) at 00:34, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

French battleship Suffren

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 23:48, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Singapore Federation of Trade Unions

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 15:24, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Slight tweak to DYK but otherwise okay; length and source check out fine. Jappalang (talk) 22:54, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1972 Oklahoma Sooners football team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 15:16, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

photo of a mustachioed man sitting at ease, looking down and away from the camera

Guy Bradley

5x expanded by Yllosubmarine (talk). Nominated by Yllosubmarine (talk) at 15:03, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Whipping Tom

drawing of a man carrying a three-tailed whip

  • ALT1:... that Whipping Tom caused the men of London to dress in women's clothing and walk the streets in search of him?

Created by Iridescent (talk). Nominated by Iridescent (talk) at 08:07, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think the first hook is somewhat misleading in that it suggests the spanking itself was supernaturally quick - according to the source it was his ability to elude capture that gave rise to suspicions of a supernatural element. Gatoclass (talk) 11:20, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • The exact wording in the source is "[he] worked with such speed and skill that the popular belief attributed supernatural powers to him"; "worked", not "escaped". The reference got lost somewhere in the rewriting; I've restored it to the correct place. – iridescent 13:50, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • That reference doesn't clearly state that the spanking itself was rapid, and the other source clearly states that it was his ability to make his escape so readily that was seen as supernatural. But we can go with the alt hook instead if you're happy with that. Gatoclass (talk) 07:31, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT2:... that in 1712, Whipping Tom showed 70 women his "Great Rodd of Birch" to their great distress?
  • ALT3:... that cries of "Spanko" were heard in the courtyards and alleys of 17th century London whenever a lone woman encountered Whipping Tom (pictured)?
  • I'm reluctant to go with anything about "Spanko!"; although it's undeniably what the source says, and WP:VNT and so forth, I don't believe it personally (if you're carrying out a serious assault in a crowded area, the last thing you'd do is shout at the top of your voice), and I don't really want to give it too much prominence. Regarding the "great rodd of birch", I'm uneasy; whatever hook this runs with will prompt complaints, and there's something that doesn't seem quite right about joking about the actual assaults. Personally, I'd go with ALT1, which conveys the surreal humor of the piece without actually treating serious indecent assault as a joke. – iridescent 23:20, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT4 (rework of ALT1):... that in late 17th-century London, men put on women's clothing and walked the streets in hopes of catching the eye of Whipping Tom?
  • Hmm, how about putting this spin to ALT1? I think it is a humorous take of their intent to bait and catch the criminal. Jappalang (talk) 00:01, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yes, that definitely works. – iridescent 09:58, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hmmm, well I think there was probably a better hook in there somewhere, but since the creator appears to be happy with this one, I guess we can go with it. Gatoclass (talk) 12:22, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]



1971 Oklahoma Sooners football team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:19, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Patala

  • ... that according to Hindu cosmology, women seduce and increase the sexual energy of men - who enter the first realm of the underworld - by intoxicating them?
  • Comment: former redirect

Created by Redtigerxyz (talk). Nominated by Redtigerxyz (talk) at 07:09, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Inline citations do not seem to have been provided for the statements from which the hook was derived from. Several other paragraphs in the "Seven regions" section have not been cited as well. Jappalang (talk) 23:01, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"The summary of the description of these realms as given in the above Puranas is as below:[6][4][3]" I did not want to add the three references at the end of each para so I put so I put the references once. The references can be copy - pasted at the end of all paras if needed. --Redtigerxyz Talk 04:36, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

State v. Limon

5x expanded by Are You The Cow Of Pain? (talk). Nominated by Circeus (talk) at 02:05, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Not a 5x expansion. (769 vs. 2527) APK whisper in my ear 03:42, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Seems I miscalculated things... Circéus (talk) 04:24, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Eccles by-election, 1890

Created by Lozleader (talk). Nominated by Chzz (talk) at 02:02, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified. Hook ref accepted in good faith. APK whisper in my ear 03:47, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Derby Racer (Revere Beach)

Derby Racer in 1920

Created by IronGargoyle (talk). Self nom at 23:51, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Franklin Mountains State Park

