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#<s>Refs come after punctuation, not before; and there is no space between the ref and the punctuation</s> |
#<s>Refs come after punctuation, not before; and there is no space between the ref and the punctuation</s> |
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#:Issue has been addressed [[User:Alimosser61|Alimosser61]] ([[User talk:Alimosser61|talk]]) 19:08, 2 December 2011 (UTC) |
#:Issue has been addressed [[User:Alimosser61|Alimosser61]] ([[User talk:Alimosser61|talk]]) 19:08, 2 December 2011 (UTC) |
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#One ref link is broken |
#<s>One ref link is broken</s> |
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#:Issue addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 04:40, 4 December 2011 (UTC) |
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#<s>The Italian image needs a source and how do we know it's not copyrighted? It's from IKEA.</s> |
#<s>The Italian image needs a source and how do we know it's not copyrighted? It's from IKEA.</s> |
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#:Issue addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 02:08, 1 December 2011 (UTC) |
#:Issue addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 02:08, 1 December 2011 (UTC) |
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#The Kellog's image says some rights reserved on Flickr. How do we know it's not copyrighted? |
#<s>The Kellog's image says some rights reserved on Flickr. How do we know it's not copyrighted?</s> |
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#:Issue Addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 05:43, 4 December 2011 (UTC) |
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#A proper lead is a summary. It will need few if any refs |
#<s>A proper lead is a summary. It will need few if any refs</s> |
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#:Issue addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 04:13, 4 December 2011 (UTC) |
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#<s>See also should be in alphabetical order</s> |
#<s>See also should be in alphabetical order</s> |
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#:Issue addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 02:08, 1 December 2011 (UTC) |
#:Issue addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 02:08, 1 December 2011 (UTC) |
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#Refs that are web sites should have the "accessdate=" parameter and those that are PDFs should have "format=PDF". Ensure you keep date format consistent through the article and refs |
#<s>Refs that are web sites should have the "accessdate=" parameter and those that are PDFs should have "format=PDF". Ensure you keep date format consistent through the article and refs</s> |
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#:Issue addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 04:10, 4 December 2011 (UTC) |
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#Some refs are missing publishers. Web refs should at a minimum have url, publisher, title, accessdate. |
#<s>Some refs are missing publishers. Web refs should at a minimum have url, publisher, title, accessdate.</s> |
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#:Issue addressed by group [[User:Pittsoc25|Pittsoc25]] ([[User talk:Pittsoc25|talk]]) 04:55, 4 December 2011 (UTC) |
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#Run the three tools in the upper right toolbox on this page and fix the issues |
#Run the three tools in the upper right toolbox on this page and fix the issues |
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::[[User:PumpkinSky|<font color="darkorange">Pumpkin</font><font color="darkblue">Sky</font>]] [[User talk:PumpkinSky|<font color="darkorange">talk</font>]] 20:45, 25 November 2011 (UTC) |
::[[User:PumpkinSky|<font color="darkorange">Pumpkin</font><font color="darkblue">Sky</font>]] [[User talk:PumpkinSky|<font color="darkorange">talk</font>]] 20:45, 25 November 2011 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: PumpkinSky (talk · contribs) 20:45, 25 November 2011 (UTC) Initial quick review:
- Deal with the tags at the top about world scope and links. The links one should be quick and easy
Refs come after punctuation, not before; and there is no space between the ref and the punctuation- Issue has been addressed Alimosser61 (talk) 19:08, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
One ref link is brokenThe Italian image needs a source and how do we know it's not copyrighted? It's from IKEA.The Kellog's image says some rights reserved on Flickr. How do we know it's not copyrighted?A proper lead is a summary. It will need few if any refsSee also should be in alphabetical orderRefs that are web sites should have the "accessdate=" parameter and those that are PDFs should have "format=PDF". Ensure you keep date format consistent through the article and refsSome refs are missing publishers. Web refs should at a minimum have url, publisher, title, accessdate.- Run the three tools in the upper right toolbox on this page and fix the issues
- PumpkinSky talk 20:45, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
- When done with the above, we'll look at content. PumpkinSky talk 15:42, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
- PumpkinSky talk 20:45, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for agreeing to review this article. We will address these issues as soon as possible.
Alimosser61 (talk) 21:05, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for reviewing 'Family in Marriage'. We appreciate your input.