A mountainous desert bisected by a two lane highway

5x expanded by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 23:22, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Expansion date, lengths, hook ref verified. Crum375 (talk) 23:39, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


17th Legislative District (New Jersey)

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 22:14, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, and hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 03:50, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dos (Myriam Hernández album)

Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 21:19, 1 July 2010 (UTC). Self nom at 21:17, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified, but the hook is cited with this link. I don't see any mention of Myriam Hernández or Dos. APK whisper in my ear 03:55, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I do not know how to fix the link, because the information is there in the biography section for Myriam Hernández. Both links just redirect to allmusic, but not the artist or her discography. Any sugestion? Jaespinoza (talk) 06:34, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I fixed the Allmusic link, but it makes no mention of Dos (or is Dos the same as Myriam Hernández 2?). Also huge chunks of text in the article have been lifted from this reference, for example "gave the artist the chance to sign a ... to consolidate her presence in the music business, but the failure of her first record under the new contract ... ended in recriminations between the singer and the record label, blaming each other for the lack of sales." —Bruce1eetalk 14:14, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The verb in the hook should be "helped" instead of "help". --Metropolitan90 (talk) 04:23, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1: ... that the success of the album Dos by Myriam Hernández helped her to sign a recording contract with Warner Music?
I also fixed the text in the article, Myriam Hernández 2 is the same album as Dos. Jaespinoza (talk) 05:39, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Length, date and hook refs verified for ALT1. I added the album's alternate name to the article. —Bruce1eetalk 07:24, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Chaim Sofer

Created by Brewcrewer (talk). Nominated by Brewcrewer (talk) at 19:36, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Corey Allen

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 16:09, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • How is this? Shorter and is true (in that they immerse themselves in aggression and use real knives per method acting), but yet has a tinge of controversial pull. Jappalang (talk) 00:14, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jezreel (city)

Queen Jezebel executed by defenestration in Jezreel, by Gustav Dore

created by Broad Wall (talk). Nominated by Broad Wall (talk) at 12:52, 1 July 2010 EST

Noel Fitzpatrick

  • ... that Irish neuro-orthopaedic veterinary surgeon Noel Fitzpatrick drew upon influences from the X Men character of Wolverine to pioneer bionic development in animals?

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 12:22, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

EstWin

  • ... that Estonia created project EstWin to connect all citizens to the internet with 100 mbit/s speed by 2015?

Created by Sander Säde (talk). Self nom at 10:04, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

SS Charlotte Cords

Created by Mjroots (talk). Nominated by Mjroots (talk) at 08:54, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Allyn Ferguson

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:52, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hook ref is not cited. Date and length verified. APK whisper in my ear 05:32, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref has been added to the article's lead paragraph. Alansohn (talk) 14:33, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Good to go. APK whisper in my ear 16:29, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Older nominations

Articles created/expanded on June 30

Bill Dague

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 21:40, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • hook is not referenced. RlevseTalk 19:04, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • fn. 5 follows immediately after the hook fact; it comes directly from the Football Encylopedia. Cbl62 (talk) 21:15, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hugh Knox

Philander Knox

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 21:13, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sclerocroton integerrimus

Created by Michaelwild (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 17:38, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Frank Joranko

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 00:29, 3 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Note and alt 1 The credit on this is wrong. I was the creator rather than GrahamHardy. Also, I would like to propose the following alt hook
Date, length, and both hooks verified. Fixed credit (article was written entirely by Cbl62, with no edits at all by GrahamHardy). MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 04:24, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
As there is nothing particularly unusual about a physical conditioner becoming a coach, I suggest alt 1. Being an MVP in one sport and then winning 9 coaching championships in another sport is the more unusual accomplishment. Cbl62 (talk) 16:36, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John Adams Cummins

Gentleman with long whiskers in formal jacket and medal

  • Comment: another nickname was "playmate to princes" or "

Created by W Nowicki (talk). Nominated by W Nowicki (talk) at 22:05, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Ensemble amarcord

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 15:33, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sussex Heights

A tall, narrow, white-painted block of flats rising above the roofs of terraced houses in the foreground and a calm sea in the background.

  • Comment: Expansion began at this diff, and should just squeak in at 5x. Better hook wording suggestions welcome.

5x expanded by Hassocks5489 (talk). Self nom at 20:39, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • How about this suggestion? Note that the webcam has ceased operation. Jappalang (talk) 23:41, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Expansion length, image copyright, source reliability, and citation all check out. Someone make a pick of DYK though. Jappalang (talk) 23:41, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'd pick ALT 1 as it sounds more interesting. Smartse (talk) 13:39, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Brenda Taylor (athlete)

Created by Sillyfolkboy (talk). Self nom at 19:47, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of Hull City A.F.C. seasons

Hull City's staff celebrate promotion to the Premier League

  • ... that after 104 years of existence, Hull City was promoted to play in the English Premier League for the first time in their history in 2008 (celebrations pictured)?

5x expanded by Mattythewhite (talk). Self nom at 15:35, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

German submarine U-27 (1936)

5x expanded by White Shadows (talk). Nominated by White Shadows (talk) at 00:05, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, and hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 05:43, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

German submarine U-1163

Created by White Shadows (talk). Nominated by White Shadows (talk) at 22:04, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • First, the article seems old and ineligible for DYK. Second, though apparently moot for the DYK hook, the source doesn't say that this sub shot down the Mosquito. It seems she was being moved on the surface with another sub to another location, with other ships escorting them. When the Mosquito attacked, presumably everyone was shooting at it, and there is no source telling us that this particular sub was credited for the kill. Crum375 (talk) 00:10, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • It's not old at all. It became an article today. It does'nt matter how old the sandbox was. People do that all of the time. Further, I've fixed up the hook to make since.--White Shadows There goes another day 01:29, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Regarding eligibility, DYK only covers new articles. This one is from March, which is ancient in DYK terms. Here is the WP:DYKcheck report for it:
  • Prose size (text only): 2814 characters (482 words) "readable prose size"
  • Article created by White Shadows on March 20, 2010 as a redirect
  • Article became a non-redirect on March 28, 2010 by White Shadows
  • Article moved from User:White Shadows/Sandbox on June 30, 2010
  • Assuming article is at 5x now, expansion began 24 edits ago on March 28, 2010
  • Regarding the shootdown incident, I don't see where the source says that particular sub "helped" the shooting in any way. It was being moved, so likely it had partial crew, who relied on the escorts for protection. But speculation aside, we'd need a source telling us the sub actually helped the shootdown, in order to state it in the article. Crum375 (talk) 02:01, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Look the article was a sondbox for a few months. This does not "disqualify" it at all. I've had several DYK's like this one. As for the sourceing, I'll get to that tomorrow...--White Shadows There goes another day 03:09, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Look at the article history. The article existed in March. One month ago. This is the edit just prior to your move [4]. The article today is almost exactly the same as it was a month ago [5].--Brianann MacAmhlaidh (talk) 07:57, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Regarding the date, the article was moved into mainspace on the 30th. That is when the clock starts for DYK, so White Shadows had 5 days from then to nominate it, which he's done (see WP:DYK#Selection criteria, third bullet point under "new"). The length checks out, I haven't checked the hook yet. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 09:26, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

HJM, I believe you are wrong. The rule you refer to is (bold added) "Articles that have been worked on exclusively in a user or user talk subpage and then moved..." IOW, you may not take an existing article and move it into your user space to reset the clock and make it "new", unless you are expanding it, in which case normal 5x expansion rules apply. In this case the article already existed in article space in March 2010, so it is ineligible for a "new" (non-expanded) DYK under the present rules. Crum375 (talk) 12:01, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • That diff was from my sandbox. The clock starts ticking when it is moved out and into the mainspace, which I did yesterday. The length is also good and despite what you say, so it the hook. Can I request another reviewer to come along and take a look at this please?--White Shadows There goes another day 16:01, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

← Here's a more detailed explanation of the file's history. User:White Shadows/Sandbox was previously used to develop an article about a different submarine, the U-771. That page was moved into article space in March, leaving behind a redirect to that article in the sandbox. The same sandbox was then used to write this article, which was moved into article space yesterday. The article was worked on exclusively in the user's sandbox prior to being moved. The date is fine. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 16:56, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Here is a prior version of this article from March 2010, in article space, which seems similar to the current version in size and content. How does subsequent work on it in user space make it "new"? Crum375 (talk) 18:08, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
When a page is moved, the page history comes with it. That history is from the userspace version. ErinM (talk) 18:36, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Indeed. You'll also notice that the page was moved to mainspace, as opposed to cut and pasted, which means that the page can't have existed prior because WS isn't an admin and only admins can move existing ages over each other. The only way it could have existed in mainspace before the move would require a deletion and history undelete, of which there is no evidence in the log. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 18:49, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This is the edit where the original redirect was removed. So if the subsequent edit was in the user's sandbox, what happened to the user space version of the article at that time? Did it remain an empty page for months? I don't see any record of its being moved. Crum375 (talk) 19:25, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Yes it did. It's called a sandbox for a reason....--White Shadows There goes another day 19:34, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
And Crum, what it this all about? Are you testing to see if I'm telling the truth or something? I'm not an admin so I cannot delete or move anything without leaveing a redirect. That's why it was empty for two months.--White Shadows There goes another day 19:37, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It's obvious from the diff that a page in WS' userspace was moved to mainspace (this was the article on a different submarine, which only serves to complicate things) but as I explained above, the article didn't exist in mainspace until yesterday, when WS moved it from his userspace to mainspace and, as I explained above, it's impossible that a page existed at that title before the move. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 19:38, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

HJM, I specifically looked for a move in his user log, and didn't find any, so clearly he didn't move it there. And in fact, he says he believes that the page had been left empty in article space, after the redirect was removed. (I wonder why a bot doesn't flag empty article-space pages like that.) I guess this would explain why WP:DYKcheck rejects it. White Shadows, I'll AGF that you did start a "new" article (since an empty page or redirect doesn't count in my view too) in user space at that time. In that case, let's focus on the hook again. It seems that sub was being taken somewhere for repositioning or service at the time, along with another sub, with an escort of other ships. Do you have a source telling us that the sub "participated" or "helped" in the shootdown, e.g. by firing a single round at the Mosquito? Crum375 (talk) 19:46, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

No you are putting words into my mouth. I said that it was left as a blank sandbox (little thing that 90% of content writers have, not a real article)and it was moved. I did it for crying out loud!--White Shadows There goes another day 19:52, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK, sorry for being dense then. So this edit, removing the redirect, was inside your user space? Crum375 (talk) 19:57, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No problem. And to answer your question, yes it was. As for the hook, how about ... that U-1163 was attacked by two de Havilland Mosquitos and managed to survive undamaged?--White Shadows There goes another day 20:05, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK, that explains it, then. It seems to me that to prevent confusion next time (not just mine but also DYKcheck's), it would be better to just copy-paste the content from the sandbox to mainspace. And regarding the new hook, yes, that's well sourced, but very un-hookish, as you are not even telling them it was on the surface at the time. Can you come up with something hookier, maybe unrelated to the Mosquito? Crum375 (talk) 20:16, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
And maybe without the red link in it! ;) HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 20:29, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'm kinda against copy-and-pasteing the article into the mainspace as that would mean that alot of my edits would be in my userspace....But as for the hook... that the last patrol that U-1163 took part in began on 15 April 1945, just 15 days before Adolf Hitler commited suicide?--White Shadows There goes another day 00:39, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Mentioning Hitler and/or his suicide in relation to this sub would require a reliable source which makes that specific connection, or else it would violate WP:SYN. It seems to me this sub was not very notable, and its only claim to fame is that it sunk one ship. Perhaps there is something of note with that ship? Crum375 (talk) 01:26, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

How is that OR? I once had a sub DYK with a hook that said that it was commissioned the day of the Normady landings. Is that OR? I doubt that counting to 15 should fall under WP:SYN.--White Shadows There goes another day 02:38, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Making a point by combining information from separate sources requires a reliable source making that combined point in relation to the article topic, or else it would violate WP:SYN and WP:NOR. Crum375 (talk) 03:12, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Also, I started looking for information about the sunk ship, the only claim to fame of this sub. I found the article makes a total mess of it at the moment, which needs to be fixed. The article says the kill was a submarine, while in fact it was a steam merchant ship, disabled and dead in the water due to engine trouble. And the article says the "sub's" name was KB-35, while according to the source KB-35 was the name of the convoy, which had no subs in it, and which split up after the ship became disabled, leaving only one mine sweeper to watch over her. The steam ship's actual name was Revoljucija (Revolution), as you can see here. Unfortunately, I haven't found any good hook yet. Crum375 (talk) 03:39, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've fixed that.--White Shadows There goes another day 16:58, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I added some more details and the ref, but we still need some catchy hook. Crum375 (talk) 18:00, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
How about something about the fact that all 4 of her war patrols took place from Norwegian ports? All of her patrols were in the arctic....--White Shadows There goes another day 19:06, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Do we know how common or uncommon that was? Maybe some other U-boats did the same? Crum375 (talk) 19:56, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

How about this bold hook:

If you create a stub for the ship, you can wikilink to it. Crum375 (talk) 20:28, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'm on it. That sound like a funny april fools joke but should be good, bound to get a few viewers.--White Shadows There goes another day 20:54, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done. It's also long enough to be a DYK hook as well, now this nom is a double hook.--White Shadows There goes another day 21:27, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Date, lengths, hook ref verified. Good job on the ship! Crum375 (talk) 21:40, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ælfwaru

Created by Senra (talk). Self nom at 18:59, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Article is too short at present at 1043 characters of prose, when the minimum is 1500. Can you expand it some more? BencherliteTalk 19:04, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
on the case --Senra (talk) 19:06, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
not sure how you measure length. I have added prose, with relevant references of course. If that is not ok, I wish to withdraw this to work on it some more. --Senra (talk) 19:56, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
worked it out - Dr pda says my page size is 1605 now --Senra (talk) 20:30, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I love Old English names. Maybe you could add a sentence or two on her name: the OE elements it is composed of, and what they mean. That'll add a couple more characters into the body of the article.--Brianann MacAmhlaidh (talk) 08:05, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Struggling on etymology of Ælfwaru. Best I can do is affix Ælf = elf- strong masculineOED and suffix = -ware lit. people of the god.OED I am not an OE scholar so this may be rubbish. Not prepared to put this in until it is checked. I am on the case, though I might have diffuclty here. Still trying. --Senra (talk) 09:50, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Still struggling. In Old English originally a strong feminine (-stem) -waru (plural -wara) meaning Forming the names of inhabitants of places.OED. Thus poss. Elven-inhabitant? --Senra (talk) 10:22, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Etymology section added thanks to Reference desk:Etymology of Ælfwaru so  Done? --Senra (talk) 12:21, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Not to be a wet blanket, but I find the etymology section inappropriate. This article is about a specific woman named Ælfwaru; the information in the article should be about her. If we had an article Ælfwaru (name), that would be the place for etymology. Is there nothing more that can be said about the good lady herself? +Angr 13:06, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Etymology removed. There are other people called Ælfwaru, as the name, and its variants, were a popular Anglo-Saxon female name. The one we are discussing is definitely the one whose cryograph was mentioned in Liber Elientsis. The fisheries mentioned there link our Ælfwaru with the Ælfwaru mentioned in Liber Benefactorum, and thus give us her fathers name. Her father bequeathed a fishery in his cryograph. I checked sources carefully. I am convinced the two Ælfwaru's can be linked. If we cannot link them, we have even less to write. Not sure I want to go into conjecture, so I think the article says as much as we can about her. I went round wikilinking other places in wikipedia where Ælfwaru is mentioned. There is not a lot to be frank. Do you want me to withdraw the article for DYK? Not a problem if you do. (It would be a problem if you wanted me to delete the article after all this work though :) ) --Senra (talk) 13:34, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
(as a pure aside) geese and chase spring to mind re etymology but no worries as I learned some things *smiles sweetly* --Senra (talk) 13:41, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Had a crack and trying to get a concensus. Put derivation of her name back in but as a legacy; not as a pure etymolgy section in its own right.  Done --Senra (talk) 13:51, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Is the article still too short? It currently reports as: Prose size (text only): 1786 B (276 words) "readable prose size" --Senra (talk) 14:56, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Article is Prose size (text only): 1887 B (294 words) "readable prose size" --Senra (talk) 22:12, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Alt-hook - "... that the name of the village of Alverstoke, in Hampshire, England, derives from the name Ælfwaru plus OE stoc" --Senra (talk) 07:47, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The problem with this hook - indeed, the problem with even mentioning this fact in the article - is that it's unrelated to the good lady in question. BencherliteTalk 08:39, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK, alt-hook withdrawn and Ælfwaru modified to exclude reference in article to Alverstoke. I still feel that Ælfwaru leaves a legacy in her name; however, if you disagree, I will pull that too --Senra (talk) 11:12, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I am now unsure what, if anything, I need to do with this hook and or article. Any advice would be welcome --Senra (talk) 13:55, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Clemens von Delbrück

An elderly, balding man sits facing the left, with his right hand gripping his overcoat

Created/expanded by Claritas (talk). Nominated by Claritas (talk) at 19:24, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]



Brothers TV

  • ... that Canadian TV series Brothers TV was described as "lowbrow comedic stuff that is ever-so-watchable" but only ran for eight episodes?

Created by Joshrimer (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 18:06, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William O'Neill (Medal of Honor recipient)

Created by 72.74.211.107 (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 17:45, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William L. Taylor

  • ... that officials at Brooklyn College implored federal officials not to hire William L. Taylor for a government job, saying he had "espoused liberal causes such as the rights of the Negro in the South"?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 15:19, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Expansion date, lengths, hook ref verified. Please try to get more sources; a single-source article looks ugly and incomplete. Crum375 (talk) 01:09, 1 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bam Aquino

  • ... that Bam Aquino became the youngest person in Philippine history to head a government agency when he was appointed at age 26 to become Chairman of the National Youth Commission?

Created by Joaquin008 (talk). Self nom at 12:35, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Intercessors of the Lamb

Created by Alekjds (talk). Self nom at 06:20, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length, date, and ref verified.-- φ OnePt618Talk φ 06:30, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Diego's Hair Salon

The entrance and window of a hair salon, as seen from the street

Created by AgnosticPreachersKid (talk). Nominated by AgnosticPreachersKid (talk) at 06:02, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook, and source verified. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 22:10, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Vertical Submarine

  • ... that art collective Vertical Submarine, winners of President’s Young Talents award 2009, placed gray sunflowers in the Botanic Gardens with a poem by the fictional Chien Swee-Teng?

Created by Tja ariani (talk). Nominated by Chzz (talk) at 02:35, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, lengths, hook ref verified. Crum375 (talk) 03:20, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • The artikle contains now several tags.--Stone (talk) 21:33, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Not any more; someone added spammy content, but it has now been restored to neutrality. Chzz  ►  22:50, 5 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Benjamin Sonnenberg

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 03:56, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length, date verified. Ref accepted AGF.-- φ OnePt618Talk φ 06:11, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 29

John O'Callaghan (Medal of Honor recipient), Michael O'Regan (Medal of Honor recipient)

Created by 72.74.211.107 (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 22:48, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1973 Oklahoma Sooners football team, 1976 Oklahoma Sooners football team, 1977 Oklahoma Sooners football team, 1978 Oklahoma Sooners football team, 1979 Oklahoma Sooners football team, 1980 Oklahoma Sooners football team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 05:06, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Special occasion holding area

Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools' Day 2011 - see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.

10 July, astronomical event

Hermann Goldschmidt

5x expanded by Stone (talk). Nominated by Stone (talk) at 22:22, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This would be a good DYK for July 10! --Stone (talk) 22:24, 2 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Date, length, fact verified. Please promote for 10 July. Materialscientist (talk) 23:33, 4 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


11 July, sixth Sunday after Trinity

Julia Hamari

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 20:37, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

See